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| Plusle Minun War; Story for gouswer to critisize | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: Aug 11 2008, 10:05 PM (212 Views) | |
| plusletrainer | Aug 11 2008, 10:05 PM Post #1 |
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this is my first atemt at a story so don't exspect much. but actualy it's a rpg between me and seaer of pokefarm. Chapter one: intro there has for many years a war between a town of plusles and a town of minuns and thats where our story begins. there is a young plusle named sparky on the computer searching the gouswerboards forum hoping that somone will make an art forum..... ((thats all for now because it's geting late and i'm out of patience)) |
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| vowl123 | Aug 14 2008, 09:20 PM Post #2 |
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I was a mod for 10 mins Yay
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um can i criticize |
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| taylor | Aug 15 2008, 10:10 AM Post #3 |
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Is that it? You got to keep writeing
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| plusletrainer | Aug 15 2008, 07:06 PM Post #4 |
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Sparkster
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i know i should i think i'm going to continu it now |
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| taylor | Aug 16 2008, 04:51 PM Post #5 |
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Thats good i like the start of the story
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