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Roronoa Zoro
Topic Started: Dec 23 2013, 04:42 AM (895 Views)
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"Suffering is good...on the path to carnage..." - Roronoa Zoro


Character Name: Roronoa Zoro
Gender: Male
Age: 16
Height: 6'1
Weight: 180lbs
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Zoro is a tall, muscular man with lightly tanned skin. He always carries his three swords along with him, bundled up with a green haramaki over his right hip, allowing him to easily draw them with his left hand. Although his right hand is usually seen resting over them, he can also use this hand to pull his swords out before sitting down. He has three identical gold earrings on his left earlobe. Zoro normally keeps a black bandanna tied around his left bicep and ties it around his head when he is fighting seriously against an opponent.
Zoro's body is covered with scars from his many battles, most notably the massive scar stretching from his left shoulder to his right hip.
Zoro's other remarkable feature is his cropped green hair, which people often teasee him about by calling him "marimo"


Occupation: Student
Grade Level: 1st Year Freshman
Powers/ Abilities:

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Power Detection

Power to sense the presence of supernatural powers within others. Users can sense the presence of supernatural powers. Zoro is able to detect powers of everybody a 10 meter diameter of himself
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Enhanced Reflexes

The powers to have drastically enhanced reaction speed. Sub-power of Enhanced Condition. User has drastically enhanced reaction speed, allowing them to dodge bullets, catch flies in mid-air, dodge and maneuver around complex attacks, catch falling objects, block detriments and react instantaneously to what others take more time to react to. Zoro is able to sufficiently react to melee attacks and thrown objects the same speed as him or slightly faster.

-Some attacks/items may be too fast for the user to dodge



Enhanced Swordsmanship

The ability to be highly proficient in the way of the sword. Users are able to demonstrate a natural aptitude for the ways of the sword. The user is able to wield a sword with great proficiency in speed, power, and skill, allowing them to perform feats such as stopping and deflecting bullets, decimate large objects or areas, cutting through hard materials such as steel, and even hold back their strength to deal damage to their foes without killing them. However Zoro is not skilled enough to counter attacks such as bullets, he can only counter melee attacks and thrown objects

The user is also able to operate with little or no effort, deliver skillful strikes to weak points with great precision. This ability also allows the users to become naturally skilled with multiple swords or any bladed weapon regardless of shape or size to suit their needs in combat.

Zoro is able to wield 3 swords at one time. His speed, strength, and precision with the swords are above average, with the enhanced reflexes and his swordsmanship. Zoro is able to deflect attacks that are slightly stronger than him also.



Equipment You Have: 3 Katanas/ 1 Black Bandanna / 3 wooden katanas that he carries to school



Residency Request: Room 216


Schedule:
Homeroom Teacher: Mare
1) Phys Ed
2) The Arts
3) Supernatural Studies

Personality Description:

Zoro usually maintains a stern, serious, and distanced personality, but often loses his temper in a goofy and exaggerated comical style. He can also be extremely intimidating, easily frightening weaker opponents with just his glare. It has been stated that he has a monstrous killing intent evident from the fact where he almost drew his sword on one of the Tenryubito. Furthermore, it has also been stated that Zoro is a born killer capable of showing no mercy during combat; it has been mentioned that Zoro has killed before. Despite this, Zoro has a kind heart, shown as he was willing to risk death for the sake of a little girl he did not know shortly after his introduction. When fighting weaker or innocent people, he does try to hold back when fighting and use the dull side of his swords in order not to seriously injure them.

He has a strong sense of leadership and reasoning. While technically not a samurai, Zoro maintains Bushido to a certain degree (e.g. he consistently refuses to attack an adversary whose back is turned, the only exception being when his friends are in imminent danger of losing their lives in which Zoro would strike the attacker from behind, and Zoro himself considers a scar on the back to be a swordsman's greatest shame).

He normally spends time lifting weights or napping, only to be regularly awakened in a rather violent way. He also likes to drink alcohol (sake), Zoro can also be very vigorous when he is determined to achieve a goal or defeat an enemy. The risks that he will often take to pursue his dream of becoming the world's greatest swordsman often leave others wondering if he is crazy. As far as Zoro is concerned though, only he has the right to call himself "crazy."
When Zoro has the intention to fight seriously, he ties his bandana (normally kept tied around his left arm) around his head. Zoro lives for the thrill of combat; men comment on his "insane killing intent", acknowledging that Zoro was a "real beast".

Indeed, when an average human has the intention of fighting Zoro, his glare alone is usually enough to make them back off. He also has a habit of smiling in satisfaction whenever he faces a particularly skilled opponent, which often unnerves both friend and foe alike. Even when not in combat, he often displays a manic smirk that gives the impression of him being a monster.

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Personal History:

Zoro grew up with just his mother, his father ran out on the two when Zoro was real little. Starting from when Zoro was 5 yrs old he would spend all of his spare time at his grandpa's house, his grandpa taught Zoro great wisdom and many life lessons even as a young boy. His grandfather even passed down the tradition of swordsmanship, he would take Zoro out back into the dojo and the two would spar all day, his grandpa would tell him to eat a lot because he would need his strength. Zoro made a habit of this and now always eats 3 servings at each meal. Zoro was a trouble maker in school though, he would sleep through all of his classes and had bad grades, he would get into fights in school and was suspended numerous times. Zoro's mother worked all day and still couldn't support him, so when he turned 12 he got his own apartment. He would go to school all day, work in a lumber yard after school and then go to his grandpa's dojo. However, in middle school he gained another passion, he loved to play basketball. He rarely had time to play because of his schedule but whenever he found time, he loved to play basketball. He thought of swordsmanship above all else, he couldn't carry real katannas to school however he would bring 3 wooden ones and keep them on his left side hip just in case. Zoro has now entered high school, will Zoro do better in high school? Or will he remain the same troubled child? Will he try out for the high school basketball team and continue his hobby?

Mashed Potatoes? The proof is in the pudding
Edited by Zoro Roronoa, Dec 27 2013, 07:01 PM.
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Thank you for your profile!

I have looked over your profile, and there are some issues with the powers.

At the moment, your powers are written to be very general in the sense that they could apply for anyone, and not just for Zoro. This applies to all of the powers.
I would like to see more written on how these powers relate to Zoro rather than just a general description of the powers.

Power Detection is going to be a difficult power to approve without sufficient restrictions. There is no problem with him being able to detect that someone may have supernatural powers. The problem comes when he is able to gain detailed information into someone else powers.

As for Enhanced Reactions and Enhanced Swordsmanship, it is just a case of relating those powers to Zoro.
At what level is Zoro at with those powers? What can he do, and what are his limits with them? It is just a case of making the powers more specific to Zoro.

Once edits have been made, please post a reply so that I can review your profile again!
Edited by Mayu Akabane, Dec 23 2013, 08:12 AM.
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done, re-check please ^^
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Thank you, I have looked over, and now it is more of a question of scaling down the powers so that they are more suitable for a starting character.

A starting character should have a lot of room to improve, and the improvements are usually made during season upgrades. From what I can see, this character has very little room to improve, which is the main issue at the moment.

The only problem with the Power Detection now is that the range is on too much of a large scale and is going to need to be brought down a lot. I would say limit it to around the 10 meter radius mark.

Enhanced Reflexes and Enhanced Swordsmanship suffer from the "no room to improve" factor I mentioned.

His skill in both field needs to be toned done. The reflexes need to be toned down to the point where it is more dodging melee attacks, and thrown objects rather than bullets, and such.

Enhanced Swordsmanship is currently the biggest problem area. At the moment Enhanced Swordsmanship cover more than one power.
- Swordsmanship (Ability to use the sword)
- Super Strength (Being able to slice a car in half would count as this)
- Super Speed (Being able to keep up with someone who also has super speed)
- Slash Projection (Being able to send ranged strikes would count as a power in and of itself)
For Enhanced Swordsmanship, I would recommend focusing on solely just swordsmanship rather than have it branch out into other powers.

If you want a reference on how someone else has dealt with swordsmanship, I would suggest looking at this profile:
http://hyakujihigh.net/topic/5302027/1/
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I understand, I edited again, I was OP for a freshman
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Oh, I also forgot to mention that characters cannot carry around weapons on campus. He can have the swords in his room, but I would recommend maybe adding practice swords (a bokken, for example) under his equipment as well.
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edited again @_@
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Zoro Roronoa
Dec 23 2013, 04:42 AM
Powers/ Abilities:

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Power Detection

Power to sense the presence of supernatural powers within others. Users can sense the presence of supernatural powers. Zoro is able to detect powers of everybody a 10 meter diameter of himself
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Enhanced Reflexes

The powers to have drastically enhanced reaction speed. Sub-power of Enhanced Condition. User has drastically enhanced reaction speed, allowing them to dodge bullets, catch flies in mid-air, dodge and maneuver around complex attacks, catch falling objects, block detriments and react instantaneously to what others take more time to react to. Zoro is able to sufficiently react to melee attacks and thrown objects the same speed as him or slightly faster.

-Some attacks/items may be too fast for the user to dodge



Enhanced Swordsmanship

The ability to be highly proficient in the way of the sword. Users are able to demonstrate a natural aptitude for the ways of the sword. The user is able to wield a sword with great proficiency in speed, power, and skill, allowing them to perform feats such as stopping and deflecting bullets, decimate large objects or areas, cutting through hard materials such as steel, and even hold back their strength to deal damage to their foes without killing them. However Zoro is not skilled enough to counter attacks such as bullets, he can only counter melee attacks and thrown objects

The user is also able to operate with little or no effort, deliver skillful strikes to weak points with great precision. This ability also allows the users to become naturally skilled with multiple swords or any bladed weapon regardless of shape or size to suit their needs in combat.

Zoro is able to wield 3 swords at one time. His speed, strength, and precision with the swords are above average, with the enhanced reflexes and his swordsmanship. Zoro is able to deflect attacks that are slightly stronger than him also.



Equipment You Have: 3 Katanas/ 1 Black Bandanna / 3 wooden katanas that he carries to school
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