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Federico, Lorca
Topic Started: Jul 25 2009, 08:56 PM (71 Views)
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Name: Federico, Lorca
[Named after Federico Garcia Lorca the Spanish poet]

Titels:N/A

Age: 2037yrs

Gender: Male

Race/faction: Morgirith

Height: 5'7

Weight: 175lbs

Appearance:
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Personality/mindset:Lorca is an intellectual. He is calm minded for the most part though when he is questioned he can easily be upset. When upset he is a different person and rather violent. He is known to be a frequent reader and does such read books including "Byron's Demon Dictionary" or the "Death Charter" series. These written by his favorite authors Byron and Mortalia Van Magus. He has a habit of speaking in a made-up language he calls spanish. HE WANT WORLD DOMINATION!

Rank: Youngblood

Language: Chellvierian, Mornglam, Asgartheri, Nordish
[All with Mornglam accent]

Equipment:
El Rey Hueso

Current Gold: 0 Gold

Style of Magic: Innate

Statistics:
Endurance: 0
Strength: 10
Agility: 20
Speed: 10
Reaction 10
Willpower: 10
Intellect: 10
Bravery: 0
Luck: - 10

Talents and weaknesses:
Racial
N/A [Shadowmelt]
All Morgirith possesses an uncanny ability to melt into the shadows, thus becoming far harder to see.

Strengths
Blindado [Armored]
Skin behaves like armor, the strength equivalent to his rank
Leather Armor - Youngblood
Hardened Leather - Aspiring
Chainmail Armor - Veteran
Scalemail Armor - Hero
Plate Armor - Lord
Vivir [Live]
Can drop his magic count completely by resting
Can drop his magic count by 1 by not using magic for 4 posts

Weaknesses
Morir [Die]
Magic Limit is 6 when not in his true form anymore causes death
Dinero [Dollar]
-30 Gold Per Rank-UP plus another minus 20 for every rank

Skills and Abilities:
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Background:Lorca was originally under the name of Neth. Being a shorter version of neither. He started off as a very curious being. Even making up a language, But also learning many that already exist. This done over time. He was a magician who loved to experiment a lot. On an attempt to make being impervious to the zombification process of mist he tested a new elixir. This elixir would later kill him in a pain and embarrassing death on a toilet. After this had happened he himself became a zombie. But the elixir has taken his soul to make a zombie of odd specifics. The body of the thing would be so well endowed with energies that it was still living. As his soul found another body he from a cemetery after a fresh burial he would return to the lab. He then came in and captured the thing and then after some fighting found it to be delimbed. But yet again it was breathing and even moving about.

The body of this thing was Lorcas true form. The form nature had given him and upon the realization of this he tried to destroy it. As before the thing lived. Every time the body was burned it attempted to reconstruct itself from the ashes. At this point he didn't want to be bothered by some thing of the past. The body he gained was that of a noble and after adopting it as his new life didn't want to give up his lavish life. He could do as he wanted now and if questioned could say the burial of his "Near Dead" body stripped him of his memory. So he brought the ashes to the best smith around. A smith who's shop ran completely on mist. Using the mist to forge a blade the form he never wanted was sealed into a sword of unique design. What was called by the smith a katana.

Never allowing it to regain its true form by keeping it with him at all time he studied the blade. He later discovered he could enter a form similar to his true one by linking his mind with it. Being his true form it resonated with his soul and he could speak to it. The swords corpse was a vessel of pure mist energies. With this he would later conquer a small village and proceed his campaign to conquer the world wasted on the humans.

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Where to start...

1. He's rather short

2. Don't know if he can be tanned, since most individuals are supposed to be pale. Also the things he wears don't quite fit the medieval age... @.@

3. Don't know if you can have Spanish mentioned here...

4. There's no mentioning of how you came to learn all those languages...

5. That sword must be worth some money. Chances are it won't pass as it is now, but even so it should still be worth quite a bit of dough...

6. The strengths are overpowered, and the weaknesses are nowhere near enough to balance them. One is very conditional and one's not even a weakness since all players would have that under normal circumstances...

7. Have those abilities been approved? If so could you hyperlink them in the application for easier navigation?

8. I'm still getting used to the whole concept so whether zombies are allowed or not i'll let Shiz decide. I read about the mutated things that were created close to that twilight stone so it may be possible... Then again those sound more like mindless things so not sure on it.
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Jul 27 2009, 12:08 PM
Where to start...

1. He's rather short

2. Don't know if he can be tanned, since most individuals are supposed to be pale. Also the things he wears don't quite fit the medieval age... @.@

3. Don't know if you can have Spanish mentioned here...

4. There's no mentioning of how you came to learn all those languages...

5. That sword must be worth some money. Chances are it won't pass as it is now, but even so it should still be worth quite a bit of dough...

6. The strengths are overpowered, and the weaknesses are nowhere near enough to balance them. One is very conditional and one's not even a weakness since all players would have that under normal circumstances...

7. Have those abilities been approved? If so could you hyperlink them in the application for easier navigation?

8. I'm still getting used to the whole concept so whether zombies are allowed or not i'll let Shiz decide. I read about the mutated things that were created close to that twilight stone so it may be possible... Then again those sound more like mindless things so not sure on it.
1.So am I...

2.As for the tan let's just say he spends time in the sun. He can have his skin burned right? That's mostly what a tan is. As for clothing I'll keep looking.

3.It'll function like a pet-language. Similar to the one kids make up for fun. Just a reason for me to throw random things out there. I fixed it.

4.HE'S REALLY OLD... You pick things up after a while. That has been added.

5.He is now out of gold.

6.Fixed? Remember that the conditional one if negated through transformation also causes his Blindado strength to be negated due to new lack of skin to act as armor.

7.No I'm using the app to do so. Same way the dude with the collar did.

8.Zombies exist. You become one after over-magic use. Thus the potion caused his body to become one after death. Just a mutated one.
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1. Yeah but they're taller than humans anyway, so even a shorter specimen would still be rather tall for a human. 5 something isn't that tall...

2. They're supposed to be pale precisely so that their complexion will set them apart from humans, giving them away...

3. That might actually work...

4. I think i read somewhere that the BG had to contain details about how he came to learn those things...

5. Yeah but that sword is way overpowered, even for 150g...

6. I said the strengths were overpowered as they were. And that first one is still unbelievably conditional. Dropping his haxxed armor would just make him normal, not weak. Also -30g per rank up sounds really small, especially given these sums increase exponentially as you rank up.

7. Won't touch those yet, but i'll motion that all custom abilities, especially the stronger sounding ones be applied separately. Similar to items on TNF (aesthetic vs S/A)

8. I know that, but the ones that exist are also mindless drones incapable of advanced thought. At least that's the way they're described someplace in the wiki
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Jul 28 2009, 08:48 PM
1. Yeah but they're taller than humans anyway, so even a shorter specimen would still be rather tall for a human. 5 something isn't that tall...

2. They're supposed to be pale precisely so that their complexion will set them apart from humans, giving them away...

3. That might actually work...

4. I think i read somewhere that the BG had to contain details about how he came to learn those things...

5. Yeah but that sword is way overpowered, even for 150g...

6. I said the strengths were overpowered as they were. And that first one is still unbelievably conditional. Dropping his haxxed armor would just make him normal, not weak. Also -30g per rank up sounds really small, especially given these sums increase exponentially as you rank up.

7. Won't touch those yet, but i'll motion that all custom abilities, especially the stronger sounding ones be applied separately. Similar to items on TNF (aesthetic vs S/A)

8. I know that, but the ones that exist are also mindless drones incapable of advanced thought. At least that's the way they're described someplace in the wiki
1.Tall is relative... To me anyone who is about 5'6 is weirdly tall. Plus I hate tall RPCs it is only a height and all being grow and even mutate in growth. Thus it is normal for a few oddballs.

2.Wouldn't shadowmelt give them away? I assume a being that it mixing in with the shadows of the are would be an obvious tell.

3.Cool...

4.It's in there now.

5.How so?
A it causes excruciating pain to enter
B it negates his defensive ability
C it costs every last penny he has... Plus he has no trade skills to get it back
D I dropped its magic reset

6.It's like that because at Lord even normal Plate Armor aint shit simply due to stats... Plus it gets negated later anyways. And I made the money weakness REALLY BAD now... He'll be broke for a good long time.

7.I am doing this to speed his acceptance... Speed was one of my reasons for learning lasts time. And I was the most active poster and kept others from going. I also helped out quite a bit. I helped keep this place running and the number one problem we had was activity. Mods took way too long to get things done.

8.EDITS done...
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1. Well they're taller than humans according to the wiki. 5'7" however again isn't that tall for a human male.

2. That's an active trait. You don't have to do it if you don't want to.

4. An attempt of world domination wouldn't have taught him all the languages. For starters one of them is supposedly ancient and no longer in use. And for him to have learned Nordish he would've had to cross the sea (or ocean whatever)...

5. A. - temporary, B. - a strength that is overpowered in the first place, C. - well it could very well cost all the money you'll get 2 ranks from now but the difference is that sum might be a lot more fair.

6. Plate armor not only offers protection but it also hinders movement as well. Hence why we also have leather armors as well... Having the protection while also not having the weaknesses is in itself a strength. Plus it should be worth whatever armors cost for each rank...

As for the money... so it's 30, 50, 70? Meaning you'd only get 30 coins when you reach Hero rank? o.O
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Jul 29 2009, 12:26 PM
1. Well they're taller than humans according to the wiki. 5'7" however again isn't that tall for a human male.

2. That's an active trait. You don't have to do it if you don't want to.

4. An attempt of world domination wouldn't have taught him all the languages. For starters one of them is supposedly ancient and no longer in use. And for him to have learned Nordish he would've had to cross the sea (or ocean whatever)...

5. A. - temporary, B. - a strength that is overpowered in the first place, C. - well it could very well cost all the money you'll get 2 ranks from now but the difference is that sum might be a lot more fair.

6. Plate armor not only offers protection but it also hinders movement as well. Hence why we also have leather armors as well... Having the protection while also not having the weaknesses is in itself a strength. Plus it should be worth whatever armors cost for each rank...

As for the money... so it's 30, 50, 70? Meaning you'd only get 30 coins when you reach Hero rank? o.O
1.But can we please drop this? I hate tall RPCs and it won't rip a **** off if an RPC is tall.

2.Where does it state that?

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Even making up a language, But also learning many that already exist. This done over time.

Can't we just leave it how it is? I prefer it to be vague. It states how he learned [Over time] and come one man. I don't even think the language system was though out too well. How big is our user base? At this point with the way the languages work and no common language the majority of users won't be able to speak to each other. Take into account most of the internet has NEVER RPd in their life and lack the creativity to get around the language barrier this would leave most people RPing alone. And then guess what we have a mass leave or bored people and we go dead again. [So bring this up in the revival thread AN IMPLEMENTATION OF A UNIVERSAL LANGUAGE] happy now?

5.Dude WTF lets get back to this...

6.Lets get back to this one as well...

And yes I will stay penny-less until Hero...
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1. If Shiz is cool with it then fine...

2. If it were permanent then they'd be continuously in a "mist form", but that's not the case as they can just enter that state when they wish it... So it sounds kind of obvious...

4. 1000 of which you would have lived in a different dimension, so those don't count. As for your suggestion - it actually makes sense that there are different languages around, since there are different races and civilizations around...

5. Huh?

6. Again - huh?
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Forget it... I had said a while back that if enough bull built up to where it isn't going to be an enjoyable experience I won't tolerate it. Thus I will permanently quit WoE and ask that you perma-ban me so I don't feel tempted to return. I will cut all ties this including the 12 ads I've place on other forums.

Feel free to delete this APP.

I'm logging off for the last time now...
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