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"A day in the life of....."; Grendels first rp since leaving WARPED
Topic Started: Jun 5 2012, 02:34 PM (231 Views)
HugoStrange
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Hey gang this is my first rp with T.G.Grundy/Grendel since leaving WARPEDwould like a little feed back on it

“A day in the life of…….”
Rp 1

Grundy watches the main event of the Pay –per-view from the back as Stefan’s hand is raised in victory Grundy smiles and claps and starts to walk out of the building. As Grundy is heading out of the building he is stopped and given a piece of paper Grundy looks door at it and smiles and the folds it and slides it in to his pocket. Grundy makes his way through the building have small talk with workers and officials of the ECCWF as he gets to the parking lot where his rental car is. Grundy gets to the car loads it up and then drivers to the airport where he unloads the car, and makes his way through the seemingly endless lines and checkpoints of the airport. Finally making it to his gate just as the start boarding Grundy thinks to himself “perfect timing” and hands the nice old lady his ticket and goes on to board the plane. The small interior of the plane offers Grundy no comfort at as he squeezes his way through the small aisle to his seat. Grundy looks at the seat and sighs and then sits down in the seat a stewardess comes and asks him if he would like a drink and Grundy nods and asks for a scotch on the rocks. Drink in hand as the plane starts to move and then it is barreling down the runway, and climbing up into the sky. Grundy looks out the window and takes a drink from his glass as the city of Tacoma disappears in the night sky as the plane takes Grundy far away from there.

In the wee mornings hours the plane comes out of the sky and touches down and Grundy opens his eyes and then looks at his watch notices the time and sighs again. The plane comes to a stop and the stewardess starts to let people off the plane, and again Grundy makes his way down the small aisle and out the of the plane the mass of half awake Grundy makes his way to the luggage claim. Bags and suitcases spin around and around on the moving belt of the luggage claim as Grundy waits for his bags to appear sighing again, and then finally his bags appear and Grundy grabs them and heads to the car rental place. Grundy walks to a silver 2012 charger that is sitting there and waiting for him. As he reaches the car the sky above opens up and rains starts to spill from the sky Grundy looks up and lets the rain hit him in the face before he gets in the car and drives to the hotel. Grundy fights through morning traffic and makes it to his hotel, and he walks up to the front desk and gives them his name and they hand him a key and he quickly makes his way to his room. Once in his room Grundy tosses his bags on to the bed and then sits down at the table and looks out the window at the city. He wonders how many cities have he seen so far this year alone, but he knows this is the life he has picked and would not have it any other way.
Grundy pulls out his cell phone and taps the screen which comes to life and pulls up the number for Jade and hits call button. The rings and rings and rings then a females voice fills his ears and for the first time Grundy smiles.

Grundy:I hope I didn’t wake you up?

Jade:No somebody else wake me up an hour ago because they were hungry.

Grundy:Oh…..How is he?

Jade:He is good he misses his daddy, but he is good.

Grundy:Did I make the right choice leaving WARPED.

Jade:Yes you did.

Grundy:I don’t know I am on the road so much more and away from you two and it just feels wrong at least with WARPED I was home more.

Jade:Look the money your making now has set us up for a long time, and we will make this work we both knew going into this what it would be like. Tommy you are doing the right thing and everything will work out plus Joey and Pat knew you would get offers and they both knew that at some point you were going to leave. Look this you’re shot to get what those guys got and make a name for yourself. Honey you are not in the indy scene anymore you made to the big time, and I am proud of you and Dad would have been proud of you too.

Grundy goes quite and smiles again.

Grundy:Thank you.

Jade:Your welcome now go get some rest and I will be watching.

Grundy hits a button on his phone and sets it on the table and then turns out the light and lies down on the bed. A while later the alarm goes off and Grundy gets up open his bag pulls some cloths out and goes to the bath room the sound of running water can be heard from behind the closed door. Grundy comes out of the bath room wearing a pair of mesh shorts and an underarmor shirt and leaves the room and goes down to the gym that is in the hotel he is staying at starts to work out.

Grundy finishes up his work out and goes over to the bare and asks for water at the bar tender hands him one and walks away. Grundy scans the bar and notices a very attractive blonde staring at him Grundy sighs and quickly looks away and looks at his bottle of water. The blonde makes her way over to him and sits next time making small talk Grundy nods and answers what questions she has and makes small talk back. The woman asks what he does for a leaving and Grundy tells her that he is a pro wrestler and he is in town for the show coming. The woman giggles and runs her hands across Grundy’s shoulders and makes a comment about how built his. Grundy smiles and nods and has a look of discomfort on his face Grundy quickly excuses himself as the woman leans in and whispers in his ear ”wanna fuck me in the ass?” as she slides her number and room number to him on a napkin. Grundy tells he is married and quickly makes his way to the elevator where he looks down and notices the he is holding the napkin and thinks nobody would know and he has been lonely. The doors open on his floor and he drops the napkin to the floor and walks to his room and opens the door and enters his room.

Grundy walks over and sets up a camera and sits in the same chair overlooking the city and pours a small bottle of jack in to a glass with some ice in it. As the camera comes to life and Grundy is staring right in to the camera.

Grundy:Some in the 24 hours I make my mark on the world of ECCWF have my first match and I can’t wait. I have been waiting for this moment to get here in my career for a while and almost thought I would never make it out of the indy scene, but here I am and I am ready to go. Now I think the ECCWF is a great place but there is a problem here and that is this cancer that is happening with Crow and this Lucien guy. Look I am not into this whole angel and demons bullshit and I plan on being the hard force of reality in ECCWF you see all the little magic tricks and two bit hack tricks you can take all of those and ram them up your asses. See I am a man plan and simple and I fight for a living I don’t judge and I don’t care what others think. See I know my past is not without its own ghost and skeletons, and that I could be a villain as much as I could be a good guy. I know I walk a thin line and I know that I have been known to switch sides with a drop of a hat, but this time I don’t know I guess the ECCWF deserve a better class of bad guy and I am going to give it to them, but I need get rid of these posers The Damned first. See this is pro wrestling not the theater, this is pro wrestling not the opera and I have grown tired of seeing this over dramatic emo bullshit that fellow pro wrestlers are putting off and it starts with my opponent Mr. Sycho.

So here we have the king psycho himself I guess the most dangerous man in the ECCWF now the man that is going to rule the ECCWF, well Sycho please do us all a favor and shut the FUCK UP! Look your promo is just like every other person that has the crazy character gimmick and you using the same line from the movie and the comic book aren’t there laws against that stuff. Look at you all you are is a giant retard that never got hugged as a kid, hell man sloth from the Goonies has personality then you do. As I watched your promo the other night I actually fell asleep doing it twice, why because it is the same old song and dance. I would not be surprised if that was just your stock promo you use every time you enter a new fed, because I hear that promo at least three to four times a day. Look I get your big, strong and you can throw a chair against wall with the best of them good job bozo, but can you fight I don’t think you can. See I listened to what you said and I learned that you have been stabbed and set on fire and you like to hurt people. Well let me tell you a little bit about myself I have spent four months in jail for assault on a 16 year old girl and her family, I have tried to set a fellow wrestler on fire and broke that same wrestlers neck. I too have made people bleed and I too have put people out of this great world, but here is the kicker Ronald none of that shit matters because it was in the past.

You say you don’t need to trash talk me fine don’t over look me hell look past me, because it is always the train you don’t see that kills you. I have never claimed to be a bad ass because I know I am, oh and I am not looking past you I am staring straight at you and I want to break you. You Sycho, is what makes me sick about this business you think just because you smear a little paint on your face that makes you a monster the way I see it you’re not ever close to being the monster that I am or was. I plan on making a statement at unglued and that statement is don’t over look me and you just did I thank you for that. Claim all you want about how strong and tough you cause in day I am going to show the world what kind of fraud you are. So Sycho put on your make up and wear your fancy suit and hell bring all of your little boyfriends too I don’t care cause I beat all their asses I don’t care win or lose I am making you bleed and you won’t forget my name ,and you will never over look me again. Oh Sycho here is a little tip for you just because your parents committed suicide because you where their son doesn’t make it murder it is just their way of saying what they thought of you. After Wednesday you and everybody else on the ECCWF rooster will just who is THAT GUY GRUNDY!

You would want me not to show up wouldn’t you, you would like for me not to be scared of you well it is not going to happen. Sycho there is nothing about you that scares me you just another wanna be crazy guy. Yes granted you hit every right word everybody else uses in the standard crazy guy gimmick, but what makes you special. See I am trying to find something that sets you off, trying to find something that makes you different, but you just like everybody else man and that is sad. When I found out I was facing I was excited here I was thinking man this going to be a challenge a real fight. Then you shit that promo and I was pissed I was pissed you even opened your mouth. I am sorry Sycho clowns never really scared me, and you sure as hell are not even close to scaring me. You claim to be crazy and you might be I think you just want attention, but I will tell you what is crazy leaving a beautiful wife and your new born son to fly to away city and get in the ring with an idiot that read to many bat man comics when he was a kid. You wanna know what crazy is, well it living out of a suit case 265 days a year that is crazy, not painting your face up as clown. Sycho you have really pissed me off I have been busting my ass for two years and for you to think you are going to come in here and roll over me is a huge mistake on your part. You claim to be a monster well let’s see because I am calling your bluff, Sycho see you Wednesday and I hope you are ready for a ass beating because I am going ruin you debut cause I can and I will.


Grundy leans over and turns off the camera and goes to looking out the window.

Edited by HugoStrange, Jun 5 2012, 02:36 PM.
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Wow. This might be one of your best roleplays ever as far as content goes. Great job, dude. I didn't know you were still handling this character. One thing you really need to work on, though, is sentence structure. You've got so many run-on sentences that it really, for me at least, partially takes away from the goodness of the roleplay. So, if you can fix that, this is pretty damn good man. I'd also say maybe near the end where all he does is talk for 4 long paragraphs, toss in a couple descriptive lines here and there. But overall, pretty good!
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Thanks, kind of rebuilding him and carrying on his story hope you dont mind me using warped and PKA and Joey
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Using? All you did was mention us.
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Well name drop I guess but it was ok right
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Of course. It's part of his past.
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