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Schizophrenia; Feedback?
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Post #1 Jun 2 2009, 11:15 PM Project.Seeds
So I got banned from WC3 for running the Stealth Bot and Ghost Bot; It's not letting me on USEast; But everything else it does; So It must be temporary IP banned. (It's happened before) So with my free time I wrote some lyrics for my band; Tell me what you think and what should be changed or anything I could add!

These are just brainstormed onto Notepad and Pasted here; Not really organized yet; Just Lines :)

Please give feedback! :D

"Can't Keep Myself Within Reality;
Suffocating Sorrow. Cannot Find Tomorrow
Someone Save Me From This Hell; Schizophrenia.

Only A Lost Soul; Once Death Takes It's Toll

The Worlds of Life And Death Stand Not Far Between;
Hoping To Wake Up Finding It's All Just A Dream.
I've come Prepared for Reality; But Surprised by Insanity.

The Needle Eliminates The Pain; If Only It Could Make Me Sane

Breaking Mirrors, Killing Time; Insanity Is My Only Crime."



NEW FINAL VERSION

Can't Keep Myself Within Reality,
Suffocating sorrow. Cannot find tomorrow,
Hearing only voices in my head,
Seeing hallucinations of the dead,

Loss of rationality; not fit for any society,
Stuck within my Dementia; suffering from Dysphoria
Only a lost soul; once death takes it's toll!
Only a lost soul; once death takes it's toll!!

Schi-zo-phre-nia, Schi-zo-phre-nia, Schi-zo-phre-nia, Schi-zo-phre-nia!

Worlds of life and death aren’t far between;
Hoping to wake up and it's just a dream,
Paranoia’s got me in a bind,
Finally realizing I’ve lost my mind,

Loss of rationality; not fit for any society,
Stuck within my Dementia; suffering from Dysphoria
Only a lost soul; once death takes it's toll!
Only a lost soul; once death takes it's toll!!

Schi-zo-phre-nia, Schi-zo-phre-nia, Schi-zo-phre-nia, Schi-zo-phre-nia!


Breaking mirrors, killing time,
Killing is my only crime,
Strapped to a chair, this seems too rough
But I’ll be dead soon enough!


Schi-zo-phre-nia, Schi-zo-phre-nia, Schi-zo-phre-nia, Schi-zo-phre-nia!
Edited by Project.Seeds, Jun 3 2009, 01:12 PM.
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Post #2 Jun 2 2009, 11:27 PM Feather
Its cool... but I don't think I am getting the right beat/feel for it and its throwing me off.. xD
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Post #3 Jun 2 2009, 11:29 PM Fenrisulfr.
I guess it matches my tastes, only a little more depressing lyrics and you could call yourself a down-straight depressing band.
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Post #4 Jun 2 2009, 11:44 PM Project.Seeds
Edit : Added another line :P
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Post #5 Jun 3 2009, 12:00 AM Fenrisulfr.
Though, I guess my tastes would be either hated depression or heated digression.

Good lyrics, keep writing.
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Post #6 Jun 3 2009, 11:03 AM Grunt_of_War
I'm sure Akira and Taco would heavily appreciate something like this. I like it a lot, though.
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Post #7 Jun 3 2009, 11:18 AM Sgt. Tacoz
Maybe. >.>

Congrats though, .Seeds! Keep it up. >:3
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Post #8 Jun 3 2009, 11:27 AM AkiraAsphyxia
Me gusta. ^^
Those could turn into a very nice song.
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Post #9 Jun 3 2009, 01:13 PM Project.Seeds
Edited: Final version posted, Feedback?
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Post #10 Jun 3 2009, 01:17 PM Sgt. Tacoz
Bwahaha. >:3
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