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| The Future of this business | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: Jun 22 2009, 01:11 PM (66 Views) | |
| The Ace | Jun 22 2009, 01:11 PM Post #1 |
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The sounds of "I Stand alone" ..play loudly through the arena.....confused, the crowd anxiously awaits as the new face makes his appearance......The Ace steps out to the ramp...looks around at the crowd..and in a cocky manner makes his way to the ring...As he steps in the ring he demands a mic... " I know that you people don't know me...thats why Ive made it my objective tonight to come out here and introduce you all to the future of this company...and your next champion..."....the crowd, with a mixed reaction starts to respond to the arrogant wrestler..." You see..Im not here for your approval..and I really don't care if any of you like me or not...I am here to give you people what you've been deprived of for so long...and that is a true talent...a true champion...and true greatness."......The crowd starts with little chants..some of boos and some of you suck but it has no effect on the Ace..with a smirk of almost enjoyment to the crowd's reaction he continues..."Ladies and gentlemen...like it or not..you are looking at greatness in it's perfected form.." .." But words are of no meaning without an example..so tonight..Im making my debut with an open challenge to any so called wrestler in the back who thinks they have what it takes to prove me wrong...come on..any one in the back want to become part of history and be the one I make my first step to the top of this business..better yet.any of you wannabe's think you have what it takes to bring me off the top because as of now Im declaring my superiority." The crowd goes wild with boos...Smiling, The Ace looks in pure sickening pleasure around the arena at the disapproving fans.....his music plays cutting off the boos and chants..The Ace makes his way out of the ring............................. |
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| Max Martello | Jun 22 2009, 01:54 PM Post #2 |
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Its good but you need to put some spacing in it to seperate the whole thing. Try sticking the narative in brackets and when your character is talking have something like The Ace: I know that you people don't know me This will make it a little longer and neater too. If you want you can also use different colours for what your character says and the narative. |
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| The Big Gun | Jun 22 2009, 10:07 PM Post #3 |
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note: ace take of the part you leave the ring The Big Gun, "The Tough Guy" Daniel Carami and his girlfriend walk to the ring The Big Gun: my name is the big gun!!! i am the big gun for a reason because i am the best!!! Daniel Carami: wait partner me and you are both equal though ace you should learn something you do not come out here and say you are the future champion because it will come back to bite you like know that the two top stars are in the ring and in just a matter of time they might knock you out because if you want a debut we will give you a debut you can hear it that my partner is dangerous just with his titan tron well he is much much much more evil in the ring though tonight he isn't challenging you i am that's right now you have to fight one of the men putting great back in greatness who WILL KICK UR A** let's get a ref down here a referee runs down Daniel Carami: bring it on!!! the ref gets in the ring though daniel carami goes out of the ring the ace comes out aswell daniel carami runs around the ring while the big gun is gone they are still running when the lights go dark the lights come back on and daniel carami is gone the ace is looking around for daniel carami when the lights go dark again the big gun and daniel carami come back in the ring and attack the ace. the ace is on the ground and can't fight back Daniel Carami: i think you should find a tag partner because tonight i want a tag match me and the big gun vs you the ace and someone else let's get out of here The Big Gun, "Th Tough Guy" Daniel Carami and his girlfriend exit the ring |
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| Max Martello | Jun 22 2009, 10:38 PM Post #4 |
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Big Gun, you cant attack someone else without their permission beforehand. If you havent done so yet, please read the rules that are posted about this. |
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