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| JonasanHawaadoluvstwilight | Mar 20 2009, 09:19 PM Post #1 |
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僕 の 撫す。 撫す 撫す 撫す
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I DO NOT OWN ANY OF THESE CHARACTERS. THEY BELONG TO STEPHENIE MEYER. PLEASE ENJOY BELLA'S UNTOLD STORY OF WHAT HAPPENED AFTER BREAKING DAWN!!! ((I WOULD LIKE TO TAKE A SECOND AND SAY THANK YOU TO MY EDITOR KAELA!! Prologue I ran away, scared of being captured. I contemplated, dodging the tree roots, why are they were chasing me? They chased me from Italy all the way to the Olympic peninsula in Washington. They stopped briefly to feed, good thing I didn’t see that. Being a vegetarian vampire, seeing a normal vampire feeding on humans is rather disturbing, as well as something you do not want to see over again. I got ahead of them quick enough but the group they moved in were faster. Faster then a vampire with ten times their natural strength. They are only a day behind me now. I have tried to find help, but found no one. Until I felt something hit my head. Darkness surrounded me covering my extreme senses, all my normal human attributes enhanced by an unprecedented number. I struggled to be free of the encroaching shadows, slowly cutting me off from the world, clouding my thoughts, slowing down my movements. I yelled both verbally and mentally from the top of my lungs. “Please come help me!” before the darkness could swallow me whole. CHAPTER 1. NEW MEMBER I still didn’t think that bringing that lost vampire here was a good idea. Edward, my husband, heard his cry for help in his mind while we were taking care of our daughter Renesmee. Alice, my sister in law who is married to Jasper, another brother in law, saw him running and looking panicked. We couldn’t tell if he was a nice vampire who would leave us alone, or a vampire who could destroy us all. I was rather worried, what if he will hurt us? What if he’s part of the Volturi? Am I the only one here who’s upset about this? “Bella please be calm about this,” Edward tried to soothe me. “He has been unconscious for days. He needs our help. If he is evil, he can leave before any harm happens to the family. We are just doing what we can to help. I promise you that nothing will hurt you or Renesmee. I swear my soul on it.” I giggled, Edward swearing on his soul, he is serious about this. Edward found this vampire outside next to a nearby tree, unconscious. He brought him to his father, Carlisle, and his wife Esme. Carlisle gave him a check up and found out that he is in a coma. We couldn’t have told if he was already dead or just in a coma, since vampires have no heartbeat. He could have died then and there. I was just glad that the vampire was over at the mansion then my fairy tale cottage, where Edward and I lived with our daughter Renesmee. Alice pranced out of nowhere into Edward’s and mine cottage without knocking. “I didn’t really see anything about him, all I saw was that he was being chased,” She said skipping around the house. Edward nodded once, he then left to the big white house. I heard the door open to the main house and I knew it was Edward immediately. I saw Alice trying not to look guilty. She was shuffling her feet across the wooden floor and looking at the beehive fireplace. She must have been feeling guilty for helping the nameless vampire along with making Edward help. Alice turned around, away from my glare, to go and look in my closet to see what I have been wearing. She will be shocked when she sees that I threw out anything I would not wear like: the pink frilly dresses, the light blue satin blouses, and definitely the lacey, skimpy outfits that I would only wear on my honeymoon. I sat down in the big leather chair next to the fireplace, contemplating what was going to happen when the nameless vampire woke up. I heard Renesmee starting to toss in her sleep. I got up swiftly and ran to her room to see what was wrong. She was sleeping in her wrought iron bed with a gold and black plaid blanket on top of her. I put her hand to my face and saw that she was worried about the vampire in Carlisle‘s house. She was wondering why he was hurt, and if he was going to be okay. I growled quietly. Was I the only one who was worried that the person might hurt us?! I left her to sleep. I decided to go and see how the person was doing. Worrying was going to do me no good, I have to go and look for myself. I ran to the big white house that Carlisle and Esme with Alice and Jasper lived in, along with Emmett and Rosalie. I opened the door and saw Rosalie watching television. I came in and sat down beside her. “They are all in Carlisle’s study room with the nameless vampire. He is still on the couch unconscious,” Rosalie growled through her teeth. At least I wasn’t the only one who didn’t think this was a good idea. I walked upstairs feeling very insecure. What if the vampire woke up and already killed everybody? I doubt that, Rosalie would have heard that. The feelings in the room were stifling. I could feel the tension in the air pouring off Rosalie and myself. That was until I felt a wave of calmness flood over me and the entire room. “Jasper!” I yelled. I heard laughter coming from Carlisle’s study. I growled angrily finishing walking up the stairs and opening the door to Carlisle’s study. Everybody was around the unconscious vampire. I went around to see where Edward was and stood behind him. He was rather tall, maybe taller then Emmett, and he was rather oddly dressed. He was wearing black sneakers with white soles and red laces. His pants were tight and black. His shirt was a polo shirt, red and white striped. He wore a sweatshirt, all black with white interior, and one sleeve rolled up and one not. Around his neck was a necklace that was odd, because it looked like a Swastika but with a rectangular hole in the middle of it. His hair was rather long and a bright red that reminded me of Victoria. I shuddered at the thought. As I was done examining him Edward shook his head and sighed. “Nothing. There are still no thoughts in his head.” He sighed again, wrapping his hands around my waist and putting his chin on my head. I smiled, it felt nice for him to be near me. Carlisle left to go get the mail. He was back within forty-five seconds. “Hmm… apparently Tanya and her family have two new members. Jon and Sandra. They moved from Canada to Alaska. They are vegetarians, we need to go and see them sometime, or invite them here.” He said looking at a letter. Just then Edward gasped. We all looked at him, Edward gasped? Normally nothing surprises him. “He thought! He made a thought!” This time everyone gasped, even I did. Just then Edwards face went hard like he was thinking. “He went quiet again.” We all sighed. But something tickled me in the back of my head. That’s when Carlisle said what I was thinking. “Edward, when exactly did you hear him think of something?” Carlisle asked intrigued. “About the time you said Jon and Sandra,” He gasped again. “He thought again?” Carlisle questioned. “Yes, he did! He said ‘Help,’” Edward said frustrated. Everybody started wondering why the names Jon and Sandra made him think of something, whatever it was. “Hmm. His name must be something like Jonasan,” Esme murmured. Jon and Sandra. . . .wow, of all the names that are possible, those two were picked out of random. I felt happy that we could get his name, maybe now, when he woke up, he could leave. Several minutes later we heard a knock at the door. “Edward who’s at the door?” I asked. We weren’t expecting any company, besides who would come all the way to the Cullen house? Everybody was afraid of us. “Its just Jacob, here to see Renesmee,” He said, sighing. I knew he wasn’t that happy with our daughter being infatuated with a werewolf. Something then came across Edwards face. It was confusion. That was peculiarly odd, Edward is never confused. We all smelled something different in the air besides Jacob’s musk. We all ran, well most of us anyway, Alice had snuck into the house, probably changing all the clothes in my closet, and hopped her way down the stairs. Emmett jumped off from the second floor to the first. There was a tall blonde girl, maybe in her twenties, leaning against the wall with Jacob in the corner rocking back and forth, scared. Her hair had brown lowlights, and her eyes were a dark bronze, they looked like she was thirsty. . . vampire thirsty. Her face was slightly oval with a wide forehead, her lips slightly askew, one more angled then the other. Her hair was flat as a board and cut all the same length until she pulled out a black ribbon and tied the brown waterfall into a neat and tidy pony tail. “Excuse me girls, why are you in our house?” Carlisle asked, slightly annoyed. “So sorry of us to be rude,” the blonde one said in a soothing voice, she moved around; it looked like she had a second shadow with her, “I am Dani and this one here is Kate,” she stepped to the side to show the hidden short eighteen year old girl with the brown curly hair. She flipped it all to one side and stood up from her protective crouch. “Hi. . .” she spoke in a very hushed voice, it looked like she was frightened. “Nice to meet you Dani and Kate. Now if you would be so kind, could you please tell me what have you done to our friend in the corner?” Carlisle asked. “You have werewolf friends?” Dani asked, surprised. “Yes, now why does he looked frightened?” I heard Jacob whimpering over in the corner saying “don’t let her touch me. . .” “Umm. . .sorry that’s my fault. . .” Kate whispered holding tight to Dani’s arm. I could see Carlisle‘s thoughts right now, ‘these girls seem fascinating‘. It must have been because they were able to put a werewolf in the fetal position. Dani wore a dress with a lot of brown and black. Her shoes were a vibrant white, didn’t look dirty at all. Kate wore a dress that was light blue and dark green. Kate was the same height as me, with curly brown hair that curled every which way. Her face was circular, with her bottom lip slightly bigger then her upper lip. She seemed to be very nervous around my family. “What did you do?” Carlisle asked intrigued. He was getting too into this. . . “Umm well. . .” Kate came up from behind Dani’s shoulder and held her hand out. Carlisle came up, simply put one finger on her hand and was on the floor having a seizure. I heard Esme yell furiously while growling fiercely, dropping to her knees in front of Carlisle. I leaped at Dani and Kate but they moved out of the way and lifted Carlisle up, putting him on his feet. He was all better now. “What just happened?” I yelled at them wrathfully. “You see Kate’s power is the power to cause illusions, but she uses that power to heighten fear or chaos. She can create illusions so we think we are at a jungle right now. All your senses appear as you are in a jungle. Its kind of like a hologram. When people touch her she scares them so badly that they pass out or have a seizure. Your werewolf friend was only out for a second. He’s been like that for awhile,” Dani reasoned. I looked at Carlisle and he looked like he was okay. He just looked intrigued. “Okay, I guess you are off the hook for now, but you have to be careful. Also, if you ever touch any of my family again, I’m going to kill you.” I smiled, revealing my teeth gleaming in the light. They just smiled and waved their hand at me, I growled angrily. “Sorry but we were just looking for our friend. We were in Italy and some of our friends were arguing and he seemed to have gotten lost,” Dani explained. “He must of have gotten suffocated with the estrogen!” Emmett laughed boisterously. “Anyway,” Dani continued, “we looked all around for him but nothing. We couldn’t smell him, hear him, or even find any clues about where he had gone. Then we found his scent around this area, along with your clan, and we were wondering if you had found him. “His name is Jonasan Hawaado. About six foot six, six foot seven? Red hair that goes about half way down his back? When we arrived in Canada to search for him, we heard some rumors of a man with hair like fire being chased by men in dark gray coats, when we got close to Washington we could smell him from a mile away. His scent stopped around here.” We all looked at each other. We heard shuffling from behind us. We turned our heads to see somebody walking down the stairs. Edited by JonasanHawaadoluvstwilight, Mar 27 2009, 09:33 PM.
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| Moonphases | Mar 20 2009, 10:22 PM Post #2 |
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DONT PANIC
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It sees the light of day. .. finally. |
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| JonasanHawaadoluvstwilight | Mar 20 2009, 10:44 PM Post #3 |
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僕 の 撫す。 撫す 撫す 撫す
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well it hasnt been that long has it? ^^ |
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| AnnaMarie_Cullen | Mar 20 2009, 11:20 PM Post #4 |
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Ooga Booga?
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It's good Jon, I like it. But may I say a few things? I know it's been edited, but there's a few grammar and tensing mistakes. No biggie, those can be fixed. Also, you once state that my hair is down and straight, then a paragraph or 2 later you say it's all up in a ponytail.. |
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| Moonphases | Mar 20 2009, 11:34 PM Post #5 |
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Shit. How did I miss those!!!??? |
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| AnnaMarie_Cullen | Mar 20 2009, 11:42 PM Post #6 |
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Ooga Booga?
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Uuuh, stressing, rushing? |
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| JonasanHawaadoluvstwilight | Mar 20 2009, 11:46 PM Post #7 |
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僕 の 撫す。 撫す 撫す 撫す
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i should have said that you put it in a pony tail. i will fix soon. i also think that i need to discribe kate more... its okay kaela!! ^^ its nothing too big. |
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| alicecullenfuturevamp | Mar 21 2009, 12:00 AM Post #8 |
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Wow jon very good I loved i :D |
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| Moonphases | Mar 21 2009, 12:16 AM Post #9 |
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*headdesk* I went through it four times. And I STILL MISSED TEHM! |
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| AnnaMarie_Cullen | Mar 21 2009, 12:20 AM Post #10 |
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Ooga Booga?
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Yeah, but then Jon, how would you know it was all cut one length? It is good. Kaela, it's OH-KAY! It's a first draft! |
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