Dreamers often lie

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Dreamers often lie; [ Drabble ] Prompt : rough divide
Topic Started: Nov 3 2009, 03:59 PM (57 Views)
Andrea	Nov 3 2009, 03:59 PM Post #1
Master Storyteller of Arda Posts: 212 Group: Member Member #5 Joined: Apr 17 2009 Time Zone (GMT +/-) GMT +8 Realm of Arda Blog http://tinyurl.com/yhjn2as Thread Tracker http://tinyurl.com/yz5nd8x Fiction Tracker http://tinyurl.com/yfand33 Red Book http://tinyurl.com/yz5p7dv	It is a dream that often revisits. He can feel the rough texture of bark, the tension in his arms as he pulls back the pebble. He fires. A loud splash echoes. A horse whinnies. Then all of a sudden he’s standing at the edge, seeing the human hand grasping at air—struggling. He reaches down underneath the waves to pull him up, but he stops just as the tips of his fingers dip into the cool water. His hand goes limp, eyes widening as he freezes. The action becomes stillborn amidst the rushing water and what was once there.
	" V a l i n o r . . . W h a t s h i p c a n b e a r m e h e n c e ? " " T h e w o r l d i s a b i g p l a c e a n d E r a i d o r i s o n e s u c h p a r t o f i t — t h e S h i r e b e i n g e v e n s m a l l e r . " " T h e p r o b l e m i s y o u t h i n k t o o m u c h a n d y o u t h i n k p e o p l e a c t u a l l y l i s t e n t o y o u . " g r a p h i c r e q u e s t s


heatherbee.	Nov 4 2009, 08:46 PM Post #2
Andrea's Grasshopper Posts: 646 Group: Admin Member #2 Joined: Apr 6 2009 Time Zone (GMT +/-) GMT -5 Realm of Arda Blog http://tinyurl.com/ydhajbt Thread Tracker http://tinyurl.com/ya6dcce Fiction Tracker http://tinyurl.com/yc2oed2	I find Cellon one of those frightening characters that you both love and loathe. On the surface, he's arrogant in an almost endearing way. He's the kind of cocky that makes you smile. But underneath that is one of the darkest acts anyone can commit: fratricide. Suddenly, he's not funny or endearing anymore. I think this drabble plays out the same way. It begins almost like a mischevious child, so we smile at the misbehavior. When he realize someone has been hurt, the smile fades. It takes some time before we understand we were smiling at a murder. Chilling. Both the drabble and the character.
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