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The Cursed; imagin LoaS...exept with school too
Topic Started: Mar 7 2009, 01:44 AM (226 Views)
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Half demon demi god
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(while this probably goes under fan-fic there are too many variations to my idea that the only resemblence to MMZX would be Mavericks and bio-metals)

Ch 1:an imposing war

"*huff huff* I'm almost there *huff huff*" a girl said as she was running away from a group of soldiers
"HEY SHE'S OVER HERE" the lead soldier said as he caught up
"dammit i can't let then catch me...i guess now's a good time to actually use this Bio-metal" The girl said as she turned around and pointed her gun at the soldeirs
"h-hey what the hell do you think you doing"
"what does it look like" The girl said as she fired
"ahhh"
"alright i got rid of him now i have to get back to the shelter" The girl said as she turned and started running again. "man i wish this suit came with a boost system dashing would've been a lot faster....and less tiring"
after 5 minutes of running the Girl goes into an old millitary base and slumps down on the couch
"*sigh* i wish i could just blend in with the humans like all the Hunters but i guess that can't be possible if i can't get this armor off" the girl thought to herself
meanwhile somewhere else
"dammit why the hell am i always getting caught" Al said as he ran out of a building getting chased by security drones "sheesh these things are almost as annoying as Mavericks"
"well maybe if we were more discreet boss we wouldn't have to worry about this" Mike said following close behind him
"will you stop calling him boss this gang only has 3 people in it Mike" Kent pointed out
"he's got a point you know"
"oh bite me" Mike replied irritated
"say why aren't we fighting back" Kent asked
"meh don't need to get in any more trouble than we already are don't 'cha think" Al replied
"you got a point there" Kent said as they all broke off into 3 different directions
"man why do we always split up...ah whatever i guess i can go to that old base i saw in the old city" Al said as he ran towards the remains of the old city
"hmph i got the forest path again" Mike said as he ran into a tree and started hopping around
"*sighs* i got the Desert again eh" Kent said as he hopped into a jeep and drove off
"hm creepy place" Al said as he turned the lights on
"!!"
the Girl gets up and points her gun at Al as he does the same
"who the hell are you"the girl shouted out
"i'd ask you the same thing....from the looks of it your a hunter those Cyborg aliens tha thelped the mavericks bomb this city" Al replied
"...."
"i guess that means yes......so why haven't you taken off your armor" Al said
"...i can't...it's stuck" The girl replied
"....want some help?" Al said
"why would you want to help me your society considers me a monster..."the girl replied sadly
"i don't care i'm a criminal anyways"Al said
"...okay then" the girl replies seeming happier
meanwhile at the Security force main tower
"so the voters have approved we will go to war with the reploid mavericks and their supporters"
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Nice job, watch grammer, use spellchecker!
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