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Rotten Zombie Mutation Disease
Topic Started: Oct 15 2008, 02:37 AM (244 Views)
MAD
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Some please help me? I wanna make shure I'm going the right direction.

Recorded Track Of Page 1 -

http://rapidshare.com/files/154119601/zmcraptake.wma.html

Sheet Music V.1
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Sheet Music V.2
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Anybody got any suggestions on power chords? Scales? Song Structure?

Bonus: Tell me how much my lyrics suck!

Rotting eyes and faces staring through the gaps in the barricade,
The dead are rising again, from thier graves they walk,
To search for life in a dead world,
To eat the living, once more.

Hunting for prey,
In thier graves they won't lay,

Clawing through the window,
Pale blue skin, and empty eyes,

Moaning for more,
Shambling across the land,

Millions of souls on the edge,
They only hold onto the ledge.

Searching for flesh,
Drinking Blood,

Burning flesh,
Strange lesions,
The dead have risen again.
Edited by MAD, Oct 15 2008, 05:18 AM.
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Gr1m.
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MAD
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why'd you edit your answer?
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It was a lot of word vomit and I didn't agree with some of what I said.
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MAD
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But does this song suck balls?
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I didn't yet really check out the music, but the lyrics are br00tal and the song title is killer.
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Wow. Never thought I'd see "shambling" used to a good extent in a thrash song. Good job. I'd work a little more on some of the lyrics in trying to make them flow more seamlessly with less breaks, try rearranging the line, try changing words to synonyms that will fit better, etc. Overall most of it is really good. Haven't checked out the music but I will try to this weekend, but I've got work starting in a little bit so I gotta get ready. Good job MAD!
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