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NPC - Gliisten and Gloss; For Date with a demon Storyline
Topic Started: Apr 12 2010, 01:04 AM (233 Views)
Kuro
Forum Name: ( both will be controlled by bluewingedD)

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Character name: Xurter
Nickname:Glisten
Gender:male
Age:15
Race: Alien( whatever Burter Was)
Home Planet:Unknown( somewhere in east universe)
Location:Oorium #98
Affiliation: Trainee Elite
Eye color:Red
Hair color:none
Height:5'8
Weight: 165
Aura Color: dark blue
Physique: muscular
Description:blue-skinned, reptilian humanoid with solid red eyes and a segmented crest of scales on his head. He possessed incredible speed
Clothing: The typical Clothing worn by trainees
Extra:
Accessories:
Picture:



Personality: Hot headed, never really thinks things through. Easy to excite or anger.

Likes
- anything fast
- pretty girls
- easy wins

Dislikes
- Ba'al
- anyone who is friends or alleys with Ba'al
- slow people

History: He was brought to the training planet a couple of years ago, since his race had been under the Changelings controls for hundreds of years, he was sent as soon as he was of age. He came to the planet with his twin brother Gloss. Once there they established themselves as warriors with great potential. He,and his brother are lackeys in the gang of Traniees called the Fab Five. The Fab Five truly hate Ba'al as his fame has become greater then their own. Something they will not allow.

Fighting Style: He relies heavily on his speed. using speedy attacks to keep his opponents on the defensive not giving them a chance to rest or gather themselves. he tends to go for flashy over the top attacks and strikes.

Item List:

Stats

Physical Power:4
Energy Power:6
Stamina:4
Speed:14

Power Level: 28
Transformations:

Techniques:

Technique Name: Blue blitz
Color:Shining Sparkling Blue
Class:speed/ joint/Melee
Inventor:Glisten and Gloss
Users:Glisten and Gloss
Technique Description:They will hold hands and combine their energy and power, a shining sparkling aura will surround them. They will then proceed the blitz their opponents, zipping back and forward attacking them relentlessly.

Technique Name: Glittery finish
Color: Sparkly blue
Class: Beam
Inventor:Glisten
Users:Glisten
Technique Description: He will charge up a blast of ki and shot out a beam of energy, that has a sparkling trail to it. It will explode on contact.

Technique Name: Abracadabra!!!
Color:None
Class: Speed Movement
Inventor:Glisten& Gloss
Users:Glisten & Gloss
Technique Description: They will move with such speed that they will vanish from sight leaving nothing behind but sparkling glittery dust like energy.

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Character name: Surter
Nickname:Gloss
Gender:male
Age:15
Race: Alien( whatever Burter Was)
Home Planet:Unknown( somewhere in east universe)
Location:Oorium #98
Affiliation: Trainee Elite
Eye color:Red
Hair color:none
Height:5'8
Weight: 165
Aura Color: dark blue
Physique: muscular
Description:blue-skinned, reptilian humanoid with solid red eyes and a segmented crest of scales on his head. He possessed incredible speed
Clothing: The typical Clothing worn by trainees
Extra:
Accessories:
Picture:



Personality: He is much more level headed then his brother, and tends to be the voice of reason between the two of them. He is also technically the older of the two( by 2 minutes). So he acts accordingly

Likes
- anything fast
- pretty girls
- easy wins

Dislikes
- Ba'al
- anyone who is friends or alleys with Ba'al
- slow people

History: He was brought to the training planet a couple of years ago, since his race had been under the Changelings controls for hundreds of years, he was sent as soon as he was of age. He came to the planet with his twin brother Glisten. Once there they established themselves as warriors with great potential. He,and his brother are lackeys in the gang of Trainees called the Fab Five. The Fab Five truly hate Ba'al as his fame has become greater then their own. Something they will not allow.

Fighting Style: He relies heavily on his speed. using speedy attacks to keep his opponents on the defensive not giving them a chance to rest or gather themselves. he tends to go for flashy over the top attacks and strikes.

Item List:

Stats

Physical Power:4
Energy Power:6
Stamina:4
Speed:14

Power Level: 28
Transformations:

Techniques:

Technique Name: Blue blitz
Color:Shining Sparkling Blue
Class:speed/ joint/Melee
Inventor:Glisten and Gloss
Users:Glisten and Gloss
Technique Description:They will hold hands and combine their energy and power, a shining sparkling aura will surround them. They will then proceed the blitz their opponents, zipping back and forward attacking them relentlessly.

Technique Name: Glossy finish
Color: Shining blue
Class: Beam
Inventor:Gloss
Users:Gloss
Technique Description: He will charge up a blast of ki and shot out a beam of energy, that has a brilliant shine to it. It will explode on contact.

Technique Name: Abracadabra!!!
Color:None
Class: Speed Movement
Inventor:Glisten& Gloss
Users:Glisten & Gloss
Technique Description: They will move with such speed that they will vanish from sight leaving nothing behind but sparkling glittery dust like energy.
Edited by Kuro, Apr 12 2010, 05:03 AM.
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Kuro Neko •Saiyan • Saiyan EmpirePower Level: 218• Zennis: 11300 Z• Location: Satan city
Ba'al Zebub•Demon• IPA• Power Level: 47• Zennis: 6400 Z• Location: Oorium #98
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Before accepting or denying, what exact purpose do these two characters have in your storylines? I checked the thread that you intend to use them in, and the motive is quite unclear. You just mention them watching their every move and then running away. You all understand that we need to check on the specific functions of NPC's so they aren't abused or misused. I don't think it's a good idea personally if Zathura and Baal fight them unless they intend to lose, since Glisten and Gloss are both stronger individually, not to mention the chemistry you've already mentioned in their applications.

Also, a small sidenote on the vanishing speed technique Abracadabra. I'm not sure if you need to add ranks and TP points to NPC's, since that's not up to me although I doubt it. But you should understand that they should only appear to vanish to weaker or inexperienced fighters, as they are simply using their sheer speed to move before the target can trace them. At least that's how you described it. Just note that an experienced or strong fighter would be able to see them move like that. They don't just get to magically vanish.
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Raiken •Namek • Earth's FightersPower Level: 111 • Zennis: 9,250 • Location: Korrin's Tower

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Kuro
well since the people they are going to be fighting are slower then them, it would stand to reason, they they would appear to be disappearing.There's no need for it to work against stronger opponents, as their expendable NPCs. And yes I do count on Zathura and Ba'al beating them. But it will not be easy, and I can promise that the victory will be reasonable, and very believable. And the things learned about team work will be critical for their future storyline.

They may be stronger but not that stronger, and the only real advantage they have is the speed. I don't wanna give the whole fight, but everything used in their app will be used in both their advantage and their defeat. Their purpose ultimately is to alert them to the dangers of the near future, and show them just how weak they really are.
Edited by Kuro, Apr 12 2010, 04:26 AM.
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Kuro Neko •Saiyan • Saiyan EmpirePower Level: 218• Zennis: 11300 Z• Location: Satan city
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Agreed that it could appear to be vanishing for your purposes. No arguments there. That was just to ensure you understood that the technique would not work on everyone.

My personal judgment is that they should be the same power level if you intend to beat them at their best. Simple as that. It is my understanding that the Power Level is indicative of the optimal fighting ability your character can have, so basically the full extent of strength they have as warriors. It just doesn't make sense for two characters with 28 Power Level at their best to beat two 34 Power Level characters at their best. I simply recommend lowering their power level and stats a tad bit. If you want the emphasis on speed, simply lower strength and stamina or something. I believe that you need two moderators/approvers to accept the profile before it is official, so my say is not all encompassing, but that is my suggestion.
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Raiken •Namek • Earth's FightersPower Level: 111 • Zennis: 9,250 • Location: Korrin's Tower

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is a 6 point difference really so great a climb? There are various things that can play into a fight, other then the obvious( powerlevels),the individual categories and how you use them should be the bigger factor in a fight, but whatever. Doesn't really matter, what ever get's them approved faster I couldn't really care less. edit I'm hoping a one point difference shouldn't be a problem.
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Kuro Neko •Saiyan • Saiyan EmpirePower Level: 218• Zennis: 11300 Z• Location: Satan city
Ba'al Zebub•Demon• IPA• Power Level: 47• Zennis: 6400 Z• Location: Oorium #98
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The entire basis of the stats system is based around the Power Level... At least from what I can discern. The cultivation of all your skills and attributes determines how good of a fighter you are, at least in the logic used in this rp. That is embodied by your total Power Level. If it were as you proposed, simply based off of individual stats, then there would be no Power Level. It shows the ultimate strength your character is capable of. So logically if your ultimate strength isn't as high as another character's, then if you are both fighting at the best of your abilities, the one with the highest capabilities would win. This is how all computer simulations are run.

I don't really understand your persistence to have these NPC's be stronger either. As you said, it is only a six point differential anyways. For you to beat characters that have a higher power level than you based off of the stat and logic system used in this rp, the opponent would have to not fight at their best. So basically, even if we let you keep them at Power Level 34, they would have to be fighting essentially at max a Power Level of 28. So what's the difference? Either cut the stats off to make them the same or lower power level, or not have them use the extra ones? It seems like a moot debate.

As for them being one point above your characters, that's up to you, but as I said, they will have to be fighting at a max level of 28 to be beaten. That is just my perception of the stat system.
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Raiken •Namek • Earth's FightersPower Level: 111 • Zennis: 9,250 • Location: Korrin's Tower

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Kuro
I really don't feel like discussing computer simulation, against human control right now so.. I'll just bend and make them even.
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Kuro Neko •Saiyan • Saiyan EmpirePower Level: 218• Zennis: 11300 Z• Location: Satan city
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I can see it would be difficult to argue the point with you anyways... I understand your point though, since what you were trying to do was give your characters opponents that would show them how feeble they are and what not. I think that's fine, but you should understand that if they are stronger in Power Level and stats, that just means their total ability is higher than yours. So if your characters did beat them, that would just mean they weren't fighting at their top level, whether they were conscious of it or not. So effectively they'd be 28 Power Level regardless.

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Raiken •Namek • Earth's FightersPower Level: 111 • Zennis: 9,250 • Location: Korrin's Tower

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to be honest, a few points over wouldnt be too bad. But remember, being of such low levels, 6 points goes a LONG way. think about it more as percentages. For Instance, if your level 40, and their level 50 then already, your max is only 80% of theirs. So if they were in top shape, you wouldnt stand a chance.

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