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| +moe lolicon dog | Feb 8 2009, 03:46 PM Post #1 |
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rainy days don't get me down ☂
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Author: Ningen Type: One shot Rating: Higher teen for swearing About: A look inside Light's head the way he dies in the anime. Matsuda's shots brought me falling to the floor. Who's blood was that on the floor? Holy shit, that was my blood. Holy shit. As my blood and my dreams seeped out of me, I realized I could still escape. The adrenaline send the blood flowing out faster but it also gave me power. I scrambled out the door like a fucking animal. I walked and I knew Ryuk was watching, and everyone was laughing at Kira's demise. I fucking hated them. As I scrambled through where I had first started on my journey, with the death note new in my pocket, a student, the pain sears through my body, through my brain. Holy shit. This was me without my dreams. I was a goddamn animal. This was who I was before, who I have been all the way through. I am an animal. Or at least, was. I finally found something, and I dragged myself in, I collapsed on the stairs. My brain was still flashing. Misa was standing in front of me, shit did I want her naked inside then. L dies. My father dies. "Everyone dies". That's what I head once, on some stupid TV show. Why is that important to me? I suddenly feel tired. My brain is almost blank, but the sun shines through. One Two Three Four Five... I keep going to forty, and the pain doubles. I hoped to feel like the god I was. Instead, I felt like the animal I knew I was. ---- (crit loved! ^_o Actually I would really adore crit, I am attempting to get better at fanficcing.) |
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| *Lupin | Feb 8 2009, 03:49 PM Post #2 |
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Slytherin Pride
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Really powerful, NinNin. There were a few typos in there though. Watch those. ^^ Also I would probably add a little more description, you know? So the reader understands Light's thoughts and actions a bit more. But other than that, I think this is really great. You've got talent! ^^ |
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i feel it deep within it's just beneath the skin i must confess that i feel like a monster i hate what i've become the nightmare's just begun i must confess that i feel like a monster | |
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| *Mistytail | Feb 8 2009, 04:26 PM Post #3 |
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Resident Shrink and Chalupa King
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That was super-special-awesome. Crazy Light = <3
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| !ROWAN | Feb 9 2009, 10:55 AM Post #4 |
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nothing to say/nothing at all
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it was very real and like... genuine, Ninalin. probably because of all the swearing XD no, but seriously, I liked it a lot. ^__^ Light wants sexytimes as he dies... LMAO |
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and here i am, fighting fighting yes i'm fighting not to cry and that's another reason why i oughta hate you アメリカ x イギリス like i do oh like i do | |
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That was super-special-awesome.
Crazy Light = <3

11:17 AM Jul 11
