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| Master Anthony | Jul 4 2012, 08:37 PM Post #1 |
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The wandering dreamer
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By now I'm sure your sick of seeing all my failed stories but each one gives me new ideas and new ideas means new chances of getting things right. So this time I am going to use the basic idea of the wish keeper story only take another route I feel will work a bit better. I'm just going to write and see what happens I'll clean it up later. The final day. We stood all of us as a family as as a nation as a world as we watched our end come. My name is Anthony I am or rather I soon will be a was a 18 year old guy. I had taken a trip with my friends to celebrate graduating high school right now we were standing on a beach in hawaii watching as our sun was revving up to explode. Scientists claimed it was impossible they said it shouldn't be proable not in our life time not in 100 life times would the sun go out and take everything with it. Yet... where we were watching as the normally bright sun dimmed slowly before our eyes compacting on it's self about to ignite in the largest blast any human will ever witness. Was I scared? Terrorfied. I had my cellphone in my hand and a number in the other it was my mother's number a woman I had never seen in my life. I entered the number into my phone and saved it I tossed the note into a fire pit my friends had started nearby. Chad the nice guy: Your not going to read it? me the smart guy: *Shock me head* What's the point man? If she wanted me she would have come back for me before the end. Terry the cowboy: *adjust his cowboy hat as he stokes the fire* I don't know about ya'll but I'm gonna miss you *ssholes. Me: Terry... shut up. Terry: Ah mean it ah really am you guys are great. Daniel Kato "Da King or D.K." The connections guy AKA spy guy: If we are the so great why is it we're always broke? Lucas "Loki" the party guy: We're not broke just never have any money! Walter "Big dog" Johnson the spry guy: Loki shut your mouth while you still got teeth to gab with. I meant my "Friends" On my exodus round the USA Canada and Mexico. First I met Chad who was gracious enough to save my ass when my car got stolen he took me in and I toured with his family up to Canada. Once there we met Terry what you thought he was from texas? Please how cliche can you get? So we got a job at his family's maple sugar farm once we got the scratch we headed for Mexico Tijuana tequila anyone? That is where we met DK after a night in prison he said if we bailed him out along with ourselves he could get us tickets to paradise apprently he knew a guy. That guy... happen to be Loki who gave us a lift to Hawaii and put is up at his folks summer house not long after that we met Big dog son of the world famous Mad dog Johnson king of the ring in 80's for he retired and had Big dog. So yep that's us we got me a brown haired Harvard accepted but can't get financial aid genius, a blond haired blue eyed living saint who'd give you his leg if you asked for it, a raven haired canadian cowboy who makes a mean pan cake, The youngest red headed con man and smooth talk I will most likely ever know, The ultimate "Good lord what is he on?" party boy and finally the lanky but super quick son of a world famous boxer. Not a bad crew to go out swinging eh? Terry: *pops open a beer* hey Tony catch. Me: *Catches the beer* Don't call me that and you know I don't drink. Chad: It's the end of the world who knows what the other side will hold? We may simply cease to be or wonder lost where we don't belong forever. Though against my teachings as well I too shall drink, Drink to enlighten myself drink to know all and drink to accept my end. DK: You kinda scare me when you get all Confucius like that toss me one too Terry no way I'm dying sober. So each guy took a beer and each of them knocked back 3 each they agreed they wanted to be drunk but not out of it. Me: *I watched the sun it was starting to dim even more* Not much longer now. Loki: You know what I regret? Big dog: That mini hotdog you call a d*ck? Loki: Besides that I miss the fact I never had a girlfriend you know? Terry: Eeyup ah had a chance once but I thought ah had more time. DK. I could have got laid 2 weeks ago but I was fortunate enough to find out she had a boyfriend for I got beat to a pulp. Chad: Tis our fate though we never knew the sweet kiss of a woman's lips we at least don't have to watch the end alone. Me: No sh*t there are like 2000 people on this beach. Big dog: Nah man he means us we're a crew now ya know? DK: Wait... we're friends? Loki: As my dad used to say perfect strangers often make the perfect friends. Me: Was your dad drunk when he said that? Loki: Yeah why? The others laughed but in the end we all agreed. We were jack offs each one of us but... least we weren't alone. Me: guys come here. *I pick up a red hot stick* Since we're going to die anyway and we're drunk enough to do something stupid lets give the aliens that dig us up something to see. Chad: What do you have in mind? Me: Lets brand each other with marks that prove who we are at our core. Terry: Hell why not? *Takes his shirt off and turns around* Draw a maple leaf and a lasso round it. Me: *draws what he asked watching him jump away swearing was funny a well.* Okay I'm next Chad you draw make a hammer with little balls orbiting around it the hammer of fate it's an old story my Grandpa used to tell me I chose to have this done to me. While near death and being drunk influenced it I know I am sober enough to know that this is my choice and my path. Chad: As you wish. *burns the symbol into my back* I am next DC draw a Dove with a cloud behind it so that when the end comes my soul may fly free. DK: *Draws it* Done alright Big dog Draw 3 playing cards and a martini glass. Big dog: *Draws it* there Loki Draw a dog color with boxing gloves on the sides. Loki: Okey doki loki! *burns it in* oo oo Terry draw a can of soda and pop rocks around it. Terry: *finishes the drawing and they wait for the images to come through giving them time to sober up. Me: Damn... these look... really good. Big dog: I thought it would look stupid but... they really look great so perfectly done... damn man. they put their shirts back on and sat around the fire this time I stoked it with more wood the sun was so dim we could see the stars. Chad: *watching the news on his smart phone* Tempature just dropped 10 degrees they say the countdown is about to begin. People around us started to count down from 50 some were sobbing some were saying good bye me I pulled out my own phone and brought up my mother's number I waited until the count down reached 10 and I hit call. one ring... 9 two rings... 8 3 rings...7 then... Mother: Hello? Me: *I gulped* Mother? Mother: *gasps* It can't be! You your alive! 3... Me: Mother I'm coming home... *I brought the phone down from my ear and looked at the fire I heard mother speaking something into the phone the fire nearby turned blue. 1 A burst of light so bright I dropped the phone engulfed everything my body catched on fire all around me everyone screamed it only lasted seconds but everything was one first engulfed in a pure white blast of light. I fell to my knees and they were stuck the sand and turned to glass how could I still be alive? The light dimmed enough for me to see my friends were in front of me the flesh burning from their skins only the marks we had made earlier where visible they were stuck long dead I wagered. I strained and moved my hands infront of me brought them together and closed my eyes in prayer I wasn't as religious as I'd like but now was the time. Me: Guide us oh holy one *I was branching out to anyone willing to listen at this point save the devil he's kinda a dick about this stuff.* Take us away from our sins and power so far away that we may begin anew. The blue fire was right under a pocket of lava from the nearby volcano and the molten rock splashed around me but I felt no pain. Me: Let our souls wonder no more. May we forge our own fate in the hear after. With that I saw no more a I think I was finally dead the lava poured over me and my friends and we were ready to end. Edited by Anthony, Jul 4 2012, 09:14 PM.
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| Master Anthony | Jul 4 2012, 09:28 PM Post #2 |
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The wandering dreamer
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Chapter 1 Welcome home I heard... sounds... the sounds of machines around me. I heard voices coming. Unknown: He's over here! Soon after I felt myself being lifted up I was so heavy was I gone? Was this the after life? Unknown: We have found him contact the princess now! Princess? The hell was going on? I was carried away in darkness I could hear some what most of it was muffled after a few hours I guess I was set down. Unknown: Princess we have found him he was right where you predicited he would be! Princess: have you begun the process? Unknown: Of course but why? Princess: Don't question my judgment this is very important. Unknown: Sorry I didn't mean to offend I'll go now. *Leaves* Princess: *taps me* Hello? Can you hear me? Me: I think so... Princess: Ah you are alive! Me: Least I think I am... last thing I remembers being buried in lava. Princess: Then I was successful good oh yes I am Celestia the ruler of this land what is your name? Me: Anthony so where am I excatly? why can't I move? Celestia: You weren't delusional you are encased in lava rock we are doing everything we can to break you free without breaking you. Me: Lucky me. Celestia: Now then hold still maybe I can break enough of this way to let you see. *I heard a light humming and the rock before my eyes was cut free allowing me to see out and she looks in* Ah it's already working good good I am relieved now then I shall explain what is going on. Me: Your a talking horse. Celestia: Hmm? Oh why yes I am what do you think? *she does a small twirl to show off all of her body* I am an Alicorn I have both a horn and wings. Me: I wonder if that branch I got branded with was posionious. Celestia: *giggles* Your not tripping as you say it trust me you are perfectly sane but I can tell you clearly don't care about how you arrived here I want to introduce you to someone wait right here. *Leaves the room* Me: Not like I'm going anywhere. Normally I'm not a bitter person but right now I didn't care who she was or what was going on just wanted to move around guess 4 straight years of reading fan fictions has desensitized me to the bizzare. Soon after Celestia returned with a purple mini horse with a horn on it's head. Purple mini horse: Is this him? Celestia: Indeed Twilight this is Anthony how you doing in there? Me: *Bitterly* Rock solid. Twilight: Kinda bitter isn't he? Celestia: Oh don't let it bother you go ahead ask him what you wanted. Twilight: *moves up to me and peers into my eye hole* Are you human? Me: Last time I checked why? Twilight: Do you know what this is? *hold up a smart phone* Me: That's my smart phone why isn't it thrashed from the lava? Twilight: So it's yours? Wow. Celestia: Anthony the process should be complete try to move. I rocked the lava rock and felt it starting to give and I burst free and fell to the ground. my back legs felt weird they bent the wrong way. I got to my feet clumsily and looked at my hands which were now hooves. Me: You turned me into a horse didn't you? Celestia: *smiles and nods her head* Me: what for? Celestia: *Claps her hooves together* Ah your quick too just like I thought you would be good good. Come over here please Twilight: Princess what is going on? Celestia: Twilight Sparkle I'd like you to met my new apprentice. Twilight: *her reality shatters behind her and she whines* Eh? Celestia: You heard me. *Trots over to the door* When your finished talking meet me in the throne room After figuring out how to walk I started to leave the room and was pinned to the wall by Twilight's magic. Twilight: What have you done!? Me: I... woke up? Twilight: How did you become her apprentice why are you her apprentice!? Me: I don't know let go of me. Twilight: *lets me go* I can't believe you! You can't just waltz in and take over my life! Celestia: Twilight Sparkle stop bothering my apprentice! Twilight: but Celestia! Celestia: how dare you speak to me in such a manner come both of you! Me: *So I followed her to the throne room* Celestia: *sits on her throne* Now then to explain further you Anthony are my apprentice you Twilight are dismissed. Twilight: B-but I've been your apprentice since I was 8 years old! Celestia: Yeah it's time to move on now scoot. Twilight: Princess... Celestia: Now then Anthony. me: Yeah? Celestia: I want to move into your quarters at once we will begin your first lesson soon after. Twilight: I'll show you were it is. Celestia: Good idea you can clean out your things while your there. *pulls out a scroll and starts reading it giggling softly* Ah John jesco you draw me as a sexual love monster hmm live it up now because your now on my list. *writes his name under Dan vs.* Live it up while you can you psychotic midget I always get what I want in the end. Twilight: I can't figure out what is wrong with her? Anthony: She's possessed. Twilight: Eh? Anthony: She's possessed whoever saved me it clearly wasn't her. Twilight: What are you saying? Anthony: I'm saying that Celestia or whatever her name is either a fake or possessed that clearly isn't who saved me that much I know. I've always been good at reading people and that person only wants to use me for their own ends. Twilight: But what can I do? Anthony: Don't you have anyone to help you? Twilight: Not really I don't have any friends. Anthony: Huh well I'm not a friend but I'll be your ally lets flush her out. *leaves the room.* They return to the throne room where she was working on her list still. Celestia: What do you want why is she still here? Anthony: She is here because she belongs her and I am here to kick your ass. Twilight: You can't talk to her like that! Anthony: If it was really her no of course not. Celestia: What are you talking about? Anthony: *grabs a spear attached to the wall nearby and throws it at her she panicks and it stabs her. Twilight: Princess! Before there eyes Celestia flickers and shifts her form into that of a large doll that goes limp. Twilight: I don't believe it... Anthony: Told yeah. *he pulls the spear out and and tosses the doll on the floor then cuts it open with the spear* Now then... Twilight: What are you doing now? Anthony: Conducting a search lets see who made this thing and for what... *he pulls out a white orb pulsing with a soothing light inside* Interesting what is this? Twilight: I have no idea there is no record of such a thing what does this all mean? Anthony: It means your princesses and the one that freed me has been taken away and replaced look here. *pulls out a note and reads it* My dearest subjects I regret to inform you that I must take my leave. The sorrow in my heart has grown to great to bare and I must leave for a time to compose myself. I leave Prince blue blood in charge of Royal affairs and for my absence to be kept quiet until such time as I return. Do not look for me I will not be found I need this time please give me 1 month I will return I promise. Princess Celestia. Twilight: *takes the note and looks it over* This is her handwriting.* Anthony: *pulls out another letter from inside the doll* Capalon eat this when you have finished reading it. Your programming is breaking down you will not be able to maintaine your charade much longer report back now for you devlop free will if discovered leave the other letter behind as we discussed we will have to step up our plans if you are found out.* Okay based on what I can gather an organization has come together to commit some kind of act against this kingdom they needed to replace your leader to do so most likely they wanted their fake to pass a bill or alter the military or something else. This ink... is still fresh it smudges a little so this was written today I'd wager or just a few hours ago and they don't know the doll or capalon has been found out yet. So if we destroy this and find where they took the princess for they move on with their plans we might be able to stop what's coming. Twilight: How did you figure all that out so quickly? Anthony: I think a lot. Now then what do we do first? Twilight: I have no idea I'm just an apprentice! Anthony: Come on now if you've been studying under her for as long as you claim you must know of a few places that would be perfect for holding her captive. Twilight: *Still scared but she thinks* Well... There are a few places in the kingdom that the princesses magic wouldn't be able to fuction in. While she is a goddess her power is derived from her subjects and the sun it's self without being around either it would dwindle and fade. The only place around her that can do that is the silent hills. The bizzare magical energy of that area blocks out all magic of any kind. Anthony: Hmm that should do it then lets see. *picks up a the spear* Lets go. Twilight: Aren't you scared? Anthony: Not a bit lets go prevent a tragedy. *runs off* Twilight: (Wow he's smart and brave.) *follows him* They soon arrived at the silent hills true to their name there wasn't a sound anywhere but their own hoofsteps. Twilight: It's so quiet I don't like it. Anthony: Stay focused. They marched through it until they came across the largest hill in the area and climbed it to get a look around once on top they spotted an area with a camp fire and headed that way. At the campsite was Celestia and a collection of some of that worlds greatest monsters and villians. Nightmare moon: Would you idiots hurry up our plans will fall through if we don't hurry! Discord: You don't like it you do it. Nightmare moon: you know I can't tis to early for my return I'm using most of my energy just to project my image down here. Discord: It's no easier for me I'm doing the same thing least I'm working. Nightmare moon: Well I'm also much further away then you are! ????: Silence both of you! Nightmare moon: Sorry my lady. ????: *mist seeps out of her mouth she was Arctic storm ruler of the ice kingdom and Celestia's poplar opposite. while Celestia brought light and warmth she brought death and the fridged cold. And also unlike Celestia she was always in her most powerful form no one knew her casual name or apperance. Her flank was made of ice and wore a long cape made of large snow flakes. Her eyes and mouth poured out mist and her horn was a icicle while her wings made of the same material as the Aurora borialis* It's bad enough I lost my kingdom once I will not lose it again because you two can't get along. Now focus or so help me when you do get free I will not be there to support you! They both apologize and resume what they were doing. Arctic storm: *looks behind herself but notices nothing* Hmm... *she blows on her hoof making a snow ball and tosses it at the tree she was looking at. It freezes solid and shatters revealing Twilight and Anthony. Anthony: We're exposed! *he rushes forward with the spear from the throne room. Edited by Anthony, Jul 7 2012, 01:32 PM.
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