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RedHead97	Apr 10 2009, 05:55 PM
Writes 50 Words Per Chapter Posts: 276 Group: Writers Member #81 Joined: Feb 21, 2009	Thanks, Allyson. For the 'and' part, if you took away the comma section, then it would read, "I said as the man and started to drag me out the." Is that what you meant, or did you mean something else? About your last comment, the girl (Shauna, by the way) is very smart, and she cares a lot about her family, so since the man is stronger than her, she is smart enough not to keep on struggling, and she knows that the man won't let her. Maybe I didn't show that? Thanks for pointing that out.


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