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Commend Northern Chittowa
Topic Started: Oct 16 2010, 05:21 PM (709 Views)
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Won't be doing anything with this until late January at the earliest, I think.
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Dec 18 2010, 10:02 PM
I just wanted to get something down, to encourage myself to put some proper effort into it.
Hasn't really worked so far. I'm still intending to finish & submit this, but I can't say when. I'm kind of short on inspiration on how to improve it (and I know it needs a lot of work). I've got another proposal I'm working on too which I think I'll finish/submit first. After that, I'll try and get this sorted.
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Hhm... whenever I'm short of inspiration, I masturbate in public and eat lots of ice cream. It never helps, but I'm sure you'll think of something. Joking... but I'm curious as to what this second project is about.
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I'll probably post it here soon - it's a commendation of a nation, just waiting until I've got something written before I get around to posting.
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Updated draft:

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The World Assembly,

Aware that Northern Chittowa has been a key participant in Global Right Alliance, administrating their forums, and helping to keep the region stable, secure and active, despite the argumentative nature of its residents,

Recalling that Northern Chittowa was one of the founder nations of the Founderless Regions Alliance, and later served as Arch Chancellor of the alliance for 3 terms, comprising a total of 9 months, also holding several other governmental positions,

Believing that through these actions, Northern Chittowa has contributed significantly to the protection of the sovereignty of founderless regions against the threat of invasion,

Recognising that Northern Chittowa was a leading member of Lazarus for a number of years, serving as delegate for five months in June 2008,

Applauding the fact that the nominee magnanimously put the interests of the region above prestige by stepping down as delegate upon realising that the their presence as delegate was leading to the region being targeted be invaders,

Noting that Northern Chittowa is one of a few 'defender' orientated nations that has gained the respect of invaders across Nationtates, as a result of Northern Chittowa's honourable and diplomatic behaviour,

Asserting that those nations that contribute to NationStates as significantly as Northern Chittowa has, whilst maintaining the respect of their peers, should be Commended,

Hereby Commends Northern Chittowa.
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Another re-draft. This is one of the more general proposals I've written - it doesn't deal so much with specifics.

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The World Assembly,

Aware that Northern Chittowa has been a key participant in the Global Right Alliance, administrating their forums, and helping to keep the region stable, secure and active, despite the combative nature of its residents,

Recalling that Northern Chittowa was one of the founder nations of the Founderless Regions Alliance, later serving as Arch Chancellor of the alliance for 3 terms, comprising a total of 9 months, and also holding several other governmental positions,

Believing that Northern Chittowa has made a significant contribution to protecting the sovereignty of founderless regions through the aforementioned actions,

Recognising that Northern Chittowa was a leading member of Lazarus for a number of years, serving as delegate for five months until June 2008,

Applauding the nominee's actions in magnanimously putting the interests of the region above prestige, by stepping down as delegate upon realising that their presence as delegate was leading to the region being targeted by invaders,

Noting that Northern Chittowa's honourable and diplomatic behaviour is acknowledged even by invaders,

Asserting that those nations that contribute to NationStates as significantly as Northern Chittowa has, whilst maintaining the respect of their peers, should be Commended,

Hereby Commends Northern Chittowa.
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Need to add:

  • Organising defender awards (been running for 5 years, brought community together etc.)
  • Achievements as AC of FRA - revival after relative failure of Falc's leadership (back from the brink), increased organisation/professionalism after BKB's leadership, also activity etc.)
  • Achievements in GRA - GRADF, re-founding etc.
Edited by sedge, Mar 11 2011, 02:29 PM.
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The World Assembly,

Aware that Northern Chittowa has been a key member of the Global Right Alliance, responsibly administrating their forums, and helping to keep the region stable, secure and active, despite the combative nature of its residents,

Recognising Northern Chittowa as an important participant in the Founderless Regions Alliance (FRA), an organisation dedicated to the protection and stabilisation of founderless regions across NationStates, through such actions as:
• Founding the alliance alongside Big Killer Baby and The Merlion,
• Serving as Arch Chancellor of the alliance for 3 terms, comprising a total of 9 months, helping to professionalise the organisation, as well as rescuing it from the brink of death after the failure of Falconias's term as Arch Chancellor,
• Participating in the FRA Rangers, the alliance's military, for over 4 years,

Believing that Northern Chittowa has made a significant contribution to protecting the sovereignty of founderless regions through the aforementioned actions,

Observing that Northern Chittowa established the 'Defender Awards' in 2006, a successful annual awards system that has now been running for 5 years, and has helped to unite the defender community,

Recalling that Northern Chittowa was a leading member of Lazarus for a number of years, holding a number of governmental positions, and serving as delegate for five months until June 2008,

Applauding the nominee's actions in magnanimously putting the interests of the region above prestige, by stepping down as delegate upon realising that their presence as delegate was leading to the region being targeted by invaders,

Noting that Northern Chittowa's honourable and diplomatic behaviour is acknowledged even by invaders,

Asserting that those nations that contribute to NationStates as significantly as Northern Chittowa has, whilst maintaining the respect of their peers, should be Commended,

Hereby Commends Northern Chittowa.
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