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Eagletalons Story: 2 rings; My murder romance.
Topic Started: Jan 12 2010, 11:48 PM (2,668 Views)
Gavin
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“Hi Gavin. Forget you homework again?” She asked politely as if she hadn’t heard Mrs. Fran. “Yeah.” Gavin said nervously.

Story of my school life.

It's awesome that you have a character called Gavin. :D
On a more serious note, I like this story. However, I wouldn't want to give feedback because I like the style of your writing and where athe story and all the characters are going just now, and I wouldn't wnt to make you start questioning it and trying to improve it. So unless you really want feedback, then I suggest that you just do what you think is right.
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lol poor Alex!
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"No one is born with wisdom, it must be lived." ~ Eagletalon
Gavin: Haha! I really have no clue where I came up with the name Gavin. I love that name but I don't know if I got from you or what. Can you at least rate my story on a scale of 1-10 please? (I just want a little bit of feedback)

Bluey: Hun? Why poor Alex?
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Gavin
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I'd rate it as an 8/10 so far, which is very good for a story you've not fully developed or got really in to yet.
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LOL! This story really interesting!
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"No one is born with wisdom, it must be lived." ~ Eagletalon
Why do you say that?
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Because of the whole murder thing. I get that it was Tyler, but i want to know why. I'm hooked on this story! I love these types of stories! And you're doing pretty good.
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I got rid of certain posts that could spoil anything for your story, Eagletalon, I hope you don't mind.
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"No one is born with wisdom, it must be lived." ~ Eagletalon
Thank you Gavin!!!! Your a life saver!!! I really don't want to give anything away.

Thanks Flame
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Sure! And yea thanks for getting rid of that Gavin, and sorry we started it.
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