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My first song. (New one); I made my second song :)
Topic Started: August 12, 2008, 10:49 pm (220 Views)
John-GmMkr	August 12, 2008, 10:49 pm Post #1
Posts: 21 Group: Members Member #3 Joined: August 2, 2008	I made this with fruity loops. It's a first so be gentle. Here: http://willhostforfood.com/files2/8267610/Simple%20Times.mp3 I made another: http://willhostforfood.com/files2/8372827/E%20Sounds.mp3 Be gentle it's my second. I got into it. Edited by John-GmMkr, August 13, 2008, 7:02 pm.



SoulRed12	August 13, 2008, 12:43 am Post #2
Da Admin Posts: 87 Group: Admins Member #1 Joined: June 29, 2008 Instrument Piano	Nice, simple, clean and effective. I like how you take the drums out on some parts and then restart them later. This song almost reminds me of something that should be in the video game Ape Escape (video game), if you happened to have played it. Very environmental-sounding. Good job. Also - moved to music announcements forum.



John-GmMkr	August 13, 2008, 1:12 am Post #3
Posts: 21 Group: Members Member #3 Joined: August 2, 2008	Oops, I put it in the wrong one. Thanks for the comment!



The Smooth	August 13, 2008, 2:05 am Post #4
Posts: 25 Group: Members Member #5 Joined: August 2, 2008	simple nice great I can't believe this is your first song



John-GmMkr	August 13, 2008, 4:09 pm Post #5
Posts: 21 Group: Members Member #3 Joined: August 2, 2008	Thanks. Honestly I feel like this is a one time thing. I have no creativity for music. I start making something and then I stop and scrap it.



SoulRed12	August 13, 2008, 4:22 pm Post #6
Da Admin Posts: 87 Group: Admins Member #1 Joined: June 29, 2008 Instrument Piano	John-GmMkr August 13, 2008, 4:09 pm Thanks. Honestly I feel like this is a one time thing. I have no creativity for music. I start making something and then I stop and scrap it. You should try making another song, and see if having more than one inspires you to keep going. If it doesn't, then you could always try something else...



John-GmMkr	August 13, 2008, 7:03 pm Post #7
Posts: 21 Group: Members Member #3 Joined: August 2, 2008	Thanks SoulRed. I made a second song. Tell me what you think, it's posted up above.



SoulRed12	August 13, 2008, 7:34 pm Post #8
Da Admin Posts: 87 Group: Admins Member #1 Joined: June 29, 2008 Instrument Piano	Your second one is quite good as well. For you next one, you might try bringing the lead in a little earlier, but that's about it. Once again, a clean, simple yet effective song.



John-GmMkr	August 13, 2008, 7:37 pm Post #9
Posts: 21 Group: Members Member #3 Joined: August 2, 2008	Thanks



The Smooth	August 14, 2008, 2:14 am Post #10
Posts: 25 Group: Members Member #5 Joined: August 2, 2008	It's so good I can't actually believe it's your second song... I'm serious



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