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Poem/Song thing i wrote a long time ago.; Death
Topic Started: Jan 24 2009, 02:47 AM (186 Views)
...And Justice For None
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BlackenedGrindThrashDeathDoom
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I wrote this along time ago. I can't even get a broad area of when I wrote it. It is probably shit. But oh well. I want criticism. No title, but It explains what I think and hope death will be like.


Its gone silent, gone dark
All feeling has been lost
I lay, so cold
In the frozen abyss that is death

I cannot breathe, yet I remain alive
Frozen in solitude
A hierarchy of pain
Yet I find solace...

Away from the warmth that is hell
This frozen wasteland that is nothing
Greets me, Welcomes me
Makes me once again feel alive

Within each moment of eternity...time goes slower
Everything has grown so cold
Though I am alone, the reaper...he welcomes me
In the frozen abyss that is death...


I have never edited it once, so i dunno what is grammatically or whatever incorrect.

Meh.

And if your wondering...my favorite Genre is Depressive black metal
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First Blood
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Poems are for fags.
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KE3user
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Feb 23 2009, 08:17 AM
Poems are for fags.
Umm... How do you think songs are written? :huh:

I like it by the way
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Mar 8 2009, 11:34 PM
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Feb 23 2009, 08:17 AM
Poems are for fags.
Umm... How do you think songs are written? :huh:

I like it by the way
I mostly write my lyrics not as poems, but simply as lyrics that are supposed to fit the riffs. Although sometimes when I get some great line in my head, I may start writing it without the music. Then again I guess a poem and lyrics for a song don't have much different. I mean the lyrics basically are a poem, right?
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John Paul Jones
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I always find it much easier to write the music then add lyrics later.
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KE3user
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Mar 9 2009, 09:37 PM
KE3user
Mar 8 2009, 11:34 PM
First Blood
Feb 23 2009, 08:17 AM
Poems are for fags.
Umm... How do you think songs are written? :huh:

I like it by the way
I mostly write my lyrics not as poems, but simply as lyrics that are supposed to fit the riffs. Although sometimes when I get some great line in my head, I may start writing it without the music. Then again I guess a poem and lyrics for a song don't have much different. I mean the lyrics basically are a poem, right?
In my opinion lyrics are just poems sung to a tune and rhythm.
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