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| MAD | Oct 15 2008, 02:37 AM Post #1 |
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Some please help me? I wanna make shure I'm going the right direction. Recorded Track Of Page 1 - http://rapidshare.com/files/154119601/zmcraptake.wma.html Sheet Music V.1 Posted Image Posted Image Sheet Music V.2 Posted Image Posted Image Anybody got any suggestions on power chords? Scales? Song Structure? Bonus: Tell me how much my lyrics suck! Rotting eyes and faces staring through the gaps in the barricade, The dead are rising again, from thier graves they walk, To search for life in a dead world, To eat the living, once more. Hunting for prey, In thier graves they won't lay, Clawing through the window, Pale blue skin, and empty eyes, Moaning for more, Shambling across the land, Millions of souls on the edge, They only hold onto the ledge. Searching for flesh, Drinking Blood, Burning flesh, Strange lesions, The dead have risen again. Edited by MAD, Oct 15 2008, 05:18 AM.
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| Vermintide | Oct 15 2008, 10:57 AM Post #2 |
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Adminiskaven
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Gr1m. |
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| MAD | Oct 15 2008, 06:37 PM Post #3 |
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why'd you edit your answer? |
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| Vermintide | Oct 19 2008, 08:15 PM Post #4 |
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Adminiskaven
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It was a lot of word vomit and I didn't agree with some of what I said. |
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| MAD | Oct 19 2008, 08:41 PM Post #5 |
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But does this song suck balls? |
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| Read_My_Licks | Oct 21 2008, 09:09 PM Post #6 |
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I didn't yet really check out the music, but the lyrics are br00tal and the song title is killer. |
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| bootyguard | Oct 24 2008, 05:04 PM Post #7 |
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Wow. Never thought I'd see "shambling" used to a good extent in a thrash song. Good job. I'd work a little more on some of the lyrics in trying to make them flow more seamlessly with less breaks, try rearranging the line, try changing words to synonyms that will fit better, etc. Overall most of it is really good. Haven't checked out the music but I will try to this weekend, but I've got work starting in a little bit so I gotta get ready. Good job MAD! |
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