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| John Pariah | Jun 1 2012, 09:15 PM Post #1 |
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Can I get some feedback on my latest RP? |
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| Starr | Jun 1 2012, 09:36 PM Post #2 |
Everybody knows I'm a motherfuckin' monster!
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Ah yes, Pro X, a community I'm all too familiar with. =p I like the continuity that continues throughout most of your writings, I like how you always manage to tie it together, and I'll tell you, reading this line twice over, after reading the roleplay twice and having it stand out both times; "I will start the match by shaking your hand-and after I make you tap out, I will help you back to your feet and shake it again-because I know we will TEAR the house apart." Impressed is an understatement. Looking forward to working together in the future. |
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| John Pariah | Jun 1 2012, 11:56 PM Post #3 |
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ah yes, i remember your cup of coffee in PWX as well. fun times. Thanks Starr. Any reason why that line in particular stands out? |
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| Starr | Jun 6 2012, 03:30 PM Post #4 |
Everybody knows I'm a motherfuckin' monster!
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It stands out because it's not too often that someone can write with that level of intensity and keep it colorful. Generally when people get intense in their writings, and I'm guilty of this myself, they tend to go off on tangents of dirty jokes and insults. That line though was an intense and insult free way of drilling home a point. |
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