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| Tagawa | Aug 30 2010, 02:14 AM Post #1 |
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The Spartan!
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Rosutohari Clan. History The Rosutohari clan is a clan with an affinity to a very odd and rare fighting technique, relying heavily one crystal based techniques. This started with the founder of the clan, Gaishu Rosutohari He lived in the leaf village and during his young days at the acadamy, he was taunted by many of the other students. He had very little, if no skills at all at being a shinobi. He could not preform even the most basic exercises for taijutsu, ninjutsu, or genjutsu without failing miserably. One day however, he was in the surrounding forest around the village. It was unadvised to acadamy students, but he ran away to be alone. He could not stand how weak he was and only wanted to get stronger. While being depressed and even crying, he found a dull, green, crystal. He went to pick it up, but as he did, it jumped at his touch and burst into his skin. It burrowed into his skin and through his arm. The pain was agonizing, almost too much to imagine possible. As he yelled and cried in pain, near by villagers found him and brought him to the hospital. Medical shinobi were brought to the scene to help but it was no use. The most experienced medics were out of the village at the time, and for some reason the crystal nulled all attempts to get at it. Even trying to cut his entire arm open failed, as the crystal beared a small amount of itself to stop this from happening. It was heading for his heart and every minute it dragged it's way slightly closer. The end seemed near and nothing could be done. The medics tried to get to it franticly, but it was no use. As the time came near, the crystal crept to his heart and everyone braced for the awaiting disaster and...nothing happened....The crystal got fully lodged into his heart but he was alive. Closer scans even said the crystal dissapeared. Not even relocated, it just dissapeared into thin air. The parents considered it a miracle and ignored the fact it was unknown what happened. Upon his release from the hospital and being sent back to the acadamy, he somehow started excelling in the academy. He became healthier and was able to control his chakra properly, his chakra even took a huge boost it seemed. Sometime later, he began hearing a voice in his head. He thought he was crazy and ignored it untill it brought up something...the voice said it was that crystal. This perked Gaishu's interest and he asked. The voice said he was there when he was crying in the forest, and he felt pity for him. As it turns out, he knew he could help. The crystal was a wierd, almost completely undocumented form of parasite. These would give the user incredible capibilities. Gaishu asked about his current performance in the academy but the crystal denied this. He claimed a persons entire DNA structure is changed in certain ways to accommodate the body's new "guest". This is what gave the Gaishu his new found ability. However, this could have easily made him great at one field of shinobi arts and made him even worse at something else. The crystal also explained once he has taken a host, his concience is revealed. As his species is put into the body, it absorbs chakra. With this chakra, it could do things it could not do before. As it turns out, the ability mentioned was the ability to control this crystal in his body. The medical-nin could not find it because it was not a single crystal anymore. It stretched itself so far, it made a microscopic, thin layer of itself right under the skin of Gaishu. The chakra it absorbed and it's actual substance was spread so far, it was not able to be scanned my most traditional means. You literally would not find it enless you looked for it, and that single thing alone. Years later Gaishu would have two children. They took on the same trait as him and got a parasite of their own at birth. This however was not such a bad thing. These parasites gave people a unique ability and in truth, were actually nice to have around. They had a personality just like a person, and could think, talk, and do everything a human mind could do. In fact, Gaishu and "Hisui" became good friends over their years together. Hisui turned out to be the crystals name, or at least what it prefered to be called. Gaishu would later announce his succesor hoping he and his future generations of family could become a clan for hire. He believe his first born son Roku to be the key for guiding future generations down this path. Gaishu later died and with him, so did Hisui. Years passed and his two kids moved on with their lives. They eventually had kids of their own with their own spouses later in life. After this, Roku would join the village hidden in the mountains with the rest of the small clan trailing behind. This would be the "true" start of the Rosutohari. Abilities and techniques The Rosutohari are able to manipulate a special form of crystal unique to them. These are actually harder then actual diamond, and are a very effective weapon. The crystals would portrude through the skin when forming, though it would be in a very creepy manner for those unused to it. The crystal would form tiny particles which would go through to users pours and solidify quickly after being released from the body. On a rare occasion, drops of blood could come out with it for those not experience with it. The blood could just come through the pours as well, giving the effect that the user just stabbed themself while using the technique. On the other hand, it is highly possible to do that if the user preforms these technqiues without proper experience. Thus, the clan has a manditory test that each member must take before learning the higher tiered techniques. These tests would vary from user to user, while also depending on the techniques being used for the test. The crystal techiques do not grow by themselfs of course. First of all, these crystal parasites drain chakra slowly similer to the aburame clan's chakra eating bugs. However, as their is only one of them, the drain is not too much of a crippling affect. Rosutohari members do however tend to have a lower chakra pool then most others of their age and skill. It can be overcome though, if the user trains raising their chakra pool often. Second of all, the crystals will only grow when chakra is pumped into that area of the crystal directly. As i result, most Rosutohari will not require handseals, but the chakra and chakra control to shape these crystals. Another odd trait is their crystal parasite. As it can think on a equal level of a human, it is usefull for more then friendly conversation. They can "scan" a targets power by a rough examination of chakra. This would not be a in depth examinaton, but it would still be usefull. The crystal could tell their host how their power stacks against the opponent, though there is always the chance of a miscalculation. They can never scan to deeply and are always limited to basing it off of the users current chakra and a estimation of how much they are holding back and how much they have used previously. Thus, the scans are hardly perfectly accurate. Higher ranked Rosutohari clan members have used the parasite to their advantage in many other ways though. Doing a variety of advanced crystal techniques and even sometimes are able to count for two people in some multi-person based summonings and rituals. The parasites are generalized as "Harikisei" as it literally means "crystal parasite". Social standings The current social standing of the Rosutohari varies highly depending on the person. Some people highly respect their clan, while some are disgusted with them and the abilities gained through a parasite they allow within their body. Some people might even fear the Rosutohari, though this would mostly be the younger citizens of the village. Roku's stories of the good ol' days where he fought dozens of rouge shinobi in very deep, disturbing, detail probably did not help much either..... Personality The Rosutohari actually have a wide range of personalitys. While these is not large percent of their ranks with a certain personality, there is one thing many of them share. They are quite humble about their ability, and somehow manage to be the complete opposite about that at the same time. The highly prize their gift, but do not wave it above the heads of others. Many of them think their gift is great, but would rather be civil with their social appearances. It is not completely unheard of for a Rosutohari to be completely over bearing with cockiness and pride of their clan though. Clan Jutsu Harihensei-no-jutsu (Crystal formation technique.) Rank:D-S Handseals:None Description: The user focuses chakra into a directed body part, and crystals will grow into the shape of a weapon of the users choice. These are limited to smaller weapons though. (I/E Kunais, senbons, Shuriken etc etc.)) Depending on the rank, a person will be limited to the amount they can make at a single time. The user will have to throw these themself, but B rank and above ranks would allow these weapons to be shot directly out from the body with a final burst of chakra after the weapons are fully formed. Of course, this would take slightly more chakra then throwing it yourself. Auto launching them with chakra would however give it a increased velocity and bit of power, increasing its potential damage and hit chance. With proper training though, the weapons could be formed to be aerodynamic, increasing their speed and damage potential without the chakra boost, though to a lesser extent. With every rank, there will be a "grand" total possible. This notes the weapons you can make at a single time if you were to mix and match weapons. You can not exceed the weapon limits of the rank however. You can not have 4 kunai and 1 shuriken or 4 shuriken and a senbon. You can however have 2 kunai, 2 shuriken, and 1 senbon or 3 senbon, 1 kunai, and 1 shuriken. If it does not exceed the limit of the weapon, it should be fine. D-rank: 3 kunais, 3 shuriken, and 5 senbon. (Grand total: 7) C-rank: 4 kunais, 4 shuriken, and 10 senbon. (Grand total: 11) B-rank: 6 kunais, 6 shuriken, and 15 senbon. (Grand total: 20) A-rank: 8 kunai, 8 shuriken, and 25 senbon. (Grand total: 30) S-rank: 12 kunai, 12 shuriken, and 40 senbon. (Grand total: 40) Haribomu-no-jutsu (Crystal bomb technique.) Rank:C-A Handseals: 4 Description: The user would preform the appropriate handseals and a crystal orb would form in their hands. They would then throw it and it would detonate on impact, sending shards of crystal everywhere. C-rank: 8 foot blast radius. B-rank: 15 foot blast radius A-rank: 25 foot blast radius. Haribakuhatsu-no-jutsu (Crystal-detonation-technique.) Rank: B Handseals: 1 Description: The user would preform the tiger handseal and increase the flow of chakra in all crystals, then stopping it to almost a full halt. This would cause such a disruption within the crystal that they would detonate into many smaller shards. This has a range of thirty feet. The chakra drain is dependent on the amount of crystals detonated, so it is advised against using this with alot of crystals in the area. Though a person can be selective with which crystals detonate, it would not be untill they master the jutsu. Once a crystal is detonated, the remains can not be detonated again as the chakra flow was terminated once the crystal was blown to pieces. Hari-Bunshin-no-jutsu (Crystal clone technique.) Rank: C-A Handseals: 6+3 for every additonal clone. Description: The user would preform the proper handseals before a clone of crystal would emerge, splitting off from their body. These clones however take a good chunk of chakra to make and put a good level of stress on the crystal frame below the skin. For this reason, the user is limited to four clones at any given time. The limit does depend on the mastery of the jutsu though. These clones will be able to have limited shape control over their body, being able to form their arms and legs into weapons such as a sword or a mace. These clones would be subject to the same average density of the users crystals. (Alittle bit harder then diamond itself..) C-rank: 1 clone B-rank: 2 clones A-rank: 4 clones Harisaigen-no-jutsu (Crystal revival technique.) Rank: A Handseals: None Description: This is more of a passive ability then a technique. It is highly complicated however and would require alot of time and training for it to work. Not only that, this could only be achived by someone who has a very close bond to the Harikisei inside of them. If both of these are done, the user would be able to manifest the Harikisei into it's own actual form of crystal outside of the user. The Harikisei would actually be able to come outside at any time they wish after this point, but they choose not to as they are still reliant on their hosts chakra to stay alive. The Harikisei would also not be able to be killed in this form, only send back to the host's body. This is because it is more of a empty shell when created. It would be infused with the host's and the Harikisei's unique chakra, thus allowing the Harikisei to control it by transfering it's thoughts in a way of speaking. Once the body is destroyed, the connection would be cut and he would return to his point of view from the host. The Harikisei's structure would actually be ten times that of a normal crystal clone. They would also have full shape forming ability over the body, being able to change in shape, size, and many other aspects. The crystal of this technique is not unbreakable, but as close as unbreakable really could get. However, the form could not be held for long as this would drain the Harikisei chakra supply. This would work like it does with humans though. If it runs completely out of chakra, it would die. Thus, they can stay as long as they can or try to at least before returning to the body. Final notes The Harikisei can only be killed in two conditons, if their host dies or their actual chakra pool runs dry. As they hardly ever use chakra other then when using Harisaigen-no-jutsu, the latter hardly ever happens. The crystals are harder then diamond, but they can still be broken or destroyed a number of ways. Basicly, if it could cut, melt, or crush a diamond, it would pretty much destroy the crystals. Sonic waves could also break these if the right frequency is reached. With extensive training and experience, a Rosutohari clan member could make their crystals nearly immune to the shattering effects of such a high pitched frequency by compacting them and focusing more chakra to dull the frequency when it enters the crystals structure. If a person could see chakra, a Rosutohari clan member would stand out among other shinobi. Rosutohari clan members have their chakra color take the color of their Harikisei's crystal color. Their crystals color will not change throughout the users life. Thus, their chakra will remain the same color as the crystal. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Well, that's it i guess. Probably my final clan submisson as this has been quite time consuming. Anyway, tell me what you think! Good comment, bad comments, don't care. Just tell me "why" it's good or bad. Anyway, going to sleep. Edited by Tagawa, Aug 30 2010, 11:15 AM.
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...This is too epic to not have on the forums, nuff said.
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| Otaran | Aug 30 2010, 02:45 PM Post #2 |
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ライフ
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Exploding crystal clan. I like it. |
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Otaran: Sexto Miembro of Yamagakure | |
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| Jamel | Sep 1 2010, 01:14 PM Post #3 |
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Yamagakure's heart.
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this clan could be sooo beast. it reminds me of the crystal girls clan in that naruto filler. And crystalanuim of FF13 |
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| Tagawa | Sep 2 2010, 05:12 PM Post #4 |
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The Spartan!
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Thanks. As i am fully awake (For the most part.) i am going to finish up some jutsus i forgot to add in before. Keep the comments going people. =D Haribugu-no-jutsu (Crystal armor technique.) Rank: D-A Handsigns: None, but requires afew seconds to half a minute of setup time. Description: This technique is actually highly variable depending on it's mastery. It would result on the hardness of the armor, how thick it is, and how much of the body it can cover. D-rank: A very thin layer of the crystal is able to cover one limb of the user. This technique is not nearly the strength of the other crystals because of how thin it is. This, it was not meant to charge in with at this level. It can however, enhance damage done with that limb (Punching or kicking with crystal armor.) and block metallic objects such as kunai and shuriken with that limb. A good amount of blunt force as a kick from someone who specializes in Taijutsu could easily break this, as well as most C ranks jutsus or just 75 pounds of pressure to crush it. C-rank: (I have to go, i will finish this post later.) |
...This is too epic to not have on the forums, nuff said.
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