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Lone wolf
Topic Started: Aug 5 2009, 06:45 AM (45 Views)
Caelum	Aug 5 2009, 06:45 AM Post #1
I refuse to use a custom member title. Posts: 106 Group: Writers+ Member #31 Joined: Jul 2, 2008	Nope. It is, in fact, not actually about a wolf. What it is about, I'll leave up to your imagination. ________________________________________________________________________________________ Howling to the moon Perching on a blanket of snow Snarling at reality Watching as the stars fall Lone wolf Glancing at the future Glancing at the past Snarling at reality Staring as the snowflakes fall Up into the cold, starless night Pondering on justice, fallen stars and bittersweet freedom Howling to the moon Snarling at reality Then shaking off inescapable nostalgia Lone wolf Running through the starless night ________________________________________________________________________________________ Edited by Caelum, Aug 5 2009, 06:52 AM.



God.	Aug 15 2009, 07:11 AM Post #2
GOOGLE, IS, GOD. Posts: 182 Group: Writers+ Member #90 Joined: Apr 14, 2009	Is it about a broken meter and some horrific sounding words? I'll crit this, but I may be a little testy.
	Everybody loves the universe. If you can look past the black holes, the rogue asteroids, the gym teachers, and that paper boy who keeps throwing your magazines into the bushes, it's a simple place most of us can call a happy home. It's a good thing. However, even the obviously non-sentient universe has a sense of irony. You see, the universe is going to end. Maybe not today, maybe not tomorrow, maybe not 10120 years from now, but it will happen. One of the ways science predicts our inevitable demise is by pissing off God. But that's another story. Instead, another way that science predicts the universe will cease to function is through the "heat death of the universe" theory.


Caelum	Aug 18 2009, 04:24 AM Post #3
I refuse to use a custom member title. Posts: 106 Group: Writers+ Member #31 Joined: Jul 2, 2008	I practically never write poetry anyway (prose all the way), so crit away :P



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