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| Poem/Song thing i wrote a long time ago.; Death | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: Jan 24 2009, 02:47 AM (186 Views) | |
| ...And Justice For None | Jan 24 2009, 02:47 AM Post #1 |
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BlackenedGrindThrashDeathDoom
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I wrote this along time ago. I can't even get a broad area of when I wrote it. It is probably shit. But oh well. I want criticism. No title, but It explains what I think and hope death will be like. Its gone silent, gone dark All feeling has been lost I lay, so cold In the frozen abyss that is death I cannot breathe, yet I remain alive Frozen in solitude A hierarchy of pain Yet I find solace... Away from the warmth that is hell This frozen wasteland that is nothing Greets me, Welcomes me Makes me once again feel alive Within each moment of eternity...time goes slower Everything has grown so cold Though I am alone, the reaper...he welcomes me In the frozen abyss that is death... I have never edited it once, so i dunno what is grammatically or whatever incorrect. Meh. And if your wondering...my favorite Genre is Depressive black metal |
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| First Blood | Feb 23 2009, 08:17 AM Post #2 |
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Poems are for fags. |
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| KE3user | Mar 8 2009, 11:34 PM Post #3 |
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Umm... How do you think songs are written? :huh: I like it by the way |
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| Read_My_Licks | Mar 9 2009, 09:37 PM Post #4 |
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I mostly write my lyrics not as poems, but simply as lyrics that are supposed to fit the riffs. Although sometimes when I get some great line in my head, I may start writing it without the music. Then again I guess a poem and lyrics for a song don't have much different. I mean the lyrics basically are a poem, right? |
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| John Paul Jones | Mar 11 2009, 12:52 AM Post #5 |
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I always find it much easier to write the music then add lyrics later. |
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| KE3user | Mar 12 2009, 04:11 AM Post #6 |
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In my opinion lyrics are just poems sung to a tune and rhythm. |
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