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| Ravager Hughesy | Mar 1 2011, 01:09 AM Post #1 |
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Hyakuji 2.0 Template Character Name: Tyson “Ty” Gale Gender: Male Age: 17 Height: 5’10” Weight: 180 Description or Image of Character Appearance: Spoiler: click to toggle This is just something to use as a reference and shouldn’t strictly be interpreted as what Ty looks like, though it is pretty close. For those of you that recognize this guy as 40-something, de-age him a bit to about 17. (You know, firmer skin and what not.) Ty can loosely be defined as “wannabe rock star,” at least in the way he dresses. His wardrobe consists largely of black t-shirts, blue or black jeans, and anything he can put on that’s shiny and makes a lot of noise when he moves: wallet chains, necklaces, rings, bracelets, etc., etc. Interestingly, Ty's tattoos are illusions he has managed to maintain somehow. Occupation: Student Grade Level: Junior Powers/ Abilities: Ty has the ability to create illusions. There are three different types of illusions Ty has the ability to control, create, or whatever. Unfortunately, anyone with a strong will can power through the illusions. Additionally, since Ty has normal senses and can only create illusions on a level normal for people with normal senses, those with senses above the human average will be able to see through the illusions. Within reason, of course. A sudden bolt of excruciating pain is going to hurt anyone. (Note: Illusions used for gags will not activate cool downs.)
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| Hiro_Tsukasa | Mar 2 2011, 08:08 PM Post #2 |
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NICE DRIVE!
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Busy with a paper for grad school but to give you something to work on cause anyone on the Staff will say it... way too many powers. Just like way way too much. |
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| Ravager Hughesy | Mar 2 2011, 09:36 PM Post #3 |
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Removed the two extraneous parts. As for what's still up there, it looks like a lot because it's compartmentalized and not mashed into one horrible wall of text. And because some of them are too strong to have the same durations as the others. But if it's still not good, I have something else I can use. |
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| Chizu | Mar 4 2011, 12:28 AM Post #4 |
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You do have a lot of powers, but at this point, they're all related to his main power, which is illusions. So I only have one issue with this right now. I need some clarification as to how many different types of illusions he can use at one time. (i.e. can he use Visual and Audio at the same time? Different types of Visual at once? Is there a cooldown period?). |
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| Ravager Hughesy | Mar 4 2011, 01:27 AM Post #5 |
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Ty can use every illusion at his disposal at the same time, provided the criteria for each illusion is met, to submerge someone in a fake world. To be honest, I'd never thought about cool downs because I'd never considered abusing the lack of them. I'm not the underhanded, loophole-abusing type. Loophole abuse ruins all the fun anyway. I slapped some on there anyway, though. |
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| Dominique | Mar 4 2011, 04:52 PM Post #6 |
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IZUNAAAA DROP!
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I quite like it, this is definitely one of the better illusion-based power sets I've seen. My only concern is that there is no limit to it with regards to resistance. This is a magic sensory based ability so I would think those with enhanced senses or a strong will would have some kind of chance of resisting these effects. I wouldn't presume to say that anyone he uses these abilities on has no choice but to fall for them or even be affected by them. Otherwise this comes out looking a bit too God-moddish for my taste. Other than that though, the limitations are good, the powers are well-defined and I'd approve this if you took what I said into account. |
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| Ravager Hughesy | Mar 4 2011, 05:16 PM Post #7 |
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Edited, then. |
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| Dominique | Mar 4 2011, 05:23 PM Post #8 |
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IZUNAAAA DROP!
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