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Welcome to Write Outloud. WO (Write Outloud) was created due to my family's constant hassle on me to get a journal (in this case, WO is like my e-Journal), and write. So, I'd like to share with you, my stories, my poems, and my thoughts. In return, I'd like to hear yours.


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What Freedom Means
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Mistake Nov 8 2008, 10:50 PM Post #1
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There's a "essay contest" that was issued, and it's called "What Freedom Means to you", and the winner receives a thousand dollar prize, along with the publishing of his or her piece. This is my piece, please - rate it & give me some constructive criticism to adjust it and make it better!

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Freedom, cannot be defined as "Natural Rights", it is only one of the many results of it. Freedom, means success. Freedom, means advancement. November 4, 2008 was the US Presidential Election, a day of success & advancement. Without Freedom, would the President be Obama? - No. Would the Declaration of Independence, the "Document of Freedom", have been written? No, but because of Success, we now have freedom. So I ask you, what does freedom mean? Webster defines Freedom as "the quality or state of being free". I define Freedom, as "The result of success." That, is what freedom means to me.


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