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Vaati227 Apr 20 2009, 11:57 PM Post #1
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Chapter One:
王室の問題 - A Royal Problem

the stars shone brightly in the night sky, the Great green field below flowing in the wind.
the wind trickled through the grass and across Dan's nose.

Dan sat up, rubbing his head. around him was nothing but fields as far as the eye could see.
the only thing seperate from the Green Sheet of grass was a single oak tree.

Dan got to his feet and whiped the dirt off his jeans. the wind rustled through the leaves of the great green oak tree.
at the base of the tree was a fountain, that the tree had grown around, making it look like it was sticking out of the tree.
in the center of the fountain there was a small pedistal. upon the pedistal, a great golden sword.

Dan made his way over to the fountain and looked at his reflection in the water.
"where am i...?" he thought.

"this is the dream world silly."
Dan spun around, a girl in a white dress with teal lining and Light tea green hair was sitting on one fo the branches of the tree giggling..

Dan: "who, who are you?"
she laughed playfully and jumped down from the branch, landing next to the fountain.

"all the times Ive been here, the fountain still amazes me... its always so sparkly."
Dan: "hey, you didnt answer my question!"

the girl looked at him with a sour face.
"well, you dont have to be all mean about it."

she put out her hand, presumably for a handshake.
"my name's Ayame. nice to meetcha!"

She smiled, and dan shook her hand.
Ayame: "so youre Dan right?"

Dan: "how did you know my name??"
Ayame: "youre just full of questions arentcha."

Ayame went back to looking at the fountain.
Dan didnt know what to say.

'how do I get home... and who is this girl??' Dan thought
Ayame: "I just told you who I was"

He flinched. "Did you just read my mind!??!"
Ayame: "I wouldnt call it that, it sounds too sinister...I like to call it sharing thoughts."

Dan: "you said this place was the dream realm, right?"
Ayame nodded

Dan: "so that means all this is just a dream?"
Ayame didnt answer, instead, she kicked the base of the tree and an apple fell into her hand.

kind of odd for an oak tree to grow appples wouldnt you think?
Ayame: "how should I know?" she took a bite of the apple. her earings sparkled in the light shining through the leaves of the tree.

Dan: "why wouldnt you kno-"
the sound of a bull horn rang through Dan's ears.

Yoshi: "DAN!! WAKE UP!!!"
Dan jolted up in his bed and whacked his head against the celing.

Dan: "SON OF A-"
Ryan: "dan!!! wake up!! you need to get ready for the Ceremony!! were almost there so you better hurry up!!"

Dan blinked. "I guess it really was a dream..." he Crawled down the ladder from his bunk and put his boots on.
Dan: "why do I have to go anyway...? I barely Know Tracy!"

Ryan opened the door to the bunk room
Ryan: "Tracy is the Freaking Empress to the muffin empire. you're coming whether you want to or not."

Dan: "technically shes still a princess."
Ryan: "yeah well, you probably shouldn't call her that."

yoshi was standing there holding a bull horn.
Dan: "why did you have to use that to wake me up >_>"

Yoshi: "I thought you were having a nightmare. you kept saying 'taisaku...taisaku...taisaku...' it was kinda creepy."
Dan: "uhh....huh...well ok then."

Ryan and yoshi shrugged, "hurry up and get dressed." said ryan " me and yoshi will be waiting in the docking bay.
Yoshi left the room, followed after by ryan, who closed the shutter door behind him.



micaiah Sprinted down the halls of Pastokai palace.
Micaiah: empress tracy!

Tracy turnes around,
Micaiah tripped and fell to the ground.

Micaiah: "ughn... your speech, I... Im sorry tracy"
Tracy: "dont be, I wasnt planning on reading one."

Micaiah flinched, but she saw the look in tracys eyes.
Micaiah: "are you, sure? this is really an important occasion."

Tracy nodded. "im sure."
Micaiah: "well, I guess thats okay then. thank you for your time epress tracy."

micaiah bowed and continued down the hall.
tracy turned to her left, and started up the spiral staircase leading to her room.

about 5 steps up she ran into soren
Soren: "what was that I heard about your speech?"

Tracy: "im not giving one."
Soren: "but, you have to give a speech!"

Soren followed tracy up the stairs.
Tracy: "I just dont see the point though, I mean, technically im already the leader of the muffin empire, and I have been for 5 years. why should I even have to have this ceremony?"

Soren: "you and I both know that thats the council's decision. besides theyve been wanting to do this for that long anyway, but youve been off gallivanting wit-"
Tracy: "gallivanting? Ive been helping the people of this country, meanwhile all the council does is decide whether or not to have casual friday."
Tracy reached the top of the steps and stood outside the door to her room, turning to look at soren.

Tracy sighed: "tommorow is a big day soren. I don't want to overcomplicate things. plus, I have too many other things to do."
Soren: "I know the importance of tommorow tracy, I was present at the council meeting."

Tracy rolled her eyes and opened the doors to her room.
Soren: "please tracy, your father would have-"

Tracy: "dont tell me what my father would have wanted!! I knew him better than you ever did."
soren flinched.

tracy closed the door. "im getting dressed, dont come in."
Soren sighed. "fine then... if this is what you want. I'll go inform the council. they wont be happy about it though. Especially Reaik."

Soren turned to go down the stairs.
"soren, wait."

he stopped.
Tracy: "im sorry for snapping at you."

without saying anything, soren started down the steps.


the doors to the Grand palace ballroom opened up before us, revealing the room we had once planned the attack against the timekeeper.
Brawler: "it looks so different now..." Brawler had gotten dressed up for the occasion, he was wearing his old UEMF uniform, unfortunately, so was I.

Vaati: "yeah, war does that..." I shuffled in the suit. I never really found it comfertable at all.
Soren spotted us from the croud and ran over.

Soren: "Brawler! Kc! youre here!"
Brawler went over and shook his hand.

Vaati: "hey Soren! how've you been?"
Soren: "just fine, as you know this party is to celebrate our friend Tracy's inauguration."

Brawler: "I always thought you and tracy wer-" brawler was interrupted by kim running into him, almost knocking him over.
kim: "achh, oh, im sorry I'm late, I got lost in the- oh, hello there soren!"

Soren: "Kimberly! glad you could make it as well"
brawler shuffled. I began to suspect I wasn't the only one uncomfertable in a suit.

Brawler: "so Soren, why did you want us to meet you here?"
Soren: "Oh yeah!"

he reached into his robes and pulled out 3 necklaces with electronic keycards on them.
Soren: "I just wanted to tell you that you three are getting these, theyre VIP passes, they'll let you move about the palace freely without an escort."

Vaati: "awesomeness! thanks."
Soren: "don't thank me, Tracy was the one who invited you."

Brawler: "oh yeah! where is she anyway?"
Soren: "Im not really sure... I havent seen her since this morning."

Kim: "Cam, Im gonna go associate myself with the other wealthy people, call me if you need me."
Kim went off into the ballroom.

Brawler stood puzzled. "But...were not wealthy...are we?"
a man with a slick hairdo and a black suit walked up to us.

Reaik: "greetings commander Kc, and commander 1337, I-"
Brawler: "dont be so formal, plus im not the commander anymore. thats KC's punishment now."

I glared at him. "yeahhhh... anyway. who are you?"
Reaik: "I am lord reaik of the empirial muffin council. one of its most cheif advisors.

Soren opened his mouth to talk, but then thought for a second.
Brawler caught what he did, and chuckled a little.

Reaik: "well its been nice meeting you two, I hope you enjoy the party."
Soren: "thank you reaik, I'll see they dont get into any trouble."

Reaik: "I should hope so. the last thing we need today is an international incident."
Reaik marched off into the croud.

Vaati: "that guy kinda gives me a bad vibe."
soren: "eh, dont worry, Reaik has a tendancy to be extremely creepy, now come on, I promised Tracy I would show you guys around the palace."

Soren led us back from where we came, and down an adjacent hallway leading down a Green Carpeted Hall to a large Stone doorway.
we arrived at a huge door that had the emblem of the muffin empire engraved on it, a muffin with a Snake wrapped around it.

Soren walked over to a console on the side of the door. "this will just take a sec."
he put his eye up to a retinal scanner, then entered a combination into a keypad below. the console flashed green and soren stepped back.

The emblem on the door turned upside down, and a latch clicked sideways, then the great doorway opened before us.
Soren: "welcome, gentleman, to Pastokai Palace."

me and brawler marveled at the size of the room we had just entered. it was like 3 football fields long and god knows how high.
we just barely started to walk into the room when the ground rumbled.

Vaati: "what was that?"
soren: "I hope it was an earthquake...I really do..."

A scream echoed through the halls.
Brawler: "What was THAT?!?!"

Sorens expression dissapeared. "oh no."
Soren ran as fast as he could towards the other end of the gigantic hall.

Brawler: "soren wait!!" he ran after him.
Vaati: "wait! whats happening!?"

kim ran up behind me "kc, wheres brawler?"
Vaati: "he just ran off with Soren somewhere."

Kim: "come on lets follow them!"
Vaati: "what? why?"

Kim: "I can sense something really really bad is going to happen."
I didn't have time to ask for an explanation, she had already darted down the hall, so I followed.

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Soren reached the end of the hall and turned a corner.the green carpet beneath his feet crunching.
he was about to turn another corner when he was grabbed from behind the wall.

Soren: "ITS YO-!" then his voice was muffled."
Brawler turned the corner and ran up the spiral starecase at the end of the hall.

He reached tracy's room, with the same emblem on the door as the hall doors.
the doors swung open and the sight turned brawler's face pale.

the room was soaked with blood, and brawler's sword, the banhammer, was standing straight up out of the floor, blood dripping from it.
Brawler went white with shock. "what... what the hell happened here!?!?!"

The doors behind him were kicked open, and multiple clicks of guns being held to his head rung through his ears.
Behind him at the other end of the barrel(s) was reaik and a group of imperial guards.

me and kim arrived up behind the guards, and kim struggled through them to see what was going on.
she gasped and grabbed Reaiks arm. "Don't hurt him!!"

I struggled through the guards and made my way to reaik.
Vaati: "Reaik!! what is the meaning of this?!?!"

Reaik: "Cameron 1337! under the statutes and laws of the holy muffin empire, you are hereby under arrest for the assasination of empress tracy!"


Chapter one end
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Vaati227 Oct 9 2009, 04:16 PM Post #2
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 TFMLC.taisaku - Chapter Two
-Brawler's court hearing-


the sound of the gavel banging echoed through the hall.

the council leader stood at his podium.
"the 382nd gathering of the supreme council of the holy muffin empire will now come to order."

"all shall sit in thier seats and listen to this, the empress's last will and testamant."
I sat down next to breawler in the visiting area. Brawler did too, except he was in Phenniumn handcuffs.

the council leader put on a pair of glasses to look at the piece of paper he held before him.
"Since the Royal family has no remaining heirs, the throne shall pass to the next of the muffin lords in line."

Reaik stood up and walked up to the podium.
the council leader held up something that looked like a badge shaperd like a snake wrapped around a muffin with green lace.

"reaik. as the next in line for the throne, I hereby name you as emperor of the holy muffin empire."
the council leader placed the badge on Reiak's uniform and bowed.

everyone else in the room did the same. save for me and brawler.
while everyone was bowing, Reaik looked at us and grinned.

the council leader stood up and took off his glasses. "and now for the matter of the Murderer." Brawler gulped. "under national law, all culprits of crimes against the empire shall be sentanced to death."

I stood up. "I object your honor!"
the leader looked at me. "oh? and on what grounds?"

Vaati: "on the grounds that Brawler did not murder empress tracy."
one of the other muffin lords stood up "but the evidence against him is overwhelming!!"

Leader: "Reaik, normally I wouldnt dissagree with the the council, but I think we should let mr. Brooks here explain himself."
Vaati: "bakers, your honor."

Leader: "whatever, continue with your statement."
Vaati: "thank you your honor." I stood up and walked to the defense box. "I Believe that this crime would have been impossible to committ because brawler was with me and Lord soren the whole time."

Leader: "and is lord soren here to back up that argument?"
Reaik: "regrettably, he is not, your honor."

I looked around. Reaik was right, soren was nowhere to be found.
Vaati: "But I can vogue for his whereabouts your honor! we were in the grand hall taking a tour and-"

Leader: "enough. your objection is contradictory to the evidence against the defendant. therefore your comment will be stricken for the record."
Vaati: "but your honor! I-"

Leader: "enough Mr. bakers! you are lucky that I dont charge you of contempt."
Reaik stood up. "If I may your honor."

Leader: "Of course, emperor Reaik."
Reaik walked over to the podium again. "Seeing as how Mr. bakers here seems to be so confident that Brawler here did not commit the crime in question, I suggest we give him the chance to prove himself."

the council leader raised an eyebrow. "what do you mean by that?"
Reaik held up his index finger. "one month. tracy's funeral is in one month. I suggest we hold off the verdict until after that date."

the council leader leaned back in his chair. "this is, a bit unprecedented. Reaik. are you quite certain of this?"
Reaik: "I beleive in chances your honor." he smiled. "lets let Mr. bakers have his."

the council leader picked up his gavel. "very well. Mr. Bakers. Under request from the new emporer, I hereby grant you thirty days to prove brawler's innocence. and until that time he will be placed in a maximum security prison here in pastokai."
Brawler let out a sigh of relief. "thank you, so much your honor."

He pointed his gavel at me. "But mark my words Mr. bakers. If you fail to come up with any solid evidence and present it to the court before the elotted time, Brawler will be sentenced to death."
He banged the gavel. "court is adjourned."



Brawler held kims hands, and said his goodbyes.
"don't worry kim, KC will clear my name I just know it."

Kim: "I know, but I'll be so worried for you."
Brawler: "please, dont worry about me. I'll be fine. I promise."

Kim nodded and let go of his hands as he was led into the prison cell area.
Brawler: "I love you, kim..."

Kim waved goodbye as the giant steel doors closed beind him, and locked brawler away.
she fell to her knees and cupped her hands over her face to shield the tears.

I knelt down beside her "don't worry kim. We'll get him back."
Kim looked up "lets...lets leave this place."

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Reaik was being surprisingly understanding for some reason, at the beginning of the trial it seemed like he wanted to condemn brawler as soon as possible, but now... I wasnt sure of his intentions.
at least he let me and kim into the palace to look around. Kim wanted to help me with the case as much as possible, even though I told her I could do it myself.

we were going back down the spiral staircase that led up to tracy's bedroom.
Kim: "weve been looking for an hour, but still we have nothing."

Vaati: "there has to be something here, maybe we're just looking in the wrong places."
Ryan: "you want to know what I think?"

I turned around to find ryan and yoshi standing behind us.
Yoshi: "heya Kc. sorry to hear about tracy."

I stopped for a second to think about why he was placing the grief on me.
Kim: "was there anyone who would want to frame brawler for this? any enemies that weren't part of the cookie dominion?"

Vaati: "I'm not sure. But I know where we can find out."
Yoshi: "where are you guys going?"

Vaati: "The UEMF war records."

we all continued down the stairs, except for Ryan.
he frowned. "No one ever wants to know what I think."

To be Continued

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 TFMLC.taisaku - Chapter Three


the sound of water dripping onto the cold wet floor echoes through the chamber.
chains lay in a puddle of water that was lit up by the stream of light coming through the bars on the window.

tracy woke with a start. "what...wait where am I!?"
she was chained to the floor and couldnt move more than a foot.

Tracy: "whats going on here!?"
???: "its no use you know." a voice came from the darkness somewhere in the room. "The chains wont budge."

Tracy couldnt pinpoint where the voice was coming from, the echo in the chamber made it feel like it was comming from everywhere.
"so how was your nap."

Tracy: "let me go!!"
"honestly I would, but I'm a prisoner too."

tracy flinched for a moment. she thought the voice was one of her captors.
Tracy: "prisoners of who?"

"the hell if I know. I woke up here about a half hour ago kinda like you just did. no ones come or gone in all that time."
Tracy sighed: "There has to be something we can do to get out of here."

"actually, theres a rock over there that just might be sharp enough to cut one of the chains."
tracy looked to her right and saw a arrowhead shaped rock lying in a puddle about 2 meters away.

Tracy shifter her arm and tried to mauver towards the rock.
"um. Im not sure if you can reach it from there."

Tracy: "I can, I just have to concentrate..."
tracy focused and the rock slowly slid across the floor and into her hand.

"holy crap! youre a jedi!"
Tracy: "pft. no Im a muffin."

"youre a colorful pastry commonly made in blueberry and chocolate chip varieties?"
tracy blinked. "what?"

"um. nevermind I guess."
tracy jammed the rock into one of the chain links and hopped onto it to jam it through.

the chainlink cracked and split apart, freeing tracy's arm from the floor.
"wow. that looked really easy."

Tracy: "that sort of thing drains alot of energy though, so dont look surprised if I pass out randomly in the next few minutes."
"its okay I wont. can you come help me get free now?"

tracy unchained her leg and helped the other person get free of his chains.
he stood up and light finally shone on his face.

he was wearing a Dark purple jacket with a letter F emblemised on the left, a black undershirt and dark brown boots.
"I dont think Ive told you my name yet" he held out his hand. "I'm final."

Tracy: "nice to meet ya. my names tracy. so why dont we-" she stopped.
final look puzzled. "what is it? is there blood on my shirt?"

Tracy "why would there be blood on your shirt!?"
Final blinked "Oh uh..."

Tracy: "forget. it. help me get this door open."
she walked over to the wall and tried to pry one of the pipes off of it.

final reached into his jacket and pulled out what looked like a socket wrench.
"stand back for a sec" he pushed a button on the back of it and a red beam shot out and cut through the pipe.

Tracy: "thats nifty."
Final picked up the pipe and cut it so it fit into the doorslot and kicked it.

the door didnt budge.
Final: "Dammit. I thought that would work.

Tracy: "wait a minute. cant we just cut the doorknob off with that thing you have?"
final looked at her. "that....that works too."

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tracy poked her head around the corner of a hallway and looked around.
"theres no one here either."

Final: "thats odd. why would they lock us up when theres no one in the entire place to keep us here?"
Tracy: "and who are 'they; anyway...?"

Final looked around. the hallway was lined with pure metal that was painted black.
along the sides of the walls were various pipes and things you might see in some sort of battleship.

though there were no signs that this was one.
They came to a door at the end of one of the halls that looked different from the rest, the others were all generic steel doors with iron handles.

this one was made of wood and hand a symbol of a Flame embroidered on its surface.
Final: "Ive seen that symbol before."

Tracy: "really? where?"
Final: "I cant...remember..."

final looked a little sad, regardless tracy opened the door and they stepped inside. the room was different than anywhere else they had been previously,
it was paneled by wood from head to toe with a large lavish rug stretching across the floor up to a bockcase that lined the south wall. A lage oakwood desk sat in front of it with a seemingly empty chair turned towards the wall.

Tracy: "oh wow. this is more like it."
Final: "more like what? this is like a place where some snooty rich person might have a book club."

Tracy: "I dont have book clubs!"
Final: "wait what?"

Tracy looked a little stunned "you seriously dont know who I am? at all?"
???: "empress tracy of the muffin empire, age 26 years, female, blood type O-"

the chair turned around revealing a man with jet black hair and a suit and tie.
Tracy: "what the- who are you? and how do you know how old I am?"

"my name is Darus Villa keshonen, but my friends call me joe. I preside over the black flame syndicate.
Final: "the black flame?"

Tracy: "never heard of ya."
Darus raised an eyebrow. "really? you havent? thats odd."

tracy had her arms crossed. "honestly the only crime organization ive ever heard of is the muffin mafia."
Darus: "well ms empress. make yourself comfertable. because youre about to learn alot about us."

the floor opened, causing tracy and final to fall through as the echoes of Darus laughing ringed through the shaft and into the darkness below.

TO BE CONTINUED.

Ryan looked up from his seat on the ship.

Dan: "what is it?"
Ryan: "theres a muffin mafia?"
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 Chapter three cont.


A white starship drifts in the endlessness of space as the acid yellow clouds of a gas giant loomed overhead.
chunks of rock drifted alongside it in an endless spiral around the planet.

Inside the cockpit of the ship, the driver has his feet on the dashboard and is leaning back in his chair smoking a ciggarette.
the driver is a man, about 34 years old with a scar on lis lower chin, the left side, he wears a black jacket and a dark red undershirt.

The ships tranciever starts flashing red and he looks up.
"who is it now..." he pushes the answer call button and the screen flashes on.

"Wolf old buddy, I havent seen you in a while."
Wolf grins "well if it isn't the infamous light. you trying to hit me up for cash again?"

"who me? of course not. I would never need to ask a friend so dear fo-" "youre not getting any money light."
He put out his ciggarette in the dashboard. Light sighed "same old Wolf."

A light on the dashboard flashed. "eh?" Wolf looked out the ship's windshield and saw a cluster of spacejunk hurdling towards him.
he panicked and hit the throttle in reverse.

"ugh. those damn sattelites. they just leave em out here to rot and they end up getting torched by the planets rings."
Light laughed "stop getting so upset about that stuff."

Wolf rolled his eyes. "so what did you want the money for anyway? have to pay someone off again?"
"in a manner of speaking. Listen, could you meet me somewhere?"

"like where?" Wolf said as he took a ciggarette out of his pack "Lorensia space port, district 326."
"but thats a couple of jumps from here. when do you excpect to meet me exactly?"

Light put on a pair of sunglasses "doesnt matter to me, take your time. ta ta!"
the screen turned off and light's head disappeared.

Wolf leaned back in his chair and let out a puff. "damn guy."
the tranceiver started flashing again.

"hmph.. Ive never seen this com number before." he pushed the answe button and said hello.
the dark shilluette of a man in a cloak appeared on the screen. "hello wolf."

"who is this? how did you get my number?"
"I hear that you're the best bounty hunter money can buy. have I heard correct?"

wolf chuckled. "well I dont like to look cocky."
"I require your services."

"I dont take jobs from strangers. I go after my own prey."
the man snickered. "I'd be happy to make it worth your while.

"try me." he said.
"31 million."

Wolf almost fell out of his chair.
"31 million? are you serious?"

"dont mock me boy, you'll find that when it comes to this sort of thing I'm, how to put it... Dead serious."
Wolf: "well I dont usually do this but... you've got a deal. so...whos the hit?"

the man on the screen smirked. "I thought you'd never ask."







yoshi ryan and dan were staying in a hotel in pastokai city.
Dan and yoshi were sitting on the couch while ryan paced the floor thinking (wait he can do that?)

Then ryan pulled out a magnifying glass from his coat pocket.
Dan: "what is that."

Ryan: "why its for solving mysteries of course."
yoshi: "so thats why you're wearing a trenchcoat."

he was right. ryan was dressed from head to toe like a hard boiled private eye.
Ryan: "excellent deduction watson. now come, we must examine the crime scene while KC is away!"

Yoshi: "wait thats sherlock holmes."
Dan got up from the sofa and grabbed his jacket.

Dan: "If you guys dont mind I'll just wait in the ship. it still needs fuel you know. it took a while to get here."
Ryan's eye looked huge through the magnifying glass. "nonsense old bean, come join us in the hunt."

...okay then.
on to the next scene!

ryan took a cotton swab and took a sample of the blood off of brawler's sword.
ryan: "thanks for getting us the key to the evidence room micaiah."

Micaiah: "no problem. though I dont think you should really tell anyone I helped you."
Ryan: "can do m'lady."

Micaiah: "Question: why the heck are you talking like that."
Ryan: "isnt it quite obvious?"

micaiah: "no...not really..."
Ryan: "well thanks again." ryan took his stuff and left as micaiah led him out of the palace.


ryan and yoshi got back to their ship, the groundbreaker.
Dan: "our gate clearance expired a few days ago, did you guys get it renewed?"

yoshi: "let me check..." he took out a small PDA like device. "clearance granted for the SS groundbreaker #2345 Pastokai space port."
Dan: "great. last time you forgot It was a bit of a fiasco."

Ryan: "yoshi why do you keep adding the SS to the name? we're not a steam ship."
Yoshi shrugged and sat down on a seat. "dunno. I like the way how it makes the ship sound more official."

Ryan: "oh yeah heres the sample for you to analyze."
he handed yoshi a tupperware-like container.

yoshi: "I'll have the data sent to KC."
Dan: "Can we take off already?"

ryan: "yeah yeah go ahead."

and as the groundbreaker took off into the sky, its shadow flew across the landscape of outer pastokai city.

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until time next, chapter 3 end.

Ooc: guess whos drawing the TFMC charachters in anime form :awesome:
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 TFMLC.taisaku - Chapter Four


the unbrella above my head let the raindrops slide down the sides and to my feet, where inevitably it would collect and form a puddle.
because i was standing in an indent in the concrete that lay before Ronan's grave.

I first learned the news when I got back to Discedo.
he was a good friend...well not really. I barely knew the guy, yet I was the only one who attended the funeral.

he didnt seem to have had any family or otherwise.
His position at the UEMF wasnt filled by me. I decided that it was best If I took my leave as brawler had.

meh. yeah that was my mood pretty much.
I was out of a job, then again I didnt really need one seeing as I got a nifty severance pay from the UEMF.

my cell phone rang. I fished it out of my pocket and flipped it open.
"hello?"

Yoshi: "hey KC we got some new evidence to show you on the tracy case. come to ryan's place in earthau."
I could hear ryan in the background. "what? why cant we go there!?"

Yoshi: "yeah yeah we'll meet you there in a few hours!"
he hung up.

I found myself pulling into ryan's driveway/dump a few hours later.
Ryan lived in an apartment building that didnt look like one at all.

it looked more like an abandon factory with a house on top.
the whole lower level was built out of concrete except for the side that faced the road.

the groundbreaker was parked in the feild behind the place. I wondered if it bothered anyone being there...
Yoshi: "Ryan KC's here."

Dan: "Oh goodie I just finnished baking a batch of muffins!"
I eyed him strangely. "who the hell are you exactly? I mean Ive met you before but i have no idea who you are."

he stifened up and saluted. "Daniel Aero, Martian Space Corps, third division at yer service"
I kinda laughed because he was doing the martian salute while wearing an oven mitt that had flowers on it.

KC: "so youre from the mars colony?"
Dan: "yhup. I joined the crew of the groundbreaker about a year ago and- has it been a year?"

yoshi was sitting on the couch counting his fingers. "14 months I think? it was a tuesday I think"
Dan: "so nice to meet you, help yourself to a muffin, the pastry kind not the humanoid kind."

Yoshi: "dude muffins are humans. theyre just called muffins because theyre from the muffin empire."
Dan: "well youre not human though."

Yoshi rolled his eyes. "excuse me for being half cookie blah blah we've been over this."
Ryan ran down the stairs and almost tripped. "ok so heres the thing, the labs in the ship, what are you all doing in my living room."

yoshi: "oh right." he facepalmed.
Dan: "I have an excuse I was baking muffins."

KC: "couldnt you have done that on the ship too? doesnt it have an oven?"
dan blinked as if I had just spoken to him in japanese.


ryan opened the doors to the ships 'lab' and him and yoshi ran ahead to a big monitor where the results of the test they did were being recorded.
yoshi read the results aloud from the screen "blood sample match, positive. so...tracy really was killed."

Ryan: "wait a sec, it says here that the specemin that the blood was taken from was 3 years old."
Dan: "tracy was a toddler?"

KC: "no you idiot, it means that tracy is still alive."
Yoshi: "but the DNA match confirms that this is tracy! meaning we cant use this as evidence."

KC: "It couldnt have been her. I know shes still alive somewhere."
Ryan: "what about...uh... soren? doesnt he know anything?"

KC: "I havent seen soren for days... I wonder where he is, he wasnt even at brawler's cour hearing."
Ryan: "you dont think..." there was an alkward pause.

yoshi: "think what? were you going to finnish that sentance or was I supposed to know the end of it? because honestly...I dont."
KC: "soren might have something to do with tracy's dissapearance?"

Dan: "the plot thickens..." ryan smacked him across the head. "ow! what the heck was that for!?"
Ryan: "Im passing on my position as whipping boy."

KC: "bullcrap!" I punched him in the shoulder
Ryan: "ow...well it was a good attempt."

yoshi: "guys look, theres something else here.
he was pointing at an abnormality in the blood tissue on the screen.

Ryan: "why is it... green?"
yoshi: "the heck if I know...one sec let me check..."

"tritium" I said.
Ryan: "tritium? you mean from like, spiderman 2?"

KC: "no you moron that tritium is made up. the real tritium is a kind of soft metal. when it oxidizes it turns green."
Yoshi: "And blood is full of oxygen!"

KC: "precicely. so that means theres tritium in the blood sample, but tritium is one of the rarest elements in the universe. you can only find it on the black market and in the mines it originally came from."
Dan looked at the sample intregued. "isnt there a tritium mine on mars?"

Ryan: "I wouldnt know, here let me look it up on google mars."
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Ryan: "here it is, just south of olympus mons. theres an abandon tritium mine that clodes down operation 12 years ago."
the screen showed an image of the mine dug into the side of the red rock.

Yoshi: "so we're off to mars then?"
KC: "this is the best clue we've got. I say we take it."

Ryan spun around in the chair and got up. "alrighty then, next stop mars."


-Chapter four end-

Dan: "ryan what are you doing in the pantry?"
Ryan: "Im taking a potato chip....AND EATING IT."
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 Chapter Five

The Groundbreaker was a Ship that ryan and yoshi had got as a gift from yoshis father or something. Supposedly it had been in his family for a long time.

it was a reasonably sised transport ship that had been modified for frequent travel. There was a Spinning ring structure near the rear of the ship which generated the artificial gravity onboard, and the back was composed of mainly the engine area and main thrusters. the front was all reconstructed after they got it.
it also came complete with a galley, main deck, a "lab area", 2 Sleeping quarters and CUPHOLDERS! (oh joy) It was a nice ship I guess, about the same size as the Ziare 6, (which by the way I kind of own now after me and yoshi fixed it up. I renamed it the Zaire vega fafter our old UEMF unit.)

On our way to Lorensia, ryan noticed that the ship was running low on fuel.
Ryan: "we should probably get to a refueling station, Dan wheres the nearest one?"

Dan: "I think theres one on Phobos, want me to set a course?"
Ryan: "No we wont make it there in time. lets try the Lorensia space port instead."

Yoshi: "you sure? there are usually space pirates there."
Ryan: "yoshi we're bounty hunters. we catch these guys for a living."

yoshi: "oh yeah. I forgot."
KC: "do you think we can make it there?"

Dan: "sure we will, its only 30,300SP away."
dan entered the coordinates and the ship turned to the left gradually. he put the controls on autopilot and jumped down from the control balcony.

KC: "so dans the navigator, ryan you're the captain, what does yoshi do?"
Yoshi: "I fix the ship. when those two boneheads get it damaged."

Ryan gave hima look "hey I help you most of the time."
yoshi: "you mean try to help, you dont even know what youre doing half the time."


A few hours later the ship docked with the refuelling station at the Lorensia space port and I went inside with ryan to pay the fee.
Ryan: "300,000 credits!?"

teller: "Prices of fuel are up since september."
Ryan: "ugh, last week it was only 100,000."

he reluctantly payed the man while I snuck off to the local bar.
it was for water I swear. the air in the space port tasted like sewage wrapped in peta bread. (ugh...peta bread.)

I sat down on the only stool that wasnt already taken or had springs sticking out of it.
I was sipping my "water" diligently when I overheard a conversation to my left.

there were too men talking to each other wearing cloaks near the far end of the bar.
I edged my eye over but didnt look directly at them, to avoid causing suspition.

"so what did you want to meet me for?"
"I need to tell you something about the-" he swiftly looked around to see if anyone was listening, thankfully he didnt notice me.

"the tablet I found in askinara." Boy have I Heard words like those many a time.
I figured it was worth paying attention to so I continued to listen.

"you found a tablet? another one? come now light you should know better."
Light: "I know I know, but this ones not fake I swear! its the real deal! it even has the ancient writing on it."

the man I assumed who was light reached into his cloak and pulled out a clear-glass like object about the size of a sheet of computer paper.
I let out a sigh of releif after seeing that it in no way resembled the actual tablets of askinara.

I probably shouldnt have though. because the other man recognized me.
Light: "you- youre the man who silenced the demon in askinara!!"

I nodded without looking at them, another stupid move.
I heard a gun click next to my head. "What a stroke of luck this is for me. The man I'm tasked to kill conveniently falls into my lap."

Light: "wolf!? what the heck are you doing!?"
Wolf: "making my way in the world."

KC: "uh...are you sure that Im the one youre supposed to kill!? honestly I couldnt count the number of KC's Ive encountered in the solar system over the yea-"
Wolf: "shut up. I was given specific orders to kill Keith Bakers."

KC: "...ok so it is me."
Wolf: "any last words before your head gunk is splattered over the wall?"

I thought for a second."only two. the game. "
Wolf: "GODDAMMI-" I kicked off the stool and ran into the main area of the bar at which point wolf misfired into a jar of what I assumed to be pickles.

"youre not getting away!!" I ran down the main deck of the station till I reached a hall at a conjunction to where the groundbreaker was.
If I lead him that way he would have just followed our ship, so I ran down the oppisite hall that led to a cafe-like area.

gunshots flew past my head and pinged off the walls in front of me. I straffed to the right behind a wall and dove underneath one of the cafe counters where he wouldnt see me.
Now this was by no means a preventative measure, but it bought me enough time to get my own gun out.

I tore out from under the counter and fired in wolf's general direction, probably missing. I heard no sounds of a hit.
by the way there was no one in the cafe but the guy behind the counter that wolf pepered with bulletholes. (he didnt get hurt...I think)

In a perhaps too rash attempt to lost him, I tossed my gun clean at his face and it kicked him backwards falling to the floor.
If I missed I wouldnt have gotten back to the ship without him knowing which way I went.

I detatched the air lock from the station and yelled at dan through the intercom. "get us out of here!!"
Dan: "where?"

KC: "i dont care just anywhere but here!"
Ryan: "do it already!"

Dan put the ship at maximum thrust and set us into a descent towards the Lorensia Space colony.
We made it to mars, hopefully wolf wasnt following.

-Chapter 5 End-
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 Chapter Six

Lorensia was the single largest space colony on mars, but there wasnt much to compete with as only 2 other colonies had been established besides it.
Rather than have a glass dome around the city, lorensia's walls have towers built around them to emit a sort of "ozone sheild" that ships can get through while at the same time retaining a livable atmosphere for human life.

to tell how big lorensia actually was, you'd need to go there, though it looks massive from space, its actually quite larger.
the northernmost part of the colony was only a few thousand kilometers from Olympus mons, the largest volcano in the solar system, so most of northern lorensia had a great veiw of it.

In the center of the colony is a shaft that rises above every other building and serves as a conduit point for the Ozone sheild, that way, if the generators malfunction in some way, the colony wont be exposed to mars's atmosphere.
While we were flying over the city, I noticed that there were buildings outside the colony as well. the last time I was here it wasnt that populated, much less habitable.

Dan: "the Mars government finally made a breakthrough in their terraforming project thats been going on for the last few years, there are underground tunnels connecting lorensia to the inside of the buildings outside the colony, but theyre still pretty risky."
Ryan: "...how do you know things again?"

Dan: "I dunno. I was born on mars so...idk..."
yoshi: "thats specific."

I leaned back in my chair and it creaked. the cusions were worn and cracked like leather and had been duck taped.
KC: "so... where are we gonna stay?"

Ryan: "I kinda figured we stay on the ship, why?"
I reached into my jacket and pulled out a couple million credits. "my send off from the UEMF says we can afford a hotel."

Ryan's eye twitched. "where were those when we were at the refueling station?"
KC: "silly ryan, they were in my jacket where I just got them, but I have a more important question, whats the date?"

Yoshi pulled up his sleeve to look at his holo-watch. (I want one of those...) "Tuesday November 23, 2330, and its...11:59 Earth standard time."
KC: "a few more seconds and its gonna be the dawn of the second day :D"

Dan: "don't do that thats my thing."


-AFTER WE LANDED!-

"Lāurensia national Library" the sign read.

Yoshi: "the library? Really?"
Dan: "we're here to find out more about the mine and who operated it."

Yoshi: "ugh Why cant we just go to the mine and look for clues."
"well," I said. "first of all that would be Illegal, and secondly, we dont have the right equiptment."

Yoshi crossed his arms and reluctantly followed us into the library.
the first floor was devoid of all books, it had nothing but a Reception desk and the woman behind it who was reading a magazine.

Dan tapped on the desk and said hello, but she didnt respond. after he rang the bell a few times she lowered what she was reading and rolled her chair up to the desk.
"well then, how can I help you gentlemen?"

Dan: "We'd like to see Dr. Kirkwell."
"Hes in the third floor lecture room giving a-"

Yoshi: "A lecture?"
Ryan: "Arent we the smart one."

Dan: "thank you for youre time."


-AFTER THE ELEVATOR RIDE!-

Ryan: "Its an abandon space platform from-" he held a flashlight up to his face and shone it in his face. "THE EIGHTIES."
KC: "what?"

Ryan: "what what."
Yoshi: "you kinda just said that out of nowhere. there was nothing before it."

Ryan: "well excuuuse me princess."
KC: "ugh. don't...just don't say that ever again."

We made it to the lecture hall where Dr. Kirkwell was talking to a group of students.
Kirkwell: "Lorensia, also spelled 'L-A-U-R-E-N-C-I-A' was originally named by its founder, Hideki Hideyoshi. he named it "sukai purotekutā" which is Japanese for "great sky protector", Obviously a reference to the newly developed technologies in the Ozone Sheilding."

he was giving a slideshow so we sat down in the row of seats nearest to the door of the lecture hall.
After he was finished the students left past us out the door, except for nora. wait nora!?

Nora: "Hey guys!"
KC: "Oh hi, what are you doing here?"

Nora: "Im studying about lorensian culture and stuff. I just love the mixture of brittish and japanese here."
Dan: "right. because those cultures go together real well."

KC: "Dan, can you stop being racist long enough to have the good doctor talk with us?"
Nora: "talk to you about what?"

Ryan: "we're investigating who killed tracy." I think he said that too bluntly.
Nora dropped her books in shock and took a step back. "TRACY WAS KILLED!?!?"

I picked up her notepad and handed it to her. "thats why we're here. Brawler was framed for her murder and we need to prove his innocence by finding her."
Dan: "you mean the killer."

KC: "SHES ALIVE GODDAMIT!! tracy wouldnt die. shes too stubborn."
Dan: "I wouldnt know, I never met her."

Nora: "well...could I do anything to help you guys find out who it was, or whatever?"
KC: "Sure, we'll need all the help we can get."

Nora: "Great!! I'll get my Items!" she ran out the door and down the hall, presumably to her house or something.
Ryan: "there are too many zelda references in this chapter."


-A WHILE LATER!-

Dan Finally got us a talk with Dr kirkwell after a few minutes of deliberating. goddamit why is he so useful!!?
me dan and ryan were the only ones to actually talk to him, yoshi and nora waited outside doing something (It sounded like they were playing 4Swords)

Kirkwell: "ah hello there, my name is Dr. Sigmund J. Kirkwell, I'm a PhD in Martian Cultural Philosophy and currently teach it at the University of Laurencia."
KC: "this isnt a job interview dude."

Kirkwell: "oh, sorry...I was just er...establishing my charachter."
Dan: "we came to ask you for your help with something from your...early years at the Tritium Purification plant."

Kirkwell: "but- how did you know I worked there?"
Dan held up his work records that him and yoshi had hacked into the LOU database to get.

Kirkwell: "listen if this is some shady deal-"
KC: "we need your help finding the Empress of the muffin empire."

Kirkwell: "the muffin empire!? its been a long time since I had anything to do with Earth affairs...lets see..."
KC: "wait a second this file says you were close friends of the previous emperor...and you... you're Tracy's Godfather!?"

Ryan: "of course he isnt, hes not Italian hes brittish."
KC: "not that godfather you idiot!"

Kirkwell: "yes...me and Ivan were...Archeological partners as well. I was with him when he discovered the Andrean temple Beneath Pastokai."
Ryan: "wow these records are pretty extensive... they go back a long time... dan where the hell did you get these!?" he was flipping through them like a magazine.

Dan: "I probably would have to kill everyone in the room if I said."
Kirkwell: "May I ask again, what exactly do you need me for?"

I put down the files I was holding. "Empress Tracy is Dead."
Kirkwell: "Oh I knew that."

Ryan: "what? I thought no one on mars knew yet. how did you find out!?"
Kirkwell: "twitter of course."

Dan laughed and wiped his nose. "you have a twitter!? ha, youre lame."
Kirkwell: "I most certainly do not, I just look at other peoples pages that offer useful information."

KC: "lets get back on track again, we need your help finding her."
Dan: "you just said she was dead though."

I glared at him.
Kirkwell: "find her? good lad even if we had a clue I wouldnt be able to-" ryan took the bag with the sample in it and showed it to him. "...this could work."

dan got all the files together and set them on fire. "what. I cant have anyone knowing I had those."
Ryan: "but we know."

Dan: "well then you best watch your back bucko."
Ryan: .__.

thats when we heard a crash coming from the floor above us.
kirkwell and I ran out of the room followed by ryan and dan, only to see people running and screaming from the top floor down the stairs and/or escalators.

Kirkwell: "oh no, the exhibits!" he made a run for the spiral staircase.
KC: "kirk wait! oh goddamit." I took out my stun gun, it was the only weapon I had on me other than Zetsumei...but...yeah Im not gonna go into that yet.

I ran after him, and surprisingly, nora followed. "what are you doing!?"
Nora: "I figured I'd be a main charachter this time around. that okay with you?" she pointed to her belt where she had a katana.

KC: "fine with me!"
we made it up the stairs to see that the entire library section of the building was a remedial wasteland.

Isles and shelves were tipped over like dominoes, the ones still standing were on fire, and there were peices of the celing scattered about the floor.
Nora: "what the crap happened here...?"

Kirkwell: "I havent the foggiest." /british
a figure with-what else-a sword juped onto the pile of burning books and wood.

"the Black flame send their Regards." the figure threw a pellet thing down onto the floor and it bounced towards us.
Nora: "watch out!" a blue light flashed around us, followed by a huge, pitch black explosion that tore the foundation apart.

the celing crashed to the ground around us, but somehow we didnt even get hit.
Nora held up a small blue crystal and smiled. "Nayrus love."

I heard ryan yell something from the floor below. "TOO MANY REFERENCES!!!"
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