Welcome Guest
[Log In]
[Register]
| Uh, check out my chatbox here http://xat.com/chat/room/35515023/ |
| Evolution; A fanfic by me =p | |
|---|---|
| Tweet Topic Started: Sep 27 2008, 08:02 PM (385 Views) | |
| Gouswer | Sep 27 2008, 08:02 PM Post #1 |
|
Administrator
![]()
|
Well, I got an idea for a fanfic while eating peanut M&M's and here it is. Read my comments after. Prologue “We are here, at the Institution For Evolution Research building, where two hours ago local authorities announced a lockdown and have not allowed any citizens to pass the human barrier they have made. Just shortly a S.W.A.T. team entered the massive building. I am trying to find out what is causing this chaos.” The Asian news woman said as she approached one of the policemen that were guarding the IFER building. The woman seemed rather excited; this would be the story of the decade. After all, nothing of greater excitement had happened in Allentown for some time. “Sir, can you tell us what happened here? Is it true that you have extraterrestrial life in there?” Aliens being captured and kept in the IFER building was one of the many theories that have been flying around in the last 2 hours, among them were a zombie invasion, and the creation of a black hole. “Please stay as far away from here as possible” The policeman said, he seemed like he didn’t want to be there, but was forced to. Just then the chief policemen arrived and said straight to the camera. “We have had a severe gas leak, I advise all of the citizens of Allentown to lock themselves in their home, and not to come out. Close and all the windows and lock all your doors until further notice.” With that the chief policeman directed the camera man and the news woman away from the building. The camera was pointed to the ground, showing nothing but the paved floor of the road, as the cameraman who was filming this was forcefully pushed out of the site. A scream was heard from the building. The cameraman ignored the policemen and turned his camera so that it pointed towards where the scream came from. All the policemen took aim at the building, as if expecting something terrible to pop out of it. Another cream was heard from it, and then something pounded against the steel barrier that was locking the building, making a loud screechy sound. More pounding was heard until a hole 4 ft in diameter was made by whoever was pounding. The inside of the building was too dark to see whatever caused it. The policemen wasted no time, and started firing away at whatever made the hole. Ten seconds passed by and the police were still firing, a red small ball of light was becoming visible through the hole. Out of nowhere the red ball became increasingly larger, and then expanded into a wave of red light that blew the steel door away from the wall. The force was so strong that the policemen were sent flying away from the blast. Smoke was the only thing that was visible, as the policemen screamed for help. Whatever was happening to them was not shown since the smoke was too thick and had now reached where the camera man was filming all of this. A black figure could now be seen through the smoke, it approached the camera and a huge brown arm was seen, it rose up and then came crashing down into whoever was holding the camera, making a gruesome crushing sound. The camera was dropped and it stood there, from then on it showed nothing but smoke, crawling policemen trying to escape, and the destroyed side of the IFER building. Soon after, the screen of the television in which the local residents were watching this showed nothing but white and black static. I would appreciate if you could find any grammatical mistakes and bring them to my attention =p. Also if you wanna be a character in it post here, with your details in the following order. Name,Age,Gender,Appereance I may ask for more of them if you become an important character in the story. This will be a rather SciFi fanfic, kind of horror movie like story. |
![]() |
|
| staraptormanic313 | Sep 27 2008, 09:36 PM Post #2 |
|
Boiling Rock Gym Leader
![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
|
Name:Koty Age:13 Apperance :does this mean like how i look or when i come in so Dirty Blonde hair long skater like hair kinda short |
![]() |
|
| plusletrainer | Sep 29 2008, 03:52 PM Post #3 |
|
Sparkster
![]()
|
is this a pokemon thing? |
![]() |
|
| Gouswer | Sep 29 2008, 04:44 PM Post #4 |
|
Administrator
![]()
|
Kind of, it will represent pokemon as the horrible heartless creatures they were meant to be =p. |
![]() |
|
| plusletrainer | Oct 1 2008, 03:16 PM Post #5 |
|
Sparkster
![]()
|
can i be a pokemon then? plz? |
![]() |
|
| Gouswer | Oct 1 2008, 06:15 PM Post #6 |
|
Administrator
![]()
|
I dont think any pokemon will have a major role except the main villain. You could be one of the characters in the story, as there will be many. |
![]() |
|
| plusletrainer | Oct 7 2008, 03:55 PM Post #7 |
|
Sparkster
![]()
|
will i have to be here? |
![]() |
|
| 1 user reading this topic (1 Guest and 0 Anonymous) | |
| « Previous Topic · FanFiction · Next Topic » |
| Track Topic · E-mail Topic |
2:02 PM Jul 11
|
Get your own Chat Box! Go Large!









![]](http://z3.ifrm.com/static/1/pip_r.png)
2:02 PM Jul 11