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Eriadu 22 Jan 2011, 10:16 PM Post #1
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Horvíun Palace, Camniu

The pattering sound of Princess Alisa Loríona's footsteps echoed throughout the Palace. He was running. She arrived at the door. The guards bowed to let her pass and she entered the room. In there she ran to the huge bed in the room and knelt beside it.

''Mother.'' She said tearfully. Queen Loríóna barely raised her head: She was dying.

''Yes, my daughter?'' She rasped.

''I'm here.''

''Stay with me, it won't be much longer.'' The Princess's tears steadly got worse. She felt her stomach: She was 6 months pregnant. ''Hows the baby doing?''

''She's fine mother.''

''Thats good. I'm just sorry I couldn't see her.''

''Mother.'' The Princess had now completely broken down in tears.

''Alisa.'' Said the Queen, suddenly without rasping.

''Yes?''

''It is time.''

''No'' Cried the Princess.

''Goodbye, my daughter.'' And with that, Queen Vera Loríona of Camniu died...
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Eriadu 23 Jan 2011, 08:14 PM Post #2
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A week later

The funeral march was slow as the horse drawn cart carrying Queen Vera Loríona's body moved down the small road between Horvíun Palace and the Royal Cathedral, where the Queens of old are buried. Princess Alisa walked behind the cart in a black dress, her husband by her side. Soon they arrived at the doors of the cathedral, and the Queen's body was carried inside.

An hour and half later, after all the Veron rituals for the dead Queens had been carried out, the Queen's body was brought down into the depths of the Cathedral and placed a large tomb, with was then covered with a lid, a statue of her lying down on the top...

A Week Later

Princess Alisa knelt on the viewing balcony in the Palace, dressed in a royal purple gown. Above her, the Lord of the Palace raised the Camnonian Crown and then placed it on her head. She then stood up and the Lord bowed to her.

''Now come the days of Queen Alisa Loíona, and my the Lunar and Solaar bless them and make them long.''
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Eriadu 29 Jan 2011, 06:18 PM Post #3
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6 Months Later

Queen Alisa was in her chamber in the castle. It was growing dark out. She craddled her now, 4 month old baby in her arms. She kissed it on the forehand and placed her in her cot.

''Sweet dreams, my princess.'' She said. There was a knock on the door and her husband entered.

''Is she asleep yet?'' He asked.

''Yes, dreaming away.'' Replied the Queen. The two left the room.

Out in the hall her hsband spoke again.

''Whats troubling you?'' He asked.

''I just wish that my mother could have lived to see her.'' The Queen answered, small tears forming in her eyes.

''Your mother was a great woman. She would be proud of you.''

''I hope so.'' Alisa wiped her eyes dry and the two began making their way down the corridor. As the moon shone thorugh the windows, they had no way of knowing what was to happen tonight...
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Eriadu 19 Feb 2011, 04:15 PM Post #4
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The two were sitting in a room together, a fire glowing in the grate. It was peaceful. The moon shone and the princess was asleep. Then there was a sound.

''What was that?'' Said The Queen.

''I'm not sure.'' The two ran out into the hall. Standing there was a man, dressed like an aristocrat, in expensive looking clothes. There were some men with him, armed. Queen Alisa froze.

''Queen Alisa.'' He said, a smile on his face.

''Lord Potraud.'' She said.

''What are you doing here Lord Potraud?'' Asked the King.

''I've come to take what's mine.'' He said.

''What do you mean?'' Replied the King.

''Have you not told your husband?'' Asked the Lord, with false surprise in his voice.

''Told me what?'' The King turned to his wife.

''Before I meet you, I was engaged to this man.'' She said. ''On our wedding day, I ran away from him. And then I met you.''

''Therefore I am the rightful King of Camniu.''

''Camniu has and always will be ruled by Queens. The King has almost no power.''

''That will change.'' Replied the Lord.

''Get out of this Palace!!'' Shouted the King. ''You have no right to be here.''

''Oh but I do.''

''Guards!!'' Yelled the Queen. ''Get them out of here!!'' Before any Guards could arrive though, Lord Potraud seized one of his men's guns and fired it at Queen Alisa. However it never made contact. The King pushed her out of the way and the bullet lodges itself in his stomach. As he fell, he knocked over a lamp and the curtains caught fire. Soon it was spreading down the corridor. The Queen turned and found herself facing the Lord.

''You made a stupid mistake running away from me!'' He growled. The Queen struggled and managed to pull a burning piece of cloth off the ground. She made to push it into his face but another of Potraud's guards shot her as well. As a shocked Potraud watched her die, he ran over and pushed the guard into the blazing corridor. When he turned back, Alisa was dead. Then came the sound of crying. Potraud pushed open one of the doors and found the princess in her cradle, crying. The curtains in this room were on fire. Potruad grabbed the child and ran out of the blazing castle. Once outside, he looked back. The Castle was burning beyond control and flames leapt out of everywhere. He looked down at the baby girl, with affection in his eyes.

''Welcome to the new Camniu, my daughter.''
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