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| Deleted User | Jul 21 2010, 03:41:01 AM Post #1 |
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![]() Rules of my motherfucking thread 1: if you have nothing nice to say stay off my motherfucking thread 2: no style bias bullshit on my fucking thread 3: no spamming my motherfucking thread 4: if posting cc don't expect me to return courtz unless you earn it(even if you fail i give points for effort) 5: if you want my sticks just pm me instead of spamming my thread with requests 6: if you want to use my motherfucking sticks then credit me and you are good to go 7: be nice or stay off my motherfucking thread!!!!!!!!!!! 9: don't ask about rule 8 update Raz pre Vance Vs Some Douche :3 Raz 1 WTFC3 49 Frame pre ALL stks by Me,Myself, and I. No onion and yes the ani will constantly have frames like this. http://pivotup.com/files/c1ueqaly.gif |
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| Whiteshadow | Aug 15 2010, 09:45:53 PM Post #76 |
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Wow Mountain looks well made, But the fact that the middle fingers shadow is in the middle instead of on the left side of it bugs me considering how thats the way all the other shadows are facing. It's nothing really noticeable but I think it'd look better if you fixed it :l |
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| Jettzin | Aug 15 2010, 09:45:59 PM Post #77 |
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tan's a good stk maker and all but i dont even think MCTOAST could make something this flash like and his stks are wicked sick! anyways tan trying for a shea type deal of half pivot and half flash? |
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| Deleted User | Aug 15 2010, 09:54:25 PM Post #78 |
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lol thats why i kept the cross hair.....to make such a stick in pivot id need to make about 3 sticks for the outline, 6 for shade and about 3 for the fill IF i wanted to keep it that detailed. i could stylise it a bit if i were to make it a stk and i plan to in the near future @Jettzin: Mctoast could, you can, anyone can. thanks for the cred but it would only require EXTREME dedication to make such a stick. anyone with dedication and time can do it really... |
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| Greed | Aug 15 2010, 10:39:44 PM Post #79 |
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actually i thought it was pivot cause it was in a "pivot" thread. |
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| Deleted User | Aug 15 2010, 10:45:02 PM Post #80 |
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lol oh. i wanna make my thread a 1 stop shop and joji wanted to post his flashes on his thread and and now people are doing often but meh :L |
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| MCToast | Aug 16 2010, 01:34:35 AM Post #81 |
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Ummm... I take that as an insult. The hand isnt even done right >:C |
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| Deleted User | Aug 16 2010, 03:05:21 AM Post #82 |
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well that depends on what right is. if by right u are referring to real then this picture is a total bullshit. if you are refering to the darker parts i couldn't make up my mind on them being shadows or depth, so its a little half and half, even though proportionally this is the best hand i drew in flash. aside from the 24 fps zim hand. this is a landmark on raz's homeworld and it was made by mountain and explosives. that mountain used to be bigger but parts were blasted away by sculpters making a tribute to the deadliest assassin of legend but recreating and momunmentising this assassin's legendary death grip.but thats Raz back story.....theres lots of interesting back story i have for towns and landmarks on the fictional plannet zennith...... |
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| MCToast | Aug 16 2010, 05:10:53 AM Post #83 |
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For me, it looks like the mountain from afro samurai :/ And the thing was that he think I can't create better than that (which I can, no insult) |
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| Deleted User | Aug 16 2010, 04:02:00 PM Post #84 |
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dude, it was inspired by afro samurai, im making a micro series of raz called raz the beginning and the first scene of ep 1 is like ep 1 of afro samurai. its gonna feature Zim's Father vs a mysterious cowboy hell im even gonna use the same music from ninja afro vs justice scene xD |
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| Deleted User | Sep 1 2010, 03:49:44 PM Post #85 |
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Raz update. 117 frames of a scene for raz. credits to Jon for the splat from retaliation and ME for EVERYTHING else btw look at the motherfucking rules of my motherfucking thread and have a nice motherfucking day : D |
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| Blaze | Sep 1 2010, 03:57:47 PM Post #86 |
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Tan i seen improvement in those movements, and the series is looking epic so far! |
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| Madhouse | Sep 1 2010, 04:09:25 PM Post #87 |
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lol naice, i and i dont have a "motherfucking" days, (or i wouldnt still be a virgin) lolol great job, i thought it was kinda funny how the guy didnt see it comming and raz who was looking the other way just caught it |
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| Karmour | Sep 1 2010, 09:29:26 PM Post #88 |
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dont know wat the update is so i'm guessing its that raz scene with the kunais. I like it! He was all cool about it lol. But i think the lady was a little too stiff. Even if she was supposed to be like that then she should atleast be a little slanted forward. Still nice though |
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| Deleted User | Sep 2 2010, 12:08:45 AM Post #89 |
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well i did get a tad lazy. not gonna use the detail as a crutch or anything but i originally planned for her to fall on her knees and land face first having the kunai get wedged deeper in her skull, do to the long dress she has it was aggravating , but if is was a stick man you woulda seen stuff like that still the innocent old lady illustrates the persona of the thugs raz is about to thrash |
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| Jojishi | Sep 2 2010, 01:40:58 AM Post #90 |
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Great job, I was pretty surprised when I saw the attention to the backgrounds. Beginning was great, nice 3D on Raz. All that was nice. The guy who threw the kunai was sought of "meh". It looked a little lazy in comparison to the beginning. His ending position was sought of meh for throwing a kunai. He leant a bit too much over to seem like a real kunai throw. The close up on one of them confused me a lil'. If he really threw three, or one. The scene after it they all seemed to go at largely different speeds. Again, it seemed lazy just to focus on one thing at a time, instead of having them all hit something at once, and animating the reaction of the woman getting hit and Raz catching the kunai. That would have looked great. I guess the way he threw the kunai to the ground was alright, it lacked power, but again, he was just letting it drop to the ground so I'm sure that was the result you wanted. I liked the bar stools and the rest of the backgrounds. Nice colour choices too. Overall I really liked it, just some things I know you could have done better. |
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| Potential | Sep 2 2010, 05:23:22 AM Post #91 |
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That Was Some Nice 3d There ;D And Is That Purple Blood ? |
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| Dannes | Sep 2 2010, 07:20:14 AM Post #92 |
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that was nice i like the blood effects and 3d and awesome kunai but the way the blood was kinda annoyed me it looks like it is hanging in the air but else awesome dude keep it up also there is some shakyness in the walk but it is awesome |
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| Madhouse | Sep 2 2010, 07:34:46 AM Post #93 |
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a question, how much hair gel does raz need a day to keep his hair like that lol |
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| MCToast | Sep 2 2010, 10:12:48 AM Post #94 |
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Why does the newest look like jons anim? Huuuh? |
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| Kell | Sep 2 2010, 07:04:32 PM Post #95 |
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I wouldn't say it was copied. It was a bit different, so it works. Just the woman is kind of the same. That's all. Anyways, I'll be honest, Tan. And I got a feeling your going to flame me for this, but... I don't really believe your High Rank material. I know you do not animate for ranks, which is an good thing. But, it doesn't mean you shouldn't take peoples advice. If your really aiming to get better, you just need to tweak your style. And no, it's not style biased. Style biased is when someone hates your style, and says you MUST change it. But, that's not what anyone is saying. All we are saying is to tweak a bit. Keep the same, just maybe add some things. But, it's all up to you. Your ideas are very original, and your Raz series makes things easier for you to improve. You don't apply that much easing, making it look a little funny. I'd say maybe add some easing. Movements are good. I find some positions of the stickman a little funny. Unless your going for some kind of robotic feeling. For instance, in the Vance animation. Vance went backwards in one part, making it look a little funny, imo. Just keep working on the Raz series, and I'm sure you will improve. |
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| Deleted User | Sep 2 2010, 08:12:27 PM Post #96 |
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first off....yes thank you for realizing it wasn't copied. Now Kell i thought this magnitude of ignorance was beneath you, seriously. You don't know me well enough to assume im gonna lynch you over ranks, such ignorant assumptions only reveal your limited mental capacity you are 14 now its time grow up and realize what you are saying to who. You never took the time to get to know me, you only think you know me judging upon what i post here, honestly that's very fucking ignorant and im mad because you assume im a cry baby and cant handle shit. get that ignorant notion out of your system and speak some goddammned sense. Next i would like to thank you for reminding me why i should leave pivot forums. Ignorant self important young teens flaunting their bawlz is something i do not need. Don't go all high and mighty on me because you're inter on dickdemon. Also nice attempt at CC but you are being VERY Hypocritical when stating you aren't being style biased and then saying i NEED certain things to get better. if i took more care in animations they would be better but i dont need to ease everything as you persist. next time don't be such a high and mighty ass hole about everything. and if you wana talk this out either pm me or get on msn no more spamming my thread with this ilk.god... |
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| ladiezman221 | Sep 3 2010, 02:19:33 AM Post #97 |
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OK STFU TAN, REALLY. I was on Your side..with links..I was on your side with grace..now its just dumb. Stop Leaving huge ass comments with you bitching, moaning and wining. Kell Just Gave You CC, dude, Take it, Just say Ok thank you and move on..Its CC, the animation wasnt perfect, no animation is, its going to have SOME fawls Jeez. You dont have to yell at everyone that gives you CC, Kell wasnt even as harsh as everyone else. But dude, do you really want pp333 to ban you? I Guess your answer is no. So Stop, and move on. Im going to stop this before it becomes to big. |
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| MCToast | Sep 3 2010, 07:13:22 AM Post #98 |
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Tan should take the advice to get better, so he actually could be high rank worthy C: Just imho. |
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| Deleted User | Sep 3 2010, 01:02:30 PM Post #99 |
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stop fucking telling me what to do and look at the post carefully. its not about the fucking CC the CC was okay but im sick of you monkies babying me. got it you dumb pricks? |
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| Kell | Sep 4 2010, 11:36:18 AM Post #100 |
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I'm done being nice to you. Just go away. You are the one who is wrong. You really are very childish. This is internet. I'm trying to help you. You give me this. Fuck you. E: I just won't comment or talk to you, ever again. Edited by Kell, Sep 4 2010, 11:42:52 AM.
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