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Interesting story, though I would like to suggest a few things. Put your information in the standard format, as outlined in "Read First". Also, a roleplaying sample post is requested. Perhaps play out the details of that night. Your character is really hard to believe, so I would consider editing his story. I have no problem with him being a little unbalanced, but it's very doubtful that a student would be able to function at all with this kind of past. I would strongly consider taking out the killings. Kiriyama hadn't even killed anybody before the game. Work this over a bit, and we'll go from there.

Also, run things through spell check before posting, it makes reading a bit easier, and we can assist you better that way.
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