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Who do you think will die next?
Hillary 2 (50%)
Grace 1 (25%)
Brad 0 (0%)
Helen 0 (0%)
Someone who hasn't appeared yet. 1 (25%)
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Who is your favorite character so far?
Tyler 1 (25%)
Gavin 1 (25%)
Alex 1 (25%)
Hillary 0 (0%)
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Brad 1 (25%)
Helen 0 (0%)
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Eagletalons Story: 2 rings; My murder romance.
Topic Started: Jan 12 2010, 11:48 PM (2,661 Views)
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"No one is born with wisdom, it must be lived." ~ Eagletalon
NOTE: Cations for anyone under 13. This book at times can be descriptive and very detailed.

Chapter 1

Silence filled the air. A dim light hung in a cold room. It flickered slightly. A blond girl was in a steel chair below. She was unconscious, not yet aware of where she was. Her hands and legs were bound tightly with rope, while the rest of her was cocooned in duck tape to the chair.
A shadow appeared over her, huge and intimidating. Her eyes blinked as she began to wake from her once deep slumber. She looked at the shadow and tried to get away but only then did she realize she was trapped. The shadow just stood over her and watched her, as she struggled to break free. Her brown eyes filled with fear and tears. She finally realized, there was no way out.
Tears ran down her face, as her face turned red. The shadow got closer to her. A hand out stretched and wiped her tears away. It rubbed her face and bushed the hair that now covered her face away. The girl looked up at the shadow, her eyes begging to be let go, but the shadow paid no mind.
The hand moved away and the shadow moved to a metal door in the corner of the room. It opened silent but slammed shut, leaving an echo in the room.
A moment passed at the girl sat bound to the chair in the cold room. Then, another light appeared from a huge window in front of her. She looked up to see only the shadow behind the window, but a video camera above it also.
The shadow pushed a button and a crackle of a loud speaker filled the room where the girl began to tremble in fear. A long pause took place, with only the sound of the loud speaker was heard. Then a deep, hissing like voice was heard, “It is time for you to die.”
In fear and terror, the girl struggled again. She looked up at the window, her eyes begging for her life, but once again, the shadow paid no mind.
The other hand of the shadow lifted from its side. Slowly it moved towards another button as the first stayed on the speaker button. The girl pushed the tape off her mouth with her tongue and yelled for help but it was no use, the room was sound proof. Then, the button was pressed. The light in the room turned off and the girl continued to scream. Another button was pushed and the growling and barking of dogs was heard. It got louder, and louder till you only heard the noise of the dogs over the girl’s screams. Then the ripping of flesh was heard as dogs attacked the girl below. One finally high-pitched yell was heard. Snapping of bones was heard along the sounds of paws running throw puddles of blood.
The shadow lifted it finger from the speaker button and the noise cut off. It pressed on more button and the lights in the window cut off. Only the soft sound of foots steps were heard as the shadow walked off.
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ahh wow scary! LOL but really good too. Maybe add what she smelled for a iscription of the place. IDk.
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"No one is born with wisdom, it must be lived." ~ Eagletalon
I was thinking that to. I might add that. Thanks. I will post the 2nd chapter. But that is it for now.
Chapter 2

“Mom! Tyler is hogging the T.V!” Yelled a little boy, no more then 10 years old. His hair was brown and eyes blue with anger at the moment. “Tyler!” The boy’s mother could be heard from the kitchen. “Share the T.V with your brother!”
A boy rose from where he sat in a recliner. He looked to be 16 and had dark blond hair, brown eyes, and a strong upper body. When he stood up he looked as if he was five foot six inches, maybe a little taller.
“Why should I?! Gavin has his own T.V in his room!” Their mother came out of the kitchen. Her red hair in a bun and apron stained with sweat. “Don’t back talk me! Your brother is coming home tomorrow and I don’t want any of this back talking or fighting. You hear?” The boys looked at each other. Tyler just rolled his eyes and sat back down in the recliner. Gavin stuck his tongue out him, then turned to his mom, “I promise.”
His mother smiled and nodded at him. Then she turned to Tyler “As for you mister! Shape up! Get out from in front of that T.V and go clean your room!” Anger flooded Tyler’s eyes, “But Gavin hasn’t even cleaned his room yet!” His mother punched him in the mouth and then put her hand around his neck. “Now, do as your told. Gavin, come help me in the kitchen please.” She gave a glare to Tyler, let go of his neck and then stalked off to the kitchen, Gavin followed suit, making faces at Tyler as he left.
Tyler rubbed his mouth where his mother had hit him and sighed. He got back up and walked back to his room. He stopped and stared at the picture of him and his father on the wall. He looked away as a single tear ran down his cheek. Walking back to his room, he shut and locked his door.
In the kitchen, the aroma of cookies filled the air. Gavin looked to make sure his mom wasn’t looking and snatched one up, eating it in one bite. He licked his lips, satisfied with his sneakiness.
“Gavin, do you remember your brother? You were only six when he left with the army for Iran.” His mother said, pulling more cookies out of the oven. Gavin wiped his mouth of any possible cookie that could have stuck to his mouth, then turned to his mom. “Of coarse I remember Larry. How could I forget him. He is way better then stupid old Tyler!”
His mother just rolls her eyes but smiled with hidden pleasure. “He just has issues honey.” She said trying to hide her hate for her middle child. Gavin came over and looked her into her ice blue eyes. “But you always treat him badly. I always thought it was because he is bad.” His mom smile got bigger, “Yes, he is always bad but it is because he has issues.” She said, not wanting to admit why she treated him like that. Gavin tilled his head. “What issues? He seems fine, just bad.”
His mother opened her mouth to respond but then the doorbell rang. “Can you get that please sweetie?” Gavin forgot about his question and ran to the door. He opened it with a jolt of happiness. “Grandma!” he yelled giving the woman in the door way a hug. Her hair sliver and hazel eyes bright. She looked like she was in her mid 60s. She smiled and patted him on the head. “It is nice to see you to Gavin. Now, where is your mother? I want to have a word with her.” Gavin pulled her hand, “This way, in the kitchen! Come on! She is making cookies!” Gavin’s grandma laughed and followed him into the kitchen.
“Oh, its you. I thought you weren’t coming till tomorrow.” Said Gavin’s mother, not very happy at all. “Yes I know, but I decided to come up early. I knew you wouldn’t mind Helen dear. I just really wanted to see my grandchildren. Where is Tyler?” Helen held back her anger. She didn’t like her mother in law one bit, but ever since her husband had died six years ago, she always wanted to be around. “He is back cleaning his room Clara. I would prefer if you didn’t let him know you were here or he will never get it done.” Clara smiled. “All right. I can wait I guess. Have you cleaned your room already Gavin?”
Gavin had been over by the tray of cookies, trying to sneak another one, but his grandmother was to cleaver. “No. Mom said I don’t have to.” Clara pretended to be surprised. “Well that isn’t fair now is it? That Tyler has to clean his room but you don’t. I am sure your mother would agree, right Helen?” She said in an angered tone. Clara knew her daughter in law didn’t like her son Tyler. It was quiet hard not to see that. But she wouldn’t let her treat him bad when she was around. Helen sighed, knowing she wasn’t going to get away with it. “Yes, you are right Clara. Gavin, go clean your room as well.”
Gavin looked as if he had been hit with a ton of bricks. He yelled out into a tantrum, “But you said I didn’t have to! You said Tyler was bad so he had to! You never….” His mother put her hand over her young child’s mouth. “Don’t disobey me. Go clean your room or you will get no cookies.” Gavin’s blue eyes were once again angered but he knew not to back talk. He didn’t want to end up like Tyler. “Yes mother.” He said, and then stomped off.
“I see you still haven’t gotten his temper under control. Have you yet to get yours under control as well?” Helen turned to Clara, angered but her voice-remanded clam. “That is nothing for you to worry about. Now, the guest bedroom has yet to be set up but since you’re here now I am sure you would like to do it yourself. It’s the last door on the left when you go upstairs.” Helen said as she turned back to her cookies. Clara just smiled, “Yes. Thank you dear. If you need me I will be back in my room then.” Clara picked up the suitcases she brought with her and headed up stairs.

Meanwhile, Tyler had finished cleaning his room. He looked around and smiled, knowing his mother couldn’t possibly find a problem with it. He layed on his bed and grabbed his cell phone from his side table.
He quickly sent a text, “Hey, how r u?” He closed his phone and pulled a picture out from under his mattress. It was a girl with curly dark blond hair. Her green eyes shone brightly as well as her smile. He ran his hand down the picture and smiled. Flipping it he read the note at the bottom.
“I know this isn’t much but I wanted you to have a picture of me. I love you dearly as much as I hope you love me. Even if our parents don’t know about us and don’t want us together, I don’t care, I am not going to lose you over that.
Long live love,
Alex
He clinched the picture to his chest. “I do love you. More then you know.” Then he stuck the picture back under his mattress. Then his phone vibrated. He grabbed it quick and read his text, “Hey. i am good. how r u? wat r u doing?” He smiled at the thought that she was good. “I am well. i just finished cleaning my room. my big bro is coming home tomorrow and my mom is having a fit.” He sent the message and then got off his bed.
He turned his nightstand around and popped the back off. Inside where many velvet bags and a small black box. He grabbed a one of the velvet bags and dumped what was in it out on the floor. It was full of money. He counted out and sorted all the bills neatly. He sighed, “Four hundred eighty seven. Not enough yet.” He put the money back in the bag, put it back with the others and sealed his nightstand. As he pushed in back to the wall, his phone vibrated again.
He read the message, “Oh great. stay out of her way. i dont want u getting hurt again.” He looked in the mirror and could see there was going to be a nice burse on his mouth. He layed back on his bed, “2 late. she already punched me in the mouth. i will b fine, dont worry. if i am badly hurt i know who to come 2.” He smiled remembering how if he was badly hurt he could just go to her house. She had to sneak him in throw the window but she always healed his wounds, emotional or physical.
“I so wish I could tell you how I feel about you. I love you more then anyone or anything. I just can’t seem to get in out of my mouth.” Tyler sighed. What he said was true. He loved her, more then anyone could ever understand.
He jumped at the feeling of his phone vibrating. He looked at his message, “Yes, please do. i hate to c u hurt. i love you to much.” Tyler’s face got as bright as a light. “I know u do. i love u 2. did u ask ur dad if u can come to the movies friday with “ur friends” ?” He hated having to have Alex sneak around her dad like she did just to see him but she didn’t ever seem to mind. He didn’t care if he snuck around his mom. That’s what he had to do so he could live as a teen.
His grabbed his phone as it vibrated. “Yea, he said i could go. i cant wait. i want to see u now tho. i dont want to wait till 2morrow at skool.” Tyler got up and peered out his door. His mom was done baking cookies and was cooking dinner. By the smell he guessed pizza. “If u want u can come meet me at Walmart if u can. i think my mom is going to send me 2 the store.”
He throws his phone on his bed and went to the kitchen. Painfully he asked, “I finished cleaning my room mother. Is there anything else I can do for you?” His mom glared at him then went to the refrigerator. Whenever she couldn’t think of something for him to do she would send him to the store to pick up some random items. “We need milk and bread. Go get some. Your grandmother is already here and we need to make her happy.” Tyler nodded. “Yes mother.” He secretly hid his excitement. He loved it when his grandmother came, for his mom couldn’t lay a hand on him.
Walking back to his room he could hear his phone vibrate once again. He picked it up and read the message, “Ok. my dad needs eggs so i will met you at the store in bout 10 mins.” Tyler smiled, “Ok, c u then.” Quickly he grabbed his coat and keys to the car his dad had left him. He walked into the kitchen and the money was already set out on the counter for him. He grabbed it and made his way out the door.
He ran to the car and jumped in. As always, he loves seeing Alex. She always makes him feel alive and happy.

While Tyler left to see Alex, Gavin was back at home, cleaning his room. “I hate this! I wasn’t bad! Why do I have to clean my room! Tyler is the bad one, he should clean my room for me!” He hated when his grandma came. His mom always acted different. He had to do stuff he never had to do when she wasn’t around. Tyler never was considered bad when she was either. It made no sense to him! He finished cleaning his room, not doing a very good job, and ran back into the kitchen. He could smell pizza in the air and yelled, “Pizza! Yeah! Can I help?!” Helen smiled at her son’s willingness to help. “Sure. Go get the cheese out of the fridge.” Gavin ran to the fridge, grabbed the cheese and ran back to his mom. “Here! Now what can I do?!” His mom grabbed the cheese, “Help me dress this pizza.”

While Gavin helped his mom make pizza, Tyler is meeting Alex back at Walmart. A girl with curly blond hair and green eyes is looked around infront of the store. She is about five foot four inches and had an hour class figure. She kept looking for something but then she took out her phone. “Where r u? i am outside the store.” She sent the message then got absorbed by someone behind her. She bursted out in laughter, “There you are!” She said turning to see his dark brown eyes. Tyler smiled, “Lets go inside then shall we? He said letting her go. Alex smiled and took his hand, “We shall.”
They both laughed as they entered the store. They walked to the dairy section and got the eggs and milk, then they went to the bread and got it, never letting go of the others hand.
“Take the basket for a second please. My shoe is untied.” Tyler said handing Alex the basket. She took it from his hand but instead of Tyler tying his shoe, he ran off into the clothes department. “Hey! Where are you going?” Alex yelled laughing. Tyler turned around, “Catch me if you can!” Then he turned and kept running. Alex laughed harder and chased after him. She stopped in a cross way of clothes. “Where could have he gone?” She asked herself. Then two hands came out from the clothes rack behind her and pulled her in. She screamed but then realized it was Tyler who pulled her in. “You need to stop doing that before you give me a heart attack!” Alex said, pushing him to the side playfully.
Tyler smiled and wrapped his hand around her. She turned and his pushed his lips against hers. Their eyes closed, his hands at her side and hers around his neck. They kissed passionately, hands rubbing up and down each other. It was as if nothing else existed to them.
Then the sound of footsteps alarmed both of them. They looked around and realized where they were. Smiling at one another, they got out of the rack and went and checked out. “We have been gone for 30 minutes you know?” Said Alex as they checked out. Tyler looked at her, “Who cares. I don’t care if my mom yells at me. I will tell her there was an accident or something.” She smiled and hugged his arm. “I don’t either. I am just glad I got to see you.” Tyler paid the casher, grabbed the bags and hugged her back.
They exited the store and were about to head separate ways to their cars, but they just stopped dead. “I don’t want to leave you.” Alex said holding his hand tighter. Tyler got closer to her and gently rubbed her face. “I will see you tomorrow. Don’t worry.” He kissed her on the lips and then walked away. Alex waked the opposite way, her eye gleaming with love.
Edited by Eagletalon, Jan 13 2010, 12:10 AM.
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WOW! Long chapter but good! I feel bad for Tyler!
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Very cool! I love murder-romance mysteries.
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Yeah they are pretty cool.
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AMAZING!!! Keep writing!! I WANT MORE!!
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Yeah it is amazin!
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"No one is born with wisdom, it must be lived." ~ Eagletalon
Thanks, I take it everyone likes it then? Who can tell me what they think is going on and what they think might happen?


(That story is copywrite so not stealing it. Not that I think anyone would. )
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umm he's going to get in trouble??
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