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Colton C	November 11 2008, 08:59 PM
Chairman of Advanced Thinkers Posts: 67 Group: Member Member #49 Joined: October 8, 2008	I have to veto your character. He is too good. I have no problem with doctors, yet I want my people to be average, not famous and award winning. I would probably have let that go, yet I feel you have too many items. One gun would be good, two is accessible. If you want such a filled medical bag, I would have to say no guns. If you want to keep the teaser, cut down on the medical bag to the basics. First aid, painkillers, and anti-biotic. Finally, could you keep your entries shorter, and in standard print in the IC. I find the small print hard to read. You can post more details in the OoC if you feel you want more description. Besides entering posts, I like to keep them relatively short. Thank You, Colton P.S. I re read this, and I realize I sound like a ass. I wasn't trying to, yet I do not want to spend the time to re-write it. Edited by Colton C, November 11 2008, 08:59 PM.


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