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Commend 10kI; AMOM Picks up after Firstaria
Topic Started: Aug 23 2010, 12:18 AM (293 Views)
A mean old man
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The irony is killing me.

Let's begin, shall we? Below is the draft that Firstaria left off on exactly as it was before he CTE'd and failed to submit it. First things first - he spelled independent wrong.

I see I'm going to have to add a "co-authored and edited by" tag for myself by the end of this.



Commend 10000 Islands




Below is a version which I will be editing in order to remove awkwardness and fix wordings that violate the terms of R4. Suggestions are welcome, duh.

I'm a little surprised at how R4-friendly the original resolution was. Way to go me and my clever little ways of wording things.



Commend 10000 Islands - Edits




And here is an edited version minus all the annoying red text that shows you what was edited.



Commend 10000 Islands - AMOM




Edited by A mean old man, Aug 23 2010, 04:00 AM.
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Message's purpose served.
Edited by A mean old man, Sep 14 2010, 09:23 PM.
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