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| UnknownSoldier | Dec 5 2008, 05:46 PM Post #1 |
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First in the (recently renamed) section!! I wrote this for a "make your own relief agency" project, I was the reporter ("Gabbie Archright") in the group. (Yes, I made it all up). I got a decent mark on it, and I'm really proud of it because it was my first time writing anything like it. I'm starting to get into journalism and essay writing now. Any opinions/tips/warnings greatly appreciated. |
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| Allyson | Dec 6 2008, 06:40 PM Post #2 |
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Ooooh, I want to read this! But I'm not going to right now. (Congrats on being the first to create a topic here!) Edited by Allyson, Dec 6 2008, 06:41 PM.
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| pjh1 | Dec 9 2008, 10:49 AM Post #3 |
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I'm trying to get 1,000 posts by the time my birthday comes around!! Wish me luck!!
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Hey!! I actually was, but someone moved it. But you're the actual one who had the first topic that wasn't moved here, so congrats. :first_winner: Me= :second_winner: |
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WhoBama? Nobama!!! (sorry, I'm not a big fan) Pink ROX! Mini Schnauzers ROCK!!! writer's realm=AWESOME!!! TA DAH!!! ][/color (Allyson, you get it right?) Laugh often... SMILE EVEN MORE!! xD b. happy! =) don't be afraid to say what you think! Your idea will always be better! No matter what someone else thinks! My puppy is so cute!! But the puppy for my avatar is cuter!! Allyson don't tell my puppy I said that!! He'll get mad. I love writing but not as much as I did last year in 6th grade, because my teacher made it fun and also because we actually did WRITING last year not boring ENGLISH. No offense to my English teacher. She makes it more fun than it should be. But it's just not as fun as actually working on stories in school. The stuff she taught us about, like writing teqnique, gave me ideas and I actually wrote some pretty neat stuff, but I can't think of anything to write now!! Sorry, I'm just sort of saying random stuff right now. l0l. I feel random. Oh look!! A butterfly!! JK. I really do not tolerate the words as follows: fuck shit hell dick So I would not like you to say them in my prescence!! Thank you SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH! | |
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| Allyson | Dec 9 2008, 02:33 PM Post #4 |
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I thought this essay was really good! I liked the beginning part - the introduction. Very nice. :) |
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