bjullie

 

For the 'and' part, if you took away the comma section, then it would read, "I said as the man and started to drag me out the." Is that what you meant, or did you mean something else?

bjullie

 

About your last comment, the girl (Shauna, by the way) is very smart, and she cares a lot about her family, so since the man is stronger than her, she is smart enough not to keep on struggling, and she knows that the man won't let her. Maybe I didn't show that? Thanks for pointing that out.