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| Eagletalons Story: 2 rings; My murder romance. | |
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| Gavin | Jan 23 2010, 12:20 PM Post #131 |
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Story of my school life. It's awesome that you have a character called Gavin. ![]() On a more serious note, I like this story. However, I wouldn't want to give feedback because I like the style of your writing and where athe story and all the characters are going just now, and I wouldn't wnt to make you start questioning it and trying to improve it. So unless you really want feedback, then I suggest that you just do what you think is right. |
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| blueliteningchic | Jan 23 2010, 03:38 PM Post #132 |
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lol poor Alex! |
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| + Eagletalon | Jan 23 2010, 04:40 PM Post #133 |
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"No one is born with wisdom, it must be lived." ~ Eagletalon
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Gavin: Haha! I really have no clue where I came up with the name Gavin. I love that name but I don't know if I got from you or what. Can you at least rate my story on a scale of 1-10 please? (I just want a little bit of feedback) Bluey: Hun? Why poor Alex? |
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| Gavin | Jan 23 2010, 07:40 PM Post #134 |
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I'd rate it as an 8/10 so far, which is very good for a story you've not fully developed or got really in to yet. |
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| + Flametail | Jan 23 2010, 08:31 PM Post #135 |
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LOL! This story really interesting! |
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| + Eagletalon | Jan 23 2010, 08:34 PM Post #136 |
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Why do you say that? |
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| + Flametail | Jan 23 2010, 08:36 PM Post #137 |
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Because of the whole murder thing. I get that it was Tyler, but i want to know why. I'm hooked on this story! I love these types of stories! And you're doing pretty good. |
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| Gavin | Jan 23 2010, 08:39 PM Post #138 |
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I got rid of certain posts that could spoil anything for your story, Eagletalon, I hope you don't mind. |
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| + Eagletalon | Jan 23 2010, 08:44 PM Post #139 |
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"No one is born with wisdom, it must be lived." ~ Eagletalon
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Thank you Gavin!!!! Your a life saver!!! I really don't want to give anything away. Thanks Flame |
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| + Flametail | Jan 23 2010, 08:45 PM Post #140 |
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Sure! And yea thanks for getting rid of that Gavin, and sorry we started it. |
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