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| Post #11 Aug 25 2008, 10:03 AM | newtkiller |
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odds are against that on this one... i can wait |
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| Post #12 Aug 28 2008, 02:15 PM | Cloud_x128 |
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SHS_Brandon: The Master of the Lance dies in battle against the black owls after the war was won, so might want to change your subchapter abit. Also the war that your in would be against the red falcons while your allies would be the blue hawks, (assuming your talking about the arkateck army). Newtkiller: I am just gonna say for now to not write anything.... remember what rhine's last words were people! |
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| Post #13 Aug 28 2008, 02:19 PM | Flam1n90_F1ght3r |
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Rhine: Two years from now under the watch tower in Viendlheim Keep. Make sure Rogue and Crystian are there too. Not the classiest thing to say while on deathrow, but ok, and that gives me an idea. I so rock. |
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| Post #14 Aug 28 2008, 03:47 PM | SHSBrandon |
Yes sir! I've been gone a while so it will take a bit to get my facts accurate |
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| Post #15 Aug 28 2008, 05:53 PM | Cloud_x128 |
| It's alright man. Just edit it, so that we can keep this story straight and keep facts and dates accurate then we'll be good. |
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| Post #16 Aug 31 2008, 02:31 PM | Flam1n90_F1ght3r |
| I read it Brandon good stuff. Keep it up. |
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| Post #17 Aug 31 2008, 02:48 PM | Cloud_x128 |
| Yeah, brandon I hope you know the setting of the story is like mideval times with swords and magic. helicopters and guns really don't exsist in this time frame... unless your writing about before the nuke sent the world into an ice age. |
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| Post #18 Aug 31 2008, 03:02 PM | SHSBrandon |
Do Airships exist? I meant to say airship but the word escaped my mind when I was writing >_> I mean the Final Fantasy meaning of the word airship though, not the futuristic meaning if you know what I mean |
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| Post #19 Sep 1 2008, 07:56 PM | Flam1n90_F1ght3r |
| Are you sure you don't want to put that last subchapter in your first set of subs for book 1? It would make more sense. Your choice, I'm just suggesting. |
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| Post #20 Sep 2 2008, 01:52 AM | SHSBrandon |
| Well I wanted to put the whole funny happy cheery parts in book one, then as it got more geared towards the battle I went to another book, kinda sorting out the writing styles |
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