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OMG i actually animated
Topic Started: Apr 1 2013, 04:32:54 AM (90 Views)
Troy
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Hey i havent posted something in a while so ill just ask what you think of my combo practice. i know the ending is lazy but i focused on the combo and not the landing and also im trying to practice so i can move to proficient. i normally dont care about ranks but i know if i actually use effort i deserve proficient so without further a do here you go!

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aye not bad troy :D, the only thing i can really tell you is that the first movement (the spin kick) needs to be eased a bit more.. having him go straight into a jump kinda takes the "real" feeling away from the animation. other than that just try to make your animations a little longer. i really want to see more :)
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It's good Troy,but it lacks power.Make something more so that we can see do you deserve proficient or not.
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Apr 1 2013, 04:47:59 AM
(the spin kick) needs to be eased a bit more.. having him go straight into a jump kinda takes the "real" feeling away from the animation.
No. This keeps the pace of the animation fluid without abrupt stops. Admittedly there is something a little wrong with the way troy has executed it.

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It's because of the poses he chose which doesn't really make it look like a spin kick, and because there needs to be preparation before the kick to give it the power it needs and the leg looks like it forced itself to hit the ground instead of doing it naturally. Don't get me wrong I think this has good flow but you need to pick out better poses.
Edited by Blaze, Apr 1 2013, 05:11:05 PM.
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