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Topic Started: Jan 12 2013, 10:17:12 PM (111 Views)
Fantasy
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I <3 PIE :D

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tell me what you guys think of it so far :D (btw, its 50 frame, i follow the rules :P)
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The spacing decreases to heavily when he reaches the peak of his jump. also the landing pose is gonna be difficult to animate.

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Jan 12 2013, 10:57:33 PM
The spacing decreases to heavily when he reaches the peak of his jump. also the landing pose is gonna be difficult to animate.
Also I don't know if you did this on purpose, but when he grabs the blue building it shakes a lot.
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good eye nide.
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Fantasy
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I <3 PIE :D

oh true :O.. yea good eye nyde, thanks for ur feed back guys :)
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Nice work man. I liked the 3D part you added in the second scene of the anim. :D

I think everyone else pointed out the flaws. Just keep going, and maybe add a few close ups here and there.
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Oh. I also just realized. The way the buildings move aren't together. One's moving down and up, ones moving side to side, and the other one is moving up. You should check those frames out and make sure that each of the buildings move accordingly in sync.
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Blue and orange buildings should move the same way,but red one since it is behind,it should move slower then those ones.And you could move the cloud a bit too,one pixel every 3/4 frames at least.As Reap said that pose when he's fell on the ground will be hard to animate.And the way he jumps o the beginning is not very realistic but for this kind of animation it's not too bad.Keep it up.Can't wait to see the rest.
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I <3 PIE :D

Thnks you guys :D
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I like it quite alot!
Good job.
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Fantasy
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I <3 PIE :D

why thnk u very much :3
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Wow,really colorful animation. I won't point anything else,pretty much what the others have said sums up what you can improve. can't wait to see the finished product.
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Thanks man :D, ill try and fix anything and continue it :)
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Che Tzy
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I like bacon!

Wait, have you started our WTFC6 Collab joint?
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I <3 PIE :D

mhmm
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I like bacon!

Awesome that's great man!
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