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My First Toon; Audi A4
Topic Started: May 13 2010, 09:59 AM (537 Views)
OCUKhellfire

Hey there,
This is my first toon. Hope you like it. It is a Audi A4. Took about 5 hours all in all.
Constructive C+C please don't say anything about the wheels they look weird I know but it is the kind of look I was going for.

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Update (already I hear you say. You will see when you compare them the wheels and tires were wrong )
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I will change the background just it is done for now because I don't really get enough time to do these since it is near the end of college.

Too follow it through all the stages look at Here for the cartoon stages

Thanks FR3D3R1CK for the comments on my W.I.P
Edited by OCUKhellfire, May 13 2010, 10:14 AM.
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J_HUI
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it's not bad, simple and toony :D

But your missing a rear wheel :P and Im not a fan of the shadow as it looks patchy. try to use pentool or Lassotool with a lot of feather (4-8 pixels) then use the bucket tool > pour the paint to get a smoother shadow.

and give the burn tool a go. lightly on the bottom of the bumper to give it a bit of depth.
but if you want to keep it minimalistic, I respect that too :)
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J_HUI
May 13 2010, 10:15 AM
it's not bad, simple and toony :D

But your missing a rear wheel :P and Im not a fan of the shadow as it looks patchy. try to use pentool or Lassotool with a lot of feather (4-8 pixels) then use the bucket tool > pour the paint to get a smoother shadow.

and give the burn tool a go. lightly on the bottom of the bumper to give it a bit of depth.
but if you want to keep it minimalistic, I respect that too :)
My next one will look more like a rebrush with black lines round it. I knew about all them techniques you said but I love the look of Cel Shaded so I thought I would keep this to a minimum.
Also missing a rear wheel?
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Yeah man, the right rear wheel should be visible ;)
Shadow on the rims looks kinda wrong too, get rid of it pls :D
Apart from that, good toon, nice and simple! Keep it up!
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FR3D3R1K
May 13 2010, 05:03 PM
Yeah man, the right rear wheel should be visible ;)
Shadow on the rims looks kinda wrong too, get rid of it pls :D
Apart from that, good toon, nice and simple! Keep it up!
The reason the shadow is there because I screwed up on the rim and tire that would make it look much better if I shadow for time being.. Also The rear wheel was robbed xD
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J_HUI
May 13 2010, 10:15 AM
it's not bad, simple and toony :D
Wow.
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