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| Dark Random Guy | Jun 6 2011, 11:53 AM Post #1 |
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One day i looked through the unfunny pirates comics and thought of my own interpretations to them. though be warned, i will be stepping in with the same of humour UFG is used to. Not the jokes like Forumite Comics had where noone got them. So without further ado. I present part 1 of this. [REMOVED UNTIL I FINISH THE FIXED VERSION WHICH I'LL PUT UP WHEN I FIX THE FLAWS POINTED OUT] enjoy and give opinions if you want. Edited by Dark Random Guy, Jun 11 2011, 01:41 PM.
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| Savvy Spartan | Jun 7 2011, 05:46 AM Post #2 |
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Your comics are awful !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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| Skye | Jun 7 2011, 07:40 AM Post #3 |
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Because originality is overrated. |
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| Dark Random Guy | Jun 7 2011, 08:22 AM Post #4 |
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further proof that you didn't even read the damn thing before bitching. because the ONLY similarity with Unfunny Pirates is the name. If you'd actually read it you'd know that. |
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| Zocker | Jun 7 2011, 08:34 AM Post #5 |
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You might want to change the name then. If you don't want them to complain. |
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| Dark Random Guy | Jun 7 2011, 08:42 AM Post #6 |
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Actually i kind of saw the fact that Regi would bitch about it coming. I just didn't expect the bitching to be on that level of stupid. But yeah. I'll probably change the name later. |
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| Skye | Jun 7 2011, 09:00 AM Post #7 |
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Okay okay, the originality comment was a jab at me taking Andrew's comment, but if you wanna have it me making fun of your unfunny comic, so be it. |
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| Dark Random Guy | Jun 7 2011, 09:37 AM Post #8 |
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Oh. Sorry about that then. it's just that nearly every response i've seen from you since...that incident...has been some form of bashing. can you expect me not to think the worst of it? though i'm in agreement that what Andrew said...well it's just as stupid as what i thought your comment was supposed to be. Seriously, if someone is gonna say something sucks they should at least have the common sense to point out why so it can be fixed. Edited by Dark Random Guy, Jun 7 2011, 09:41 AM.
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| Skye | Jun 7 2011, 10:02 AM Post #9 |
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Okay dude, here's what I see wrong with the comic. Bear with me. First off, the character designs. Now this is not me shitting myself because you have different interpretations of the people here, or maybe it is. But, in a concise statement, I connect all your designs with characters from animes. If my weeaboo memory serves me good, you look like that one dude from Black Cat, Kyle looks like Kittan from Gurren Lagann, and Myth looks like Natsu from Fairy Tail. I may be wrong with the inspirations, but the fact that they're similar is close enough. Second, the writing. The joke seems to fail me. Myth has no balls is hard to turn into a punchline. I also don't understand the point of you and Kyle turning into gods. Where does that come from? No where? That's just bad story telling. As an alternative, you could write "What if Kyle and I were gods?" and make it as a hypothetical, so no explanation prior to the god achieving needs to be made. Lastly, it's cool to take the piss out of Myth in comics. But just be more clever than "LOL U HAV NO BULLZ" Last, well, what's the point of this being an alternate version of the story? This has nothing to do with the Unfunny Pirates at all if any. The only thing it has in common is that the likenesses of Kyle and Myth are in it. This might as well be more of the forumite comics you do, as they are about the forumites. Is that constructive enough? Edited by Skye, Jun 7 2011, 10:03 AM.
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| Dark Random Guy | Jun 7 2011, 12:34 PM Post #10 |
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this is constructive enough. finally you actually gave some reasons... i'd like to point out that in the case of the character designs that is actually purely unintentional. i don't watch alot of anime myself so the only one i noticed a similarity with out of those mentioned was Gurren Lagann of which it's been years since i've watched. As for the writing. The gods thing was meant to play out with showing how they'd use their powers of god and then the story would be a flashback to how they'd become them. In this case Dark and Kyle are being trolls with their powers and using them to...well that part should be self-explanatory. Also, it was mostly going to play out with a focus on the jokes rather than story. But yeah. I admit i fucked it up. I'll do a second take of part 1 and throw that on there instead if that sorts out the problem (maybe also try and fix the designs?). The "alternate unfunny pirates" thing is more because it features unfunny gamer members specifically. Forumite Comics doesn't. It's focused on making fun of a wide variety of internet forumite stereotypes. eitherway i'm at least glad you have reasons. now out of curiosity what made you just randomly hate forumite comics out of nowhere after previously complimenting it multiple times? any constructive reasons for that because i'd like to know what these are as well if you don't mind (admittedly this isn't the right topic to discuss this but last i checked there aren't any rules here against going off topic). Edited by Dark Random Guy, Jun 7 2011, 12:36 PM.
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