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No Love (Is It Because)
Topic Started: Mar 18 2009, 09:32 PM (107 Views)
UnknownSoldier
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Is it because
Is it because I let my tears fall all o'er the floor
Is it because
Is it because I got so far I got no more
You're life breaks down
You fall back down
Do you feel as high as you have been before
Now you can't sleep no more-

And can you believe
That your words no longer mean a thing to me
And can you believe
That you got so far to tumble down and bleed
And can you believe, yeah
This life breaks down
You can't break down (with it)
Do you feel as high as you were before
Yeah, you can't breathe no- you can't breathe

It's gotta be
All over now
Babe, don't you see
I can't breathe no more-

And is it because
Is it because I let my tears fall all o'er the floor
Is it because, oh
You got no love to hold you together

It's gotta be
All over now

No-

Yeah, it's a little depressing. Not as much as other stuff I've written, but something about it and it's tune is really sad. (It is a song, as most of my stuff is, which would explain the similar patterns).
Edited by UnknownSoldier, Mar 21 2009, 08:46 PM.
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Allyson
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Yes, it is a little depressing, but hey, it's kind of expressive, right? Just one question...I don't understand the "o'er" things. Is it suppose to be over?


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Yeah. It's to fit into the tune.
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