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Crazed Curmudgeon
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The irony is killing me.
Let's begin, shall we? Below is the draft that Firstaria left off on exactly as it was before he CTE'd and failed to submit it. First things first - he spelled independent wrong.
I see I'm going to have to add a "co-authored and edited by" tag for myself by the end of this.
Commend 10000 Islands Description: The Security Council, a indipendent organ of the World Assembly,
RECOGNIZING the region 10000 Islands as a pioneer of Nationstates, being one of the first to create an off-site forum, adopt a Constitution, introduce a regional economy and establish a regional currency for role-play in 2003, thereby pushing the boundaries of game play and setting the conventions for many regions that come after;
RECOGNIZING the fact that 10000 Islands has managed to accomplish the difficult task of remaining active and maintaining a population of over 200 nations for six years;
ACKNOWLEDGING the existence of TITO, the Ten thousand Islands Treaty Organization, a defender army based in 10000 Islands;
APPLAUDING the region of which TITO is based out of, 10000 Islands, for initiating over 1000 successful defensive interventions (through the mobilization of TITO-involved WA nations) to protect hundreds of regions from raider invasion:
AWARE that TITO keeps the World Assembly from being overwhelmed with liberation requests, as their goal of "seek[ing] to live in peace with all regions in NationStates, but [refusing to] back down to the those that wish to impose their will on innocent regions" shares its fundamental principles with the Security Council's "[dedication] to the dissemination of inter-regional peace and goodwill, via force if necessary."
NOTING that 10000 Islands was the very first region that was commended, but the commendation was withdrawn because it was poorly written;
BELIEVING that these contributions go far beyond what can normally be expected from a region, and are hence worthy of World Assembly comendation;
HEREBY commends 10000 Islands.
Below is a version which I will be editing in order to remove awkwardness and fix wordings that violate the terms of R4. Suggestions are welcome, duh.
I'm a little surprised at how R4-friendly the original resolution was. Way to go me and my clever little ways of wording things.
Commend 10000 Islands - Edits Description:
The World Assembly Security Council,
RECOGNIZING the region 10000 Islands as a pioneer of what are now vastly used components of regional government and organization, being one of the first regions to: • create its own private forum, • design a constitution for the nations within the region to obey in order to better unify them and better organize regional activity, • introduce a regional economy, • and establish a regional currency, thereby pushing the boundaries of the seemingly limited world of NationStates and setting numerous conventions for many regions that formed later;
ADMIRING the fact that 10000 Islands has managed to accomplish the difficult task of remaining active and maintaining a population of over 200 nations for seven years,
ACKNOWLEDGING the existence of TITO, the Ten Thousand Islands Treaty Organization, a defender army based out of 10000 Islands,
APPLAUDING TITO's home region, 10000 Islands, for initiating over 1200 successful defensive interventions (through the mobilization of TITO-involved WA nations) to protect hundreds of regions from raider invasion,
AWARE that TITO also keeps the World Assembly from being overwhelmed with liberation requests, as their goal of "seek[ing] to live in peace with all regions in NationStates, but [refusing to] back down to those that wish to impose their will on innocent regions" shares the fundamental principles of the World Assembly Security Council, a body "dedicated to the dissemination of inter-regional peace and goodwill, via force if necessary."
NOTING that 10000 Islands was, in fact the very first region to be commended, however the original commendation of 10kI was later repealed because it was poorly written,
BELIEVING that the many contributions of 10kI to the world of NationStates go far beyond what can normally be expected of a single region, and are hence worthy of World Assembly comendation,
HEREBY commends 10000 Islands.
Authored by Firstaria, Co-authored and later edited by A mean old man.
And here is an edited version minus all the annoying red text that shows you what was edited.
Commend 10000 Islands - AMOM Description:
The World Assembly Security Council,
RECOGNIZING the region 10000 Islands as a pioneer of what are now vastly used components of regional government and organization, being one of the first regions to: • create its own private forum, • design a constitution for the nations within the region to obey in order to better unify them and better organize regional activity, • introduce a regional economy, • and establish a regional currency, thereby pushing the boundaries of the seemingly limited world of NationStates and setting numerous conventions for many regions that formed later;
ADMIRING the fact that 10000 Islands has managed to accomplish the difficult task of remaining active and maintaining a population of over 200 nations for seven years,
ACKNOWLEDGING the existence of TITO, the Ten Thousand Islands Treaty Organization, a defender army based out of 10000 Islands,
APPLAUDING TITO's home region, 10000 Islands, for initiating over 1200 successful defensive interventions (through the mobilization of TITO-involved WA nations) to protect hundreds of regions from raider invasion,
AWARE that TITO also keeps the World Assembly from being overwhelmed with liberation requests, as their goal of "seek[ing] to live in peace with all regions in NationStates, but [refusing to] back down to those that wish to impose their will on innocent regions" shares the fundamental principles of the World Assembly Security Council, a body "dedicated to the dissemination of inter-regional peace and goodwill, via force if necessary."
NOTING that 10000 Islands was, in fact the very first region to be commended, however the original commendation of 10kI was later repealed because it was poorly written,
BELIEVING that the many contributions of 10kI to the world of NationStates go far beyond what can normally be expected of a single region, and are hence worthy of World Assembly comendation,
HEREBY commends 10000 Islands.
Authored by Firstaria, Co-authored and later edited by A mean old man.
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