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| sedge | Oct 30 2010, 02:29 AM Post #1 |
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Sedgistan
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OK, well OMD unfortunately didn't reply to my email, so I'm going to have to presume he's not going to be returning any time soon ![]() This was his last version of Commend Naivetry: OMD's draft Original NS forum thread: http://forum.nationstates.net/viewtopic.php?f=24&t=41460 I've added in the "authored by" tag, but nothing else. I've had a quick read over it, but don't want to make any changes until tomorrow, as I'm extremely tired at the moment. I did see some Rule 4 violations (personal pronouns), and I'd possibly like to re-phrase a clause or two - and maybe add in one or two more (stuff like her repeal of Condemn Ninja Pirate awesome town). I'll get onto that tomorrow. I think I'll be bumping this up the list ahead of Commend Northern Chittowa, simply because its at a more advanced stage. I'd rather not submit until there's been a resolution after Commend The Skeleton Army, as I don't want to be seen as having too many resolutions up to vote in a row. Edited by sedge, Oct 30 2010, 03:11 PM.
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| sedge | Oct 30 2010, 03:20 PM Post #2 |
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Sedgistan
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Various things I intend to do to the proposal:
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| sedge | May 5 2011, 11:45 PM Post #3 |
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Sedgistan
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Not that we use this forum any more (might as well accept it's dead...), but I'll be taking this on again. Might even post a draft here before it debuts on the NS forums. |
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| [unibot] | May 20 2011, 03:39 AM Post #4 |
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Yellow Matter Custard
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Sounds good to me.
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