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| Post #21 Sep 4 2008, 09:18 AM | Flam1n90_F1ght3r |
| Great Sub JJ, I'm likin where this is goin. Keep up the good work, and your descriptions and visualism are the best! Every inch of my mind is filled with the many colors that each sub pushes at me, and I'm just taking it in. |
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| Post #22 Sep 7 2008, 12:27 AM | Calm101 |
Great stuff guys all of you pretty much^^ keep it up
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| Post #23 Sep 7 2008, 08:32 AM | JJEmpire |
| Great subchapters, Flame. However, you need to 'proof read' your stories, as I see several mistakes there and there. Still, good story. |
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| Post #24 Sep 7 2008, 09:12 PM | Flam1n90_F1ght3r |
| lol, I guess so, I'll watch out for that. I really try. |
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| Post #25 Sep 10 2008, 09:21 AM | Calm101 |
Hmmmm, lol JJ is right your description in a few parts was a little Iffy but very godos tuff and you added my character in lol
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| Post #26 Sep 10 2008, 02:33 PM | Cloud_x128 |
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@SHS_Brandon: Great so far, but when is thisa actually happening? because you've said another topic that your Jack and Flamingo's Jack are the same person, so can you clarify for me a bit. @Newtkiller: Great writing, the second one you wrote a couple days ago is a bit short but it explains what needs to be explained. good work overall. @Calm: Hey! i'm the one who thought up the idea to get you into the story so don't give him all the credit, although he did work him in there quite nicely. Good job Flamingo. @Everyone: Good job so far can't wait to read some of the next chapters. |
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| Post #27 Sep 10 2008, 04:20 PM | SHSBrandon |
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I think Flamingos is after the war or something, and my storys are about the last battle at the moment We need to make a timeline topic or something |
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| Post #28 Sep 10 2008, 04:34 PM | Cloud_x128 |
| Well part of the main story has Jack as someone within the Angel society, but then your out fighting the last couple battles.... but then again there is a couple months between the end of the war and the time Crystian heads out for the angels land.... hmmm..... See where my problem is? |
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| Post #29 Sep 10 2008, 05:01 PM | Flam1n90_F1ght3r |
| My subs are following Cloud's actual chapters. Soon I'm gonna have to stop, because my subs are gonna clash with Clouds chapters and he'll be handling them until Crystian, splits up from Lance again. |
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| Post #30 Sep 10 2008, 09:29 PM | SHSBrandon |
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So its like this? My Sub (Slightly before) Flam1n90 Parallel Cloud |
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