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My unfinished fight test need suggestions
Topic Started: Mar 5 2012, 11:16:53 AM (11 Views)
akatsuki-T_T
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Ok i dont have much so far but im getting there i do need help with suggestions on what i should do next to add on to the pivot also tell me what you think of the first few seconds that took me about five or ten minutes to make.

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Oops almost forgot ide like to give credit to droidz.org for the stks
Edited by akatsuki-T_T, Mar 5 2012, 11:23:28 AM.
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Odious
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I like your idea,but the best part is when he jumps,but it's stiff as well.I know you don't know what stiffness is,but to avoid it you should move every joint in every frame,joints are those red dots on your stick.You should work work on easing as well.
Something like this:
/-/--/----/--------/----/--/-/ /=your stick -=how much should your stick move.
Work on you footplacement as well.try to keep your guys leg on the same place while he is on the ground.

I don't expect you to learn all those thing now,and you probably don't know what those thing are,but don't worry you'll become better.Rank staff will explain you better tho.

Hope I helped.
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well, you cant start off with fights, you need to work on basics before you can work on big fights and what not. you need to work with easing, flow etc etc. here this will help you alot. http://forum.wtfteam.co.cc/topic/4692124/1/#new

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akatsuki-T_T
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Thanks you guys i apreciete all the help i can get.
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akatsuki-T_T
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What do you guys think i know needs some work just want to get some sugestions
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That sharingan needed work. the blood needs to come OUT of the eye, not stay inside the eye lid. Also it's not accurate either. I'd suggest looking at pictures and the anime (Both Old and Shippuden) to get better ideas on Sharingan stylings and such. Good attempt though! ^_^


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Forest
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Although I kind of agree with Tps on the eye, I have some critisism for him (Tps) too. Saying that the "blood" has to come out of the eye is kind of like saying that making Dbz HAS to be like in the Anime. You animate what you like, and how you like. It's his decision, and I don't think you should tell him what to do.
Overall it was pretty cool, but it looked abit weird at the end.
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The title says it all i just think it doesnt look good what do you guys think i can do to make it better
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Epixha
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is that Dante your using i liked it but work on footplacement and easing and specially stiffness
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Thread http://forum.wtfteam.co.cc/topic/4559276/4/#new
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easing before anything else... start with the ball exercise and do easy ****, then try to apply it to your movements.

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Yeah, basics first before you try anything harder.
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Yeah that was dante and i know this is going to be stupid but how do you ease.
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