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Can I get a profile review?; Can I?
Topic Started: Jun 23 2010, 04:54 AM (264 Views)
Porthos
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I'd never wondered about it before, but then I got to thinking it might be nice knowing what people think of you're character. Maybe it's just a stupid idea, but could I get someone to review my character and give me a non-biased series of comments judging the originality, the form, and overall opinion of the character in general.

I wanted to know if there were any general problems with that from the admins or mods or anybody. And if there weren't, then I'd like to ask for anyone's input on my character, whose link you will find in my signature. The character I am referring to would be Ignacio Toro.
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sarah seems a bit underpowered, and the idea that country depowers her is simply dumb. I get it. Hur hur, you haet cuntrriez muzicz. But it's a legit genre with some seriously good songs to be found. A lot of the old school country is what BIRTHED rock and roll. So maybe learn to not make a joke out of an entire genre?

but yeah, the power is good. Not too much like any power.

personality is goo, history is kind of bland. She was born, grew up, went to HHS. Not much there to analyze. It's not BAD and maybe you were trying to avoid cliches or 'tropes' but remembers. Tropes Are Not A Bad Thing. Some interesting quirks in her history or personality add dynamism. Some RAGE BUTTON to make her flip out, some fear to make her crack, so self-destructive goal. SOMETHING to make her interactions a little more intense. The more of these quirks you add the more she has to work on in her stay here..

A hard history gives her a reason to be strong, a sad one gives her a reason to seek happiness, a normal one can even be used for this. Mayb e culture shock at all the powers and people whove suffered.

IGNACIO:

pyromancy is pretty much the most overused power ever. And combining dancing and fighting isn't really any better.

Not any good weaknesses or drawbacks to his power. Just 'there may be times it doesn't work' is entirely up to you so you can use it whenever and however you please.

this guy has much more personality and a better history than the other with honest-to-god flaws and personality quirks. Thus he's more interesting IMHO. Just don't DOWNPLAY them when it's convenient. The point of a quirk is it gets in the way sometimes. It's an rpers natural tendency even if he rps a jerk to be kind by the second or third post, but really it can be fun rping someone disliked! OR trying to earn someone's friendship WHILE being a jerk.

So basically what i'm saying is if you're rping a sexist sleaze then rp that and not a nice bland guy who sometimes once in a thread makes a pass.
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Yea, that was fair. Thanks Cyp, you've never let me down with your un-biasedness. But for the country thing, it's not like that, man XD.

There had to be one genre that weakened her. Oh well.

Thanks anyway, Cyp ^^

Anyone else? Or do all further people agree with Cyp's post?
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