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| NPC Jerimiah Crawl; Ch 3 Unfinished Business | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: Jan 21 2010, 12:17 AM (109 Views) | |
| Post #1 Jan 21 2010, 12:17 AM | Kuro |
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Forum Name: Ch1 YoFun's Big Break; Ch3 Unfinished Business( Storyline for after the tournament .) -- Character name: Jerimiah Crawl Nickname: Blue Crush Gender: Male Age: 34 Race: Human Home Planet: Earth Location: A uninhabited Island Affiliation: Yochi Rasen's Mob Eye color: blue Hair color: brown Height: 5'10 Weight: 175 Aura Color: Blue Physique: He is of lean build, and very toned. Description: He was a stren lok about him, and well kept brown hair, with deep blue eye. His skin is surprisingly soft for such a hardened warrior. Clothing: He wears a black suit most everywhere, with the shirt opened, with no tie. Extra: When he reaches a cretain "Boiling Point" or Exicted state he enters an exicted state where his skin harden and becomes blue, and hius fighting capabilities double. Accessories: Brass Knuckles Picture: IGNORE THE DRAGON !!!! Personality: He is very uncaring in terms of who he kills. He wouldn't hesitate to kill a small child if nessary. He's not much of a trash talker and is more of a down to business type, take's what he does very seriously, and is not against doing what every is nessary to imporve his effectiveness. Likes - doing his job - loyal followers - instant wins Dislikes - disgruntle children - difficult people - over confiedence History: Not much is known about his pass. He appeared on the Underworld seen when he was around 20 years old. He proved to be invaluable to anyone who employed him. After a awhile he caught the eyes of Yochi who offered him a permitt postion as one of his guardians. He excepted, and has been working for Yochi every since. He proved to be very loyal to Yochi and his schemes, even going as far as to volunteer himelf for Yochi's experiements. When he was 24 he disappeared from the streets, and know one heard anything from him, for several years. 3 years later he was back rejoining the 4 guardians. But he was different know thanks to the experiments. When ever his body reasches a super exicted state, whether it be through experiencing a high level of pain, taking significate damage, or just from pure enjoyment of every it is he's doing, thanks to a device that Yochi inplanted in him, it lwill release chemicals that will allow him to exceed his limits, it also triggers his body to release a massive amount of Endophins, causing him to feel nearly no pain. While this nearly doubles his fighting capability, he because unaware of anything else but his target. He becomes a kill machine, he barely can form conherient sentences and will continued as such until he or his target his dead, usual being the latter. Because of this Manic Mode of his, he has become known as the Blue Crush. Fighting Style: He brings the meaning of instinctual fighting to a whole new level. He has never had any proper training before in his life. He seems to be a natural at fighting, and molding ki. But becasue of his lack of training, he's move are very basic, and crude at best. But he makes up for it with his ability adpat to situation. Item List: Transformations: Manic Mode - Once his reaches a cretain level of exictement his body will exceed it's limations, during this he will also experience a massive endorphin rush. This rush will stop him from feeling pain. His body and hai will turn blue, and emitt a blue haze off the skin. His over all fighting capability is nearly doubled, but his sense of stragery and self perversation goes out of the window, he will fight until his target or he is dead. He can not fight like this for very long, the body can not handle to strain of releasing it's limits, and the rush of Endorphins, along with the added chemicals, and within maybe 10 or 15 mins, his body will completely give out, stopping brain functions, and his heart. But no one ha ever last long enough for this to be a problem. Stats: Pre -Manic Mode Stats: Manic Mode Techniques: Technique Name: Crater Crusher Color: Blue Class: Ki blast Inventor: Jerimiah Users: Technique Description: He charges his hand with his ki, forming a blue orb around his hand he will then punch his target releasing the energy, in an explosion of blue ki. Technique Name: KI blast Color: Blue Class: Ki Blast Inventor: Users: Technique Description: Simple firing of generic Ki Blast Technique Name: Crazy Crasher Color: Blue Class: Ki Attack Combo Inventor: Users: Technique Description:He will charge both hands with the Crater Crusher , and pummel his target with strikes over and over and over again. Until there's nothing left. Most effective when in Manic mode. Edited by Kuro, Jan 23 2010, 05:08 PM.
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Kuro Neko •Saiyan • Saiyan Empire • Power Level: 218• Zennis: 11300 Z• Location: Satan city Ba'al Zebub•Demon• IPA• Power Level: 47• Zennis: 6400 Z• Location: Oorium #98 | |
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| Post #2 Jan 21 2010, 12:59 AM | shane |
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just pointing out In manic mode, hed be good for maybe a few attacks, but hed be out of commission pretty fast. Thats just because with such a low stamina, hed only have one or two good pushes in him, then hed pass out. Its like his body cant take the force. Also, just a heads up. With The crazy crasher, youd have to be careful. similar to the rapid fire pf ki, you have to be weary of how much you put into each blow, its an attack that can quickly drain you. |
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Attikus •Sayain• Saiyan Empire • Power Level: 313 (appears 289) • Zennis: 10,000z - Accesories: Basic Weighted Training Clothes, Starter Scouter • Location: Attacking satan city (aka hercule city)
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| Post #3 Jan 21 2010, 01:04 AM | Kuro |
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With his character design him being quickly drained is kind of the point. But I'll rasie his stamina a bit, I do want him to at least go a while.
Edited by Kuro, Jan 21 2010, 01:06 AM.
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Kuro Neko •Saiyan • Saiyan Empire • Power Level: 218• Zennis: 11300 Z• Location: Satan city Ba'al Zebub•Demon• IPA• Power Level: 47• Zennis: 6400 Z• Location: Oorium #98 | |
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| Post #4 Jan 21 2010, 01:10 AM | shane |
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s'what i figured, but had to make sure it was common knowledge. I dont see any real problems i'll go ahead and say approved 1/2 |
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Attikus •Sayain• Saiyan Empire • Power Level: 313 (appears 289) • Zennis: 10,000z - Accesories: Basic Weighted Training Clothes, Starter Scouter • Location: Attacking satan city (aka hercule city)
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| Post #5 Jan 21 2010, 01:21 AM | Majin Giri |
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Dont go too overboard~ Aproaved 2/2 |
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![]() Majin Giri •Majin• Earths Fighters • power level: 89 • Zennis: 5000•Current Location:Korin Kalprake •Porcupacas • Neutral• Power Level: 17 • Zennis: 5000 •Location: Forests of Momasu | |
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| Post #6 Jan 21 2010, 01:25 AM | shane |
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Saiyan Elite
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Attikus •Sayain• Saiyan Empire • Power Level: 313 (appears 289) • Zennis: 10,000z - Accesories: Basic Weighted Training Clothes, Starter Scouter • Location: Attacking satan city (aka hercule city)
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