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Chilling
Topic Started: Aug 24 2009, 10:22 PM (32 Views)
catye
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#2 top poster of all time babyyy (: <333
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I shivered, small chills crawled down my back. The fire glared hugely in front of me. A hard, cold hand touched my sagging shoulder and I looked over at my ill grandpa. He smiled forcefully at me.
"I'm going to miss you Tara." His hand already had made a lonely tear roll down my already red cheek, but that made me cry even more.
"But Papa! I dont want u to leave." I put my hand over his.
"Ahh that's nice and warm....darling...I've done my time. God is calling me in."
Grandpa was my guardian, the last one alive who loved me, "Don't leave me."
"I won't," He dragged his hand towards my chest, "I'll always be in here." He tapped right over my heart.
I held his fragile hand in mine and watched him for another 10 minutes. Eventually his weak head rolled to the side, his pale eyelids slowly closed and his hand lost all signs of life.
I sat there and cried till the fire went out.

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i dunno just made it and yeah wanted to know comments.
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lilyxohdang
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o: thats amazing !
i think you should continue it.
its heart warming (:
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Your signature has been taken over by Sydney (:
Nope. It's been taken over by Frankie! xP

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catye
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thxx, another comment and i will (:
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