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| Shufflin | Jul 28 2012, 05:52 PM Post #21 |
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1. Work on the legs more 2 tongue wouldn't be that short when hanging out of the mouth 3.The ears look more rabbit then wolf I'd say cut back on the size 4. I can tell you draw eyes a lot seeing as they are the cleanest but I'd still have the pupils a bit smaller they are spilling out of the eye a bit alright good luck |
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| wolfenflautist0994 | Jul 28 2012, 06:08 PM Post #22 |
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Thank you. I'll be sure to keep an eye out for those things. Finally some constructive criticism! |
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| iecjaculation | Jul 28 2012, 07:11 PM Post #23 |
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(o͜)ʖ ͜ o) what was that
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honestly there's so many things to improve on which is why no one's commenting on it. it's just extremely basic. but to give you some criticism, you have to tell us first what kind of direction you want to go with your drawings. do you want them to be more realistic or cartoonish? |
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| Noahs1xd | Jul 28 2012, 07:25 PM Post #24 |
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how hard is it to get through you skull that were not lieing LOL |
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| Shufflin | Jul 28 2012, 08:00 PM Post #25 |
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MF is being waaaaaaaay too nice to you, it isn't good and my suggestions wont make it any better. Few people can make works of art on paint and they have equipment to make shit like that good. |
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| GameBoii64 | Jul 28 2012, 09:21 PM Post #26 |
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THIS ESPECIALLY THE PART ABOUT MF BEING TOO NICE. we make me jackasses about it but at least we're fucking honest |
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| iecjaculation | Jul 28 2012, 11:53 PM Post #27 |
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(o͜)ʖ ͜ o) what was that
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Exactly, plus you've heard of white lies right. It's what they're honestly doing in regards to your art and music. |
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| wolfenflautist0994 | Jul 29 2012, 03:18 AM Post #28 |
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I highly doubt that, Ice. Yeah, I know that I'm not perfect with my art, but I've only been drawing these for about three months now. Cut me some slack here, although I do appreciate the constructive criticism. And Lefi helps me if she seems something wrong with my drawings (since I give her updates every now and then on whatever I'm working on). And, yes. She likes what I've done. As far as music goes, I think I've found myself around people who share the same interest as I do with this stuff. Lefi included. |
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| SticksAndBricks | Jul 29 2012, 04:12 AM Post #29 |
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Yeah, I have to agree. When whoever said she could be the next Jendo I juat facepalmed. They are definitely going to easy on you. I've definitely seen worse but yeah, it's nothing amazing. I'd say the best advice I could give would be what Zack said in his previous post. |
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| Baconboy | Jul 29 2012, 12:11 PM Post #30 |
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I recommend going here: http://www.iscribble.net/ go to random boards and practice with other people. It really helps. The interface is pretty nice too. Just messing around on Paint and photobucket won't get you anywhere. Try drawing the wolves from different angles instead. Practice and get the skeletal structure of the wolves to look better, just roughly draw it in circles and then draw the wolf out of that. |
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