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General Mark P. Howard; General Commandant of the Alliance
Topic Started: Jul 28 2009, 03:08 PM (77 Views)
Radkolf

Alliance Soldier

Name Mark Peter Howard
Age 46
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History Mark was born at a very young age in the United States, in 1972, and was brought up by his Military Obsessed father. As soon as Mark had hit 8, he was enlisted into Military School, were he learned how to do everything from fire a gun to hiding in cover. As he went up in age, his military training continued, and he was Enlisted into the army as a Private. As he continued his training, at the age of 30 he was sent into the Iraq War zone to assist the troops there. As he set out to Iraq, he said good bye to his parents, then headed out for Iraq. As he landed there, the troops were quickly rushed out of the plane, and into the tents, were the plane took off as fast as it could. As they were debriefed on there situation, it seemed that there were some CO's that needed to be rescued from the nearby Taliban threat. As they were given there gear, they were sent out into the field, and had surrounded the building with the CO's inside. As Mark looked over his shoulder, a few bullets whizzed by his head, once scratching his arm, as it went straight through the cover he was behind. As he ran over to a nearby car, he quickly slid into the car, the bullets whizzing behind him as he got into the cover. Mark fumbled with his C4, as he tried to activate it. As he activated it, he through it over near the door, and pulled out the detonator. As he pushed the button, dust and rubble went flying everywhere, the door smashed into thousands of pieces. As his comrades through out smoke grenades, they quickly rushed into the building, it being dark and dead silent. As one of the other Private opened the closet, Mark noticed a gun that was lying down through a hole in the door. He also noticed a latch attached to the door. As he quickly pulled the Private back a few feet, the shotgun that was attached to the door fired, blowing a smile hole in the wall across from them. As he thanked Mark, Mark told them over the radio that this area was clear, and they should head up stairs. As they slowly crept upstairs, Mark heard noise coming from the nearby room. As he quickly through in a smoke grenade, he whipped in and took out the guards, then quickly went back into the hall. As he tells them that the Tango's are down, they continue up to the next floor, which had the CO's on that floor. As they came up the stairs, a bunch of enemy troops noticed them, and a gunfight erupted. As they all dived for cover, he noticed one of them about to kill the CO. That was not allowed to happen, so he quickly whipped his pistol out and shot at the trooper, his body being penetrated by the bullets, falling to the ground. As the blood leaks out onto the floor, he pulls out his Assault Rifle, and finishes the rest of the Taliban. As they untie the the CO, a troop in cover came flying from around the corner, brandishing a machete. As he was about to slice his fellow teammate, Mark quickly pushed him out of the way, the machete coming down on his hands. As Mark fell onto his knees, they took out the unit and quickly started to heal his wounds. They finally got it to stop bleeding, but they knew it would only last for a while. As Mark told the CO to come with him, he was amazed at Mark's bravery and courage to save his teammate even though he had lost both his hands, a sure sign he wouldn't be able to serve in the Military. As they got back to camp, they were all congratulated on there success, but they all said that it was Mark who did all the work. He saved 2 peoples lives, and took out most of the enemy troops. As the Commander came over to him, he almost got decommissioned for not having any hands, but then the CO walked into the room, and introduced himself as the General himself. As he walked over to mark, he promoted him to Captain level, and said they could fix his hands soon enough, but for now he would be giving orders and making tactical maneuvers.

As he sat at HQ, he was constantly at work, moving units all about and around. As he continued his work, multiple scanners had detected something in the atmosphere of the planet. As he went into further detail, he learned that it was an Alien Race, that they had named the Hinth. As they started the building of massive energy shields, Mark was putting together strategies that would come into play if they had landed. As he made a group of troops to try and combat a landing crew if there was one, the shield had finally been put up, a false sense of protection falling over the Earth. As one of there ships crashed through the fortress that was now earth, he sent out the units to try and destroy the invaders. There were no survivors left out of the defenders. As there invasion began, HQ was in a state of shock, coming up with ideas to try and save the human race left right and center. As the idea of robots were suggested, it was immediately taken into action, the first Generation of robots being built. As he was propelled into making hundreds of battle plans, he was constantly at work trying to think of all the possible outcomes of this war. As the robots were being built, the Human Race's struggle for survival was increasing. The chances of a comeback of this magnitude were slim to none. The only comforting thing to know is that if the robots were completed on time, they would be able to push back the Hinth. As the construction was completed, a desperate last struggle broke out, all the remaining Humans were given weapons and told to fire at any Hinth that were nearby. As the robots were put into action, the Hinth were pushed back to there ships, a victory celebration was held, and all was peaceful once again. As the celebration was held, a mass quake shook the ground, the energy readings in the base going of the charts. As Mark zoomed in satellite images of the center of the blast, a miniature black hole was forming. As the whole base was in panic, Mark calmed everyone down, saying that they could stop it if we could stop its gravitational pull. As they set out to work, the commander approached him, offering him robotic hands to replace his old ones. As he hastily agreed, his new hands were put on, and Mark got back to work on the black hole, trying to stop it. As they finally found a way to stop it, another huge event occurred. The building was attacked by rebel machines, tearing the place apart. As the rebellion left the HQ, there were many casualties, the General being one of them. As Mark rushed to his side, the General handed over his badge, promoting Mark to General Status. As he now commands the Alliance, he vows to avenge his General by destroying all threats to the Human Race, no matter the cost.
Personality Mark is very serious and he plans everything out to its fullest extent. He is not an extremely violent individual, but can hold his own in a fight. He will usually congratulate soldiers that have done well, while scorn those who have just got to the war or have ran from battle.

Equipment

  • Demonic Claws - This is a variation of the demonic blades that other soldiers use. Instead, he uses the claws of the same material that come out of his robotic hands, and they are about 3 feet long, and are very deadly.
  • Angelic Gun - At the bottom of his palms he has small, round holes. This is what he uses to fire his Angelic gun, and it is built inside his hands. This allows for better use of the weapon, and means he will not drop it.
    Unique Ability Mark has an abnormal increase in strength because of his robotic hands, and so his strength is enough to take down buildings and utterly crush most other objects that he can get his hands on.


Killing Information
Total number of opponents killed by this character None
Additional Equipment None
Edited by Radkolf, Aug 1 2009, 09:11 PM.
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kaien shiba
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As he sat at HQ, he was constantly at work, moving units all about and around. Suddenly, he learned of an alien race that had been on there planet for a while, and he was told everything. As the aliens attacked, Mark did his best to keep all the troops morale up and keep them calm. As they were fighting a war they knew they couldn't win, the General told him about the robotic technology that they were working on. As they employed the robots, they quickly turned the tides of the battle, pushing the aliens away from Earth. As this new robotic technology was perfected, the General gave him new, robotic hands. As he tried to get used to these new hands, the aliens had finally been pushed back, and the Alliance had won. As the celebrations started, a massive robot rebellion occurred in the base, resulting in a huge amount of casualties before they left. The General being one of them. As he layed there on the ground, bleeding to death, he pulled off his badge, and gave it to Mark. He had been promoted. As his body turned cold and fell limp, he got up on his feet, and Mark put the pin on his uniform. He now gives orders and is in control of the Alliance, but is still mourning the loss of his General.


All i can say is Eh, not that it's bad just he would've known about the Aliens because of his status, plus they attacked by ship first, so he wouldn't have found out about them on earth, he would've found out about them when they first attacked them when they landed done something with the strategics, then finally with the R.A, who were working with them, then got his hands, so to recap plz put instead,how he did the stategics for them, then about him fighting alongside the robots, then what happened to him when they rebelled, and finally bout the black whole bit. secondly plz put something about the "Black Whole thing" then it's good to go.

And for anyone reading, because of his status and he cleared it with me beforehand, i am allowing him the special way he uses the weapons.
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