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| SinGenesis | Jul 21 2014, 12:30 PM Post #1 |
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Character Name: Ryuuki Kagirinai. Gender: Boy. Age: 15. Height: Five foot six. Weight: One-hundred and twenty-seven pounds. Description or Image of Character Appearance: Human appearance. ![]() His past self, as a Dragon. ![]() Occupation: Student. Grade Level: 1st Year. Powers/Abilities: Past Self Summon. Ryuuki can summon a past version of his spirit to help him fight, as he is the spirit of a dragon chained in human form. He will generally call upon his dragon form when fighting, although his past self's memories are deleted of encountering it's future self to prevent corruption to the timeline. However, he can summon past versions of his human form so he can quite literally be in two places at once, he tends to use this for espionage, his true self will stay in class whilst the other spies on someone, however he can only hold his past Dragon self in his part of his timeline for 10 posts, before his other self returns to it's part in his timeline. He also cannot physically touch his other self, due to the fact that it would create a massive temporal paradox. His Dragon can only attack once per post. He can also only maintain 1 copy of his human self or his Dragon self at a time, he cannot have both at the same time, and there is a 10 post cooldown time between each summon as summoning his past selves is exhausting. All Summons will instantly end if Ryuuki is rendered unconscious, as the summons can only be maintained by Ryuuki's conscious mind due to their complexity. Dragon abilities: Sacred Strike: The dragon opens it's mouth and fires a golden ball of energy at the opponent, exploding and throwing the opponent back 6 meters, causing burn injuries from the blast that are considered second-degree half thickness burns. Radience Shield: The Dragon shines a very bright light around Ryuuki which protects him from melee attacks. This only lasts for one turn and the Dragon cannot then use Sacred Strike for 1 turn. The shield protects him from most melee attacks, however, enchanted swords and projectiles can break through the shield. Dragon size: He is 7 and a half meters long, 1 meter thick and 1 meter wide. He's shaped like a xiaolong and has a wingspan of 4 meters. He has strength equal to that of a human, he can also fly as fast as a human can sprint. He can summon a copy of his human self for 10 posts whilst fighting, 30 when he is not as his relative point in time which is far closer to the current Ryuuki than the dragon combined with his significantly decreased mass compared to the dragon is easier to summon and maintain. The current timeline Ryuuki retains the memories of his copy, but his copy does not remember being summoned or what he learnt, he is simply re-integrated into Ryuuki's timeline. Equipment You Have: A mobile phone, a Kindle, a Macbook and a watch. Residency Request: Yuki. Schedule: Homeroom Teacher: Hiro -Supernatural Studies -Science -History Personality Description: Ryuuki is a kind but proud person, his past as a Dragon hidden from his friends, he is confused by the 21st Century and it's customs, his spirit having come from many millenniums ago. The Dragon Spirit inhabiting him uses Ryuuki's memories to try and help him act more normal, however he does tend to overestimate his own strength, not used to his human body. He will help most people with their problems, and finds bullying abhorrent. He usually solves problems with violence, getting into fights frequently. He also is late for class, viewing it as boring and unnecessary, causing a lot of friction between him and teachers. He also is rather arrogant, reflecting his proud nature. He finds a lot of things in the world interesting, and generally is in the library, trying to find out more about the strange new world he was brought into. Personal History: The spirit that inhabits Ryuuki used to live as a Dragon, in about 5000 B.C. The dragon was the protector of a large town, and he was partnered with a human, his Tamer, the title passing from father to son. Together, they fought off numerous threats and enemies, until one day, the town was nearly wiped out by a catastrophic flood. A wandering shaman came to the town and said the cause of the flood was the Dragon, and that if they killed the Dragon, they would get those who they had lost back. The young Tamer offered his life in exchange for the Dragon's. However, an army from another country invaded and destroyed the town, killing the Tamer and the Dragon. Fast forward 7000 years or so. The youngest direct descend of the Dragon's last Tamer is dying. Ryuuki was in a car crash and is not expected to live. As the child's spirit leaves the now empty body, the Dragon's enters it, giving the noble creature a second chance at life, through the body of a human. His memories as his time as a Dragon are suddenly mixed in with the 10 year-old Ryuuki's, the Dragon is force-fed 10 years of memories in about 10 seconds, sending the child into a coma. During the six month-coma, the dragon learns of the child, and his link to the Tamer that offered his life for the dragon. The dragon learned how to act like Ryuuki exactly, as to not do so when he woke up would terrify the boys parents. Eventually he woke up, but there were still massive changes. Ryuuki now couldn't get enough meat and fish, before he wasn't very keen on either. His hair went form being black to white as a sheet of paper. His parents were horrified after he brought his Dragon self from the past to the current time, after losing control of his temper when arguing with his cousin. After that first time, it was easy for Ryuuki to bring forth his past selves, simply reaching back in his memory and plucking them from their time using the Dragon's mystic powers. He frequently used the Dragon to terrorize those who bullied him, becoming feared and hated by his classmates. As a result, his parents sent him to Hyakuji High, wanting him to try and learn how to control his odd powers as well as his behavioral problems. Mashed Potatoes? The proof is in the pudding. Edited by SinGenesis, Jul 21 2014, 04:25 PM.
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| Mayu Akabane | Jul 21 2014, 12:41 PM Post #2 |
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Thank you for your profile! I have looked over it, and there is some need for clarifications before I am able to approve of it. First thing that will need to be outlined is the exact capabilities of the dragon. How big is it? Does it have any powers of its own? Note that any powers the dragon has will be counted towards your overall power count. Also note that the dragon cannot be too big, otherwise it will fall under the "giant robot" banned power (under the giant part of that rule). Second, further clarification on the limits will need to be made. While he does have a 15 minute limit on each summon, there is currently nothing from stopping summoning 15 clones at once. For the sake of combat situations, I would also like a second limit other than the 15 minutes since minutes is hard to quantify in a post. While you can leave the 15 minute limit, I would like to see a separate limit added for battle situations which is in posts (for example: in a battle situation, he can maintain summon for x posts. When he is not in battle, he can maintain summon for 15 minutes ). Once edits have been made, please post a reply to this topic so that I know it is ready to be reviewed again. |
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| SinGenesis | Jul 21 2014, 01:43 PM Post #3 |
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Edited it. |
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| Mayu Akabane | Jul 21 2014, 02:23 PM Post #4 |
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I have looked over your edits, and the following areas will need to be address before approval. Sacred Strike is currently way too powerful, and will need its power reduced by a lot. Being as strong as a regular grenade alone is way too powerful, and it is going to need to be pushed down a lot. For Radiance Shield, I was wondering if melee means all close ranged attacks, or means only fist based attacks? For example, would swords be able to pierce the shield? As for the time limits, I am going to have to say that 30 posts for human, and 15 posts for dragon is way too long for battles since even a long battle wouldn't last any more than 13-15 posts. As I said, you can keep the time limit separate for in battle and out of battle. Also, in the first paragraph it says his limit is 15 posts, then it goes on to say his limit is 30 posts for his human summon, so you may want to remove the part where it says 15 posts in the first paragraph, otherwise it'll make things a little confusing. Also, some things I would like clarifications on are: - Does Ryuuki share the memories of each summon (for example, after the time limit is up, would he learn what they experienced?) ? Since it says he uses them for spying, I am not sure if memories transferred back, or something. - Is there anyone to force the summons to end prematurely? For example, taking too much. Edited by Mayu Akabane, Jul 21 2014, 02:24 PM.
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| SinGenesis | Jul 21 2014, 02:47 PM Post #5 |
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I updated it, and to save you having to read through it all again, the edits are that the summons can be ended prematurely if Ryuuki is knocked out, and the dragon limit is 10 posts in and out of battling, his human form is limited to 10 in battle and 15 non-battle. Melee weapons on their own cannot pass through Radience Shield, but if they are enchanted they will pass through. |
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| Mayu Akabane | Jul 21 2014, 03:24 PM Post #6 |
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Thank you, almost done. Only thing really is I would rather the description of a grenade to not be used since it's hard to tell how strong the quarter of a grenade's power is. I would recommend a description like "an explosion capable of knocking people back x meters and causing x type injuries" or something along them lines. Something that would give a clear idea of what kind of damage it would do to a person. Also, seeing as there is no description about the dragon's strength, speed and things, and you've allocated your remaining powers, I would recommend adding in that the dragon is no stronger/faster than a human unless you're willing to sacrifice one of the abilities to enhance it. |
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| SinGenesis | Jul 21 2014, 04:26 PM Post #7 |
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I have done the edits. |
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| Mayu Akabane | Jul 21 2014, 04:38 PM Post #8 |
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Thank you! Approved! |
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