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- Zayd Makoto
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Shinigami Makoto Male
General Information Name: Makoto Zayd Age: Apparent 23; Actual 314 Occupation(s): Captain of 5th Squad Allegiance: Gotei 13 Squad: 11th Division Rank: Captain Star Ranking:
Appearance

Physical Description: Zayd stands at 6'1" tall, weighs 195 pounds, and has a body that is fit for a god. He has golden-orange eyes, long white tasseled hair, and a moderate complexion. Zayd typically wears his Zanpakuto on his left hip strapped to his sash. He always wears the traditional clothing of the Gotei 13 when in Seiretei, however, he may choose to wear a more casual and modern leather attire when he visits the real world.
Height: 6'1" Weight: 195 lbs Build: Lithe, muscular. Eyes: Golden-orange
Personality
Personality Description: Zayd is typically viewed as a very cold, incompassionate individual. This is generally the assumption due to his lack of facial expression except for apparent apathy. Zayd performs his duties as Captain in a quite precise and timely manner that is the center of envy for other Captains while maintaining his rigorous training routine for both himself and his squad. Untypical of previous 5th Squad Captains, Zayd is calculating and manipulative while still possessing the great power associated with the previous captains.
In Four Words: Calculating. Cold. Manipulative. Powerful.
Supernatural Items
- Gigai - A faux body that Zayd can use in the real world to interact with the population there.
- Soul Candy - A pill taken when Zayd must force himself out of his gigai in order to enter his spirit state. The replacement soul that enters the gigai is quite stoic and unresponsive and does very little other than sustain life.
Supernatural Abilities
Unique Trait: Zayd has the unique trait to see a bright blue glow of the reiatsu of beings possessing spiritual energy. The acuteness of this ability is so great that he can see it through several layers of walls and even use this unique trait like thermal vision to spot beings with high spiritual energy in low visibility situations. Techniques:
- Shunpo - A movement technique that allows the user to move faster than the eye can follow. The focal point that determines the bases of this technique is speed. As speed is the main point of the technique the method is best characterized by how fast one can get from point A to point B in the least amount of steps. Training and skill are what determines how fast a user of shunpo can move; those of little skill in the technique or those who haven't used it an extended amount of time would obviously be out of practice, causing those individuals to be considerably slower, which requires the use of more steps to move the same distance and become winded far easier in a shorter amount of time.
- Senka - A special shunpo technique where one moves to their opponents back. Directly attacking and sealing one's "Saketsu" and "Hakusui" in one strike. The movement is so fast that an opponent may not be able to tell whether he was attacked from the front or the back and even an outside observer may find it impossible to tell what the movements are.
- Utsusemi - It allows for a movement at great speed leaving an afterimage behind
- Reishi Itetsuko - (Freezing Reishi) A method similar to hoho in that it solidifies reishi in the air. Reishi Itetsuko solidifies reishi around a target making it difficult or even impossible to move. This method can be countered by emitting reiatsu in a powerful burst in order to disrupt the solidifying reishi.
- Kou Meimei - (Invisible Box) Similar to Reishi Itetsuko reishi is solidified in the air surrounded a target. Then the reishi is condensed inward onto the target subsequently crushing it. This method can be countered by emitting reiatsu in a powerful burst in order to disrupt the solidfying reishi.
Kidou:
Bakudo
- 1. Sai (Restrain) - Locks a target's arms in place behind their back. Unknown incantation.
- 8. Seki (Repulse) - Creates a round shield that seems to temporarily paralyze and repel whatever strikes it. Unknown incantation.
- 9. Geki (Strike) - Engulfs the target in red light, completely paralyzing them. Incantation: "Disintegrate, you black dog of Rondanini!! Look upon yourself with horror and then claw out your own throat!"
- 26. Kyakko (Curving Light) - Hides the target from sight, by bending light. The spell has the ability to totally hide the presence and reiatsu of the user or specified object. Unknown incantation.
- 39. Enkosen (Arc Shield) - Summons a shield of condensed reiatsu to block opponents' attacks. Unknown incantation.
- 61. Rikujokoro (Six Rods Prison of Light) - Summons six thin, wide beams of light that slam into a target's midsection, holding them in place. The target is then unable to move any part of their body including the parts that were not struck by the beams. Incantation: "Carriage of Thunder. Bridge of a spinning wheel. With light, divide this into six!"
- 81. Danku (Splitting Void) - Creates an energy barrier in the form of a rectangular wall. According to Byakuya, it is capable of stopping destructive spells up to #89. Unknown incantation.
Hado
- 31. Shakkaho (Shot of Red Fire) - Fires a ball of red energy at a target. Incantation: "Ye lord! Mask of blood and flesh, all creation, flutter of wings, ye who bears the name of Man! Inferno and pandemonium, the sea barrier surges, march on to the south!"
- 33. Sokatsui (Blue Fire, Crash Down) - Fires a burst of blue spiritual energy at a target in a similar manner to #31, but over a wider area and with more power. Incantation: "Ye lord! Mask of flesh and bone, flutter of wings, ye who bears the name of Man! Truth and temperance, upon this sinless wall of dreams unleash but slightly the wrath of your claws."
- 54. Haien (Abolishing Flames) - Fires a blast of purple spiritual energy that will incinerate a target completely when it makes contact. Unknown incantation.
- 63. Raikoho (Thunder Roar Cannon) - Fires a massive wave of yellow energy at a target. Incantation: "Sprinkled on the bones of the beast! Sharp tower, red crystal, steel ring. Move and become the wind, stop and become the calm. The sound of warring spears fills the empty castle!"
- 88. Hiryugekizokushintenraiho (Flying Dragon-Striking Heaven-Shaking Thunder Cannon) - Fires a gigantic electricity blast of spiritual energy resulting in an truly enormous explosion. Unknown incantation.
- 90. Kurohitsugi (Black Coffin) - Forms a box of black energy around a target, which is then pierced by dozens of energy "spears", lacerating the one inside from head to toe. Its appearance and function is reminiscent of a common magician's trick, as well as certain torture devices used during the Spanish Inquisition. Unknown incantation.
Zanpakuto Name: Aiden Zanpakuto Appearance: Aiden looks like the typical Zanpakuto aside from having a purple hilt and sheathe and a white tassel on the end of the hilt. Materialized Zanpakuto Appearance: A samurai in full armor of black with a white tassel hanging from his helm. Aiden has very pale skin where it's visible and he has violet irises. Inner World: Zayd's inner world seems to be a large metropolis full of large skyscraper buildings that don't seem to have any walls or windows.
(All characters will be allowed to have the Shikai release of their Zanpakuto.)
Shikai Incantation: "From Heaven to Hell you shred! Pierce their hearts with your dread!" Shikai Appearance: Shikai Shikai Techniques:
- Dread - Aiden emits a pulsing dark aura that covers the expanse of the surrounding and slowly settles. Everyone touched by the auro (excluding Zayd) experiences a slight feeling of dread which slowly grows causing panic in nearly everyone and fear in the particularly weak of heart. This effect peaks after 3 of the user's posts, and subsides after another 2 of the user's posts.
- Dread Lock - Zayd twirls Aiden around with either hand while using Dread causing Aiden to glow dark red. Anyone who watches the the blade twirling will become temporarily mesmerized (1 post), halting their movements and attacks. Emitting a large burst of reishi will counteract this technique and break the trance (2 post cool down).
- Fearsome Strike - Zayd slashes with Aiden emitting a red slashing energy that cause severe damage at close range and moderate damage at further ranges.
- Phantom Sword - Zayd possesses the ability to control his sword remotely while the sword moves about as if wielded by an invisible hand. The strikes produced by Aiden while Zayd is using this technique only do half as much damage as they typically would.
- Blitzkrieg - A Zayd releases a barrage of Fearsome Strikes (five at most) in a quick burst (2 seconds). Typically, this technique is very draining to Zayd's reiatsu (2 post cool down).
(Only Captains and the Captain-Commander are allowed to have the Bankai release of their Zanpakuto. Only in the extremely rare occasion will 3rd Seat or Vice-Captain be allowed to have Bankai.)
Bankai Incantation: "Death on silent wings. Blight is what you bring." Bankai Appearance: Bankai Bankai Techniques:
- Distortion Effect - Aiden will release constant waves of dark energy from its blade. When these waves come into contact with a being of high reiatsu the being's reiatsu becomes distorted jumping from high levels to low levels from one instant to another at random. While the affected person will be able to use their techniques the effects will vary--sometimes the techniques will work exactly as they're supposed to while other times the techniques may fall short of their intended effects. The effects of this technique will be entirely up to the affected character. (3 posts; 5 post cooldown).
- Shutdown Strike - Aiden emits a purple aura from its blade. When the blade comes into contact with a being their shikai or bankai will revert to the Zanpakuto's original state for a short amount of time (2 posts; 5 post cooldown).
- Cleave - Aiden emits a sickly greenish aura. When the blade comes into contact with reishi of any form it splits the reishi instantaneously (3 post cool down).
- Diversion Effect - Zayd will emit a deep red aura for the span of only a few seconds causing hostile reishi attacks to divert from their original course and miss Zayd by mere inches. The stronger the reishi attack the more draining this technique becomes. (3 uses per topic).
- Immense Strength - Aiden condenses Zayd's reiatsu lending him immense strength (up to 8 times his normal strength; constant effect of bankai).
Background
Zayd can't remember his life before Soul Society. As far back as he can remember was when he was a young boy living on the streets of Rukongai. It was a tough life, but Zayd found a way to survive. When he was roughly nine years old, he felt his first signs of hunger and was reduced to stealing food in order to maintain his growing reiatsu. Shortly after that he was arrested. When the jailor realized that Zayd was becoming emaciated, he called for the shinigami to come take him to Seireitei. That was the beginning of Zayd's life as far he was concerned...
After graduating from the Shinou Academy, Zayd joined the Eleventh Squad of the Gotei Thirteen. He progressed quickly through the seated officer ranks until he was Vice-Captain under Ishiru Rin. Shortly after achieving his rank as Vice-Captain, Zayd's Captain died in a raid on Hueco Mundo. Zayd was promoted to Captain and has held the position ever since.
Typically, one would describe Zayd as a well-rounded shinigami. He is adept at most shinigami skills (Kido, Hakudo, etc.) though not to the point that he would be considered extraordinary, however, he has displayed a level of advanced swordsmanship, which consequently earned him the title of the Captain of the Eleventh Division of the Gotei Thirteen.
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Jan 8 2010, 12:39 AM
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1] Which is he? Captain of 5th or Captain of 11th? Please properly specify.
2] Hakuda, Hoho, Zankensoki, and Kido are basic skills that all Shinigami have. So...why are they list? Also, what is his skill with the above? Is he merely Kido-based, raping with spells? Or is he all rage and hacks and slash his way to victory?
3] Shikai is fine, but Bankai taking out the ability to use Reiatsu? Umm...no. Sorry, that's bad. With it, you would basically autowin every match. Shinigami would not be able to use shunpo, kidou, and could merely block attacks (which wouldn't really matter since you have your bankai out.) With its other abilities, they get furthered hindered. While I love rape-age, I don't see this getting approved.
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Jan 8 2010, 04:52 PM
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