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Sunao Fujimori; DELETE THIS BOARD
Topic Started: Jun 12 2008, 08:38 PM (408 Views)
Sunao
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DELETE PLEASE
Edited by Sunao, Jul 24 2008, 08:05 PM.
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Juugoya Kokuei
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Ok! First time to comment on an application.

Firstly, you can only have 1 accessory, much like the characters from the game do at first. It should be something that is expressly yours.

Secondly, you cant really say you've met the SEES, as Seiei and I are currently the only members. Also your history cant go into the future, neither can your drive.

Weapons, you'll probably have to wait for a weapon list to be released by me, but I'll add Chain Whips as a category, just not Kunai.

In general, you need to work on your grammar and spelling. Even if it's just running the app through spell check and then proof-reading yourself. We're asking a relatively high standard of RPing for the site, though compared to some sites I've been on, we're asking very little.

And 1st years would be in classes 1-A to 1-F.
Edited by Juugoya Kokuei, Jun 23 2008, 03:51 PM.
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Sunao
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"I Fully Understand Koku" :P

.::UPDATED::.



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Juugoya Kokuei
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You still have a problem of not adding a space after your period.

It makes it really awkward to read, though for some reason a lot of people make that mistake.
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Sunao
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.::UDATED::.

Alright,Alright I Fixed it. Is everything ok now? Posted Image




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Juugoya Kokuei
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I'm going to leave this for Seiei to look over. Just cause I want to get her working.
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Sunao
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.::UDATED::.

Hahaha Yeah It Seems You Are Doing All The Work Now.Posted Image
Edited by Sunao, Jun 29 2008, 11:48 AM.
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Seiei Tomoyo
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Hmm, I'm sorry, but I can't approve it. I would like to keep characters from other anime off the site. You can keep appearance and name the same, but please come up with an original character.
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Sunao
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Ok....ill see what I can do :-/

Can you tell me what I need to change that can be more orriginal because most of this stuff I just made up.
Edited by Sunao, Jul 4 2008, 10:23 AM.
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Juugoya Kokuei
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Seiei said that your character was from a movie she was forced to watch by one of her friends. So I dont know if ithat's just the name, or the name and the stock you use for your avatar, or the entire description and everything else.

I'd definitely change the Alter Ego bit though, I dont think that works when you define it so much as the change is obvious. Split personalities are better when subtly implemented.
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Seiei said that your character was from a movie she was forced to watch by one of her friends. So I dont know if ithat's just the name, or the name and the stock you use for your avatar, or the entire description and everything else.


Oh if this is the case then I would like you to delete this board please.
I will create a new character later then.
Edited by Sunao, Sep 5 2008, 04:36 PM.
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